Nibir TS-When they will meet..

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Hiii all its Neha... (ab to mujhw Jan hi gye ho sab 😆 )
I m currently writing
nibir SS - when the truth came in open
(now Kismat connection , fitoor , forgot me not and tu jaane na also)

but couldnot stop my self from writing this one..(likhke saadiyan ho gyi h I think 🤣 nauc on air tha tabi likhi thi) ..

Basically its not a story or OS ... Its just a scene which i imagined...
And i thought to share with u all...
Story background:
Ok so as u all know the current track of show ..
Kabir in Jail..
And Nisha will be discharged soon.. She hav no proof, no clues, nothing... We don't know how she prove Kabir innocent.. Wat will happen next?? Wat will cousins plan?? So much tension yar.. So forgetting all that i just imagined that
WHAT WILL BE THE SCENE WHEN THEY SEE EACHOTHER... WHEN THEY MEET...
So tell me u wanna know wats in my mind??
Need ur permission guys...
Do i share???Edited by RoshniVdian786 - 7 years ago

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Posted: 7 years ago
Part 1


Everything sorted...
Kabir got freed from jail..
Nisha couldn't stop herself and ran to meet him...
Nibir in front of each other...
When Nisha saw him she felt her world was completed now..
Her happiness hav no bounds but seeing him like that she felt someone stabbed in her heart so many times..
Police hav beaten him so badly...
Tear rolled out her eye unknowingly!!
Same for Kabir ..
He also felt so good to see his Nisha in front of him...
He hav no regret that he decided to listened to sumit & surrendered to police taking all blame on himself, so that sumit donate blood to her
Nisha was fine now..
He hav smile on his face as well as tear in his eyes... Happy tears..
Nisha stepped ahead to him...
Kabir also moved towards her...
Nisha was looking at him with teary eyed
Ho.. sun saathiya maahiya
Barsa de ishqa ki syahiyaan
Rang jaaun, rang rang jaaun ri, haari main
she was crying...
Tujhpe main jhar jhar jhar jaaun
Hoon piya bas teri main
Kabir wiped off her tears..
Ho chhu le toh khari main
(Toh khari main khari main...)
Ho.. sun saathiya maahiya
Barsa de ishqa ki syahiyaan...

They share an eyelock...
Nisha forwarded her hand touched the wound on his face...
"Kabir Tu thik hai?" she asked with lots of concern..
Kabir smiled & said "main to thik Hu... Tu kaisi hai..?? Wifey..." to lighten up the situation..
Nisha starred at him for a while, with so much love and concern in her eyes.. and Suddenly she slapped him ... Leaving him shocked
"Nisha...?" he asked confused
"Tu samajhta kya hai khud ko??bahut shokh hai tuje hero banne ka??han?" Nisha's love & concern changed into anger now...
She was fuming in anger..
But he can feel the pain behind this anger.. How helpless she felt when she woke up found him in jail,..
So he did not reacted and stood there quite...
"Tujhe kya zarurat thi ye sab karne ki?? Kya soch kar sara ilzam tune apne sar pe le liya??bol?uss Sumit ke agey kaise juk gaya tu???
It was so clear in her eyes that Wo Kabir is halat ka zimmedar khud ko samajh rahi thi..
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Posted: 7 years ago
part 2


Nisha was hell angry..
Kabir took her hand & hold it within his hands and said "Nisha.. Just calm down yar plzzz.. And maine ye sab koi hero vero banne ke liye nahi kiya ok!! "
He put his palm on her cheeks "maine ye sab tere liye kiya...!"
He said looking into her eyes... She was again about to cry which Kabir noticed...
"Actually no... Maine ye tere liye nahi apne liye kiya hai.. Bcoz of my selfish reason,.. Kyunki main na tujhe kabhi takleef me nahi dekh sakta!!" he said removing his hand from her cheek & again holding her hand... And smiled..
"Achcha mr selfish ..." Nisha smiled back..
"phir bhi tujhe uss ghatiya Sumit se har nahi manni chahiye thi!! I hate u for this!!" saying that she hit on his chest with her other hand
"Ouch Nisha... Kya kar rahi hai..!" Kabir shouted in pain as police has beaten him badly
"I.. I m sorry Kabir.. Wo me... Tu thik hai?" She asked with guilt & concern
Kabir looked at for a while & then laughed seeing her expressions .. As he was pretending to be hurt by her hit..
Nisha understood & again got angry.. "Kabir Tu..."
"Tu kitna bada k hai na.." she gave him a disgusted look
"Aur Tu mere k se kitni j hai na?" he teased her..
Nisha looked away so as Kabir & after sometime both looked at each other & laughed together..
They said these words after such long time... That's why they just can't stop laughing..
They didn't realized it but while laughing they came so close to each other... Kabir's hands were on her waist & Nisha was grabbing his shirt with her both hands.. They were just few inches apart... As soon as the laughing session got over they realized it... They were just lost in each other... they hugged each other as tightly as they can...
Main ret si, boond ka zariya tu
Paa ke tujhe bheeg jaaun re
Main ret si, boond ka zariya tu
Paa ke tujhe bheeg jaaun ri

After long hug they broke it Kabir cupped her face & said... "u hav no idea Nisha jab Tu meri ankhon ke samne building se giri Thi na tab mujhe pr kya beet rahi thi.. Main chah kar bhi kuch nahi kar paya... " a drop of tear rolled down his cheek ..
Nisha couldn't control & hugged him again..
Tar jaaun tar tar jaaun
Dariya ye tar jaaun jee
Ishq ye paake main tera
Nikhar jaaun ri...

While hugging him she said
"aur tujhe pata hai jab hosh ane pe mujhe ye pata chala ke tu jail me hai , meri to jaan hi nikal gayi thi!! Mujhe na to kuch suj raha tha na hi kuch samajh aa raha tha .. Bas mujhe itna pata tha tujhe kaise bhi karke yahan se nikalna hai!!"
Kabir grabbed her more tight...
Piya bas teri main
Ho.. chhu le toh khari main
toh khari main khari main...

"Par wo Sumit..."
Nisha said breaking the hug but Kabir cut it off saying
"Stop it Nisha.. Kya sumit ke naam ka jap kar rahi hai...? Doctor ne kaha Tha ke tujhe urgently blood chadana padega , shehar ke saare blood bank me check karliya par kahin bhi tera blood grp available nahi tha aur aise me uss Sumit ne mujhe samne se offer diya to main kaise inkar kar deta han???"
"Offer?? Meri jaan bachane ke badle apni zindaggi barbad karne ko tu offer keh raha hai???"
"Han.. Kyuki uss waqt mere liye sab zyada important tujhe bachana tha... Aur mujhe jo thik laga maine wo kiya!! Mera chhod agar tu meri jagah hoti to kya karti?? bol?? Mujhe uss halat me chhod ke tu apni life & career ke bare me sochti??han??bol Nisha??"
Nisha stand there quite..
"Nahi hai na koi jawaab tere pas bhi?? Kyunki tu bhi wahi karti jo maine kiya...!! To ab over react karna bandh kar plzz"
"Haan haan thik hai... Nai bolungi dubara kuch bhi iss bare me.."
"Thats better... Wifey.." Kabir winked at her..
"Aur waise bhi yar , mujhe pura yakeen tha tu mujhe bachane zaroor ayegi..."
"Agar nahi ati toh??"
"impossible... Ho hi nahi sakta tha... Meri Nisha meri help karne na aye..."
That word... Its was echoing in her ears... "Meri Nisha.." Kabir just said that... Nisha thought... She was feeling so good to hear that... She was just staring at him Kabir smiling...
Kabir : "Nisha?? Hello?? Kahan kahan kho gayi??"
Nisha: "aa ,, nahi.. Kuch nai.. Matlab kahin nahi ..."
Nisha was feeling a lil awkward & was unable to look at him & reply so she down her gaze...
Kabir was looking at her smiling...
In few moments Nisha collected some courage to look at him & speak up..
"Itna bharosa Tha tujhe mujhpe??"
"Hmm.. Khud se bhi zyada!!"
Ho.. sun saathiya maahiya
Barsa de ishqa ki syahiyaan

*Nibir eyelock*
Their eyelock broke with a voice ..
"chalo bachcho ghar nahi Jana kya??"
They looked at the person and yes it was Ramesh...
Nibir along with Ramesh came out from police station and went to gangwal house...
----xxx----THE END----xxx----
so how was it??? Plzz like & leave ur comments... Edited by RoshniVdian786 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Congrats for new story 
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Waiting for story to be continued..
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Originally posted by: heemasomani

Congrats for new story 


Ya new story ðŸ˜†
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Originally posted by: Anmol333

Waiting for story to be continued..


Will update it tomorrow ðŸ˜­ðŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: RoshniVdian786


Will update it tomorrow ðŸ˜­ðŸ˜ƒ


Y are you crying..
And I hope ye complete ho jaye ðŸ˜›
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Anmol333


Y are you crying..
And I hope ye complete ho jaye ðŸ˜›


Ya complete hai😭😭😭
Iska b thread blocked hua tha to I made new again ðŸ¥±
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Posted: 7 years ago
Crying coz I m not feeling good to see ppl congratulating ne for new story n tum to I guess pichle saal forum me active nai thi
Jab I hav wrote it last yr and now I hav new thread for it again