Just awesome dear.. Their fights and then their convo..everything so good.. beautiful dear.. 👏 Thnx for pm dear.. Waiting for more... 😛 Edited by _Eternity_ - 7 years ago
Res 😛 ---------- Unress It was so cute ❤️ Shravan behaving like a jerk , their fights , then back to friendship Everything is beautifully penned !! Loved it!! Keep writing!! Thanks for the pm 😃 Edited by sapphire3 - 7 years ago
Reshhh 🤣 unresshhh 🤣 Another lovely piece by you And MA it became my favourite writeup on shraman loved the way u described the way parents' doomed relationship affect their kids and then how sumo's pure friendship was helping him to come out of his past That lily scene was hilarious rocky became bandar in shraman cat fight 🤣 Sometimes pure friendship is much soothing than love In your story there was no romance between the leads but there was pure friendship which was still fresh bw them even after their constant quarrels that put an essence to your story for me Keep up the good work Do write more Thanks for the pm Edited by 0Bella0 - 7 years ago
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