Shraman OS : COMPLETE
Hello peeps, couldn't stay quiet after seeing the heavy amount of post marriage os and ss on the forum and ritu's one actually cracked me up so here I am presenting the way I want shraman to make their way to a happy married couple leaving their ego behind.
It goes like this,
suman
It was exactly an hour after MISS.suman TIWARI had bcum MRS.suman SHRAVAN MALHOTRA she had practically counted on seconds after the marriage registrant had announced her and shravan as wedded husband and wife. When she reached her house to pack up stuff she needed in her sasural after the deafeningly silent car ride with shravan in his car she could only smile at how scenarios had changed once there was a sumo whose mouth never agreed to stop in front of shravan and now was suman who was tongue tied infront of the very indifferent yet very unfamiliar shravan.
Mamiji and masi helped her pack and prepared for her vidaai rasam. She for the last time tuk out her memory box, one of the sweetest and the most precious things she owned and luked at one of her photos with shravan (the one that was clicked in the car showing sumo smiling holding the steering wheel of her car after shravan had repaired it)she realized how wide she was smiling ,she knew that shravan had always brought up a smile on her face probably earlier bcoz now he finds excuses to hurt her...but little did she know the more he hurt her he had involuntarily hurt himself. She was brought back into sense when manju mami called out her name she kept the frame inside and closed the box hurriedly and luked at herself in the mirror the kohl in her eyes was smudged bcoz of the warm liquid that had flown out of her eyes without her consent but she knew they never listened to her ,she quickly washed her face, tuk a nice peach golden anarkali from her wardrobe and got ready bcoz she didn't want to make any more fuss about her not agreeing to the marriage willingly and however the marriage would have happened she was the BRIDE for the day. She came out of her rum looking ravishing and with the box and called out for daboo but he was nowhere to be seen in the hall so she went outside in the verandah where shravan was discussing something with pushkar who had dropped in Tiwari killa after getting to know about the newlywed couple ,after glancing at her he tried hard to luk away but found himself incapable of it, she didn't pay heed to him and she again voiced out for daboo then he came from outside.
Sumo twisted his ear and asked :kahan tha tu kitni der se dhundh rahi hun
Daboo: are didi chodo na bahar seema ke saath khel raha tha
Sumo: tera best friend to Rahul that to ye seema kaun he?
Daboo was really blushing crimson red and the sight made all the three break into laughter.hearing their laughs daboo felt embarrassed and spoke in one go
:di voh shravan bhai..sorry jiju ne kaha than a ki school main koi accha friend banao fir mujhe school bahut accha lagega seema vohi dost hai, meri BEST FRIEND
At this only pushkar laughed as shraman were too busy luking at eachother realizing how they were so close in their schooltime and now when they were wedded they felt so apart both of them had their eyes brimmed with tears but sumo gathered the courage to blink then away. they both were so lost in eachother that they didn't observe pushkar and daboo were staring at them, they were intensely smilling at how the couple had drifted off to their own bubble and both of them not wanting to explode it started their way to the hall when sumo called daboo and cornered him.
Daboo: kal ye box preeta ko de dena aur tab tak kisi ko bhi ye box mat dikhana kisi ko bhi nhin and raised her index finger in warning
Daboo nodded accepting the warning and started ascending steps towards his room and sumo smiled and walked to the kitchen.
Shravan who had been keen in knowing wat was the conversation btvn d sister-brother duo rushed to daboo at sat on his knees so that his height does not affect their talk.
Shravan: Daboo isme kya hai (pointing towards the box)
Daboo shrugged his shoulders and gave him a I don't know' luk
Shravan : to thik hai ye aap mujhe de do main khud dekh lunga(and he lifted his hand positioning them take it from him)
Daboo backed off remembering sumo's warning :nhin jiju di ne bola hai ki ye main sirf preeta didi ko dun aur kisi ko nhin
Shravan was like yeh ladki sabko apne jaisa ziddi banakar rakha hai':lekin main to aapka jiju hun na aap mujhe to de sakte ho, main jaake sumo se puch leta hun
Saying this he started to stand up, he knew he cannot convince sumo so he tried his best with daboo as he turned around he hoped daboo called him back and his face brightened when he did.
Daboo: ruko bh..jiju aap lelo
And shravan was head on heels as he had defeated sumo for once.
Shravan: thanku lekin sumo ko mat batana (and he pinched daboo's plummy cheek)
Daboo luked confused as to why was shravan so happy: ok
And he walked his rum giving shravan a yeh dono kabhi nhin sudhrenge' luk handing over sumo's second most prized possession to whom the first belonged to, her heart
Shravan quickly kept the box in the storage space at the back of the car with the biggest bag he had ever seen sumo's bag and went back to the house where the vidaai ceremony had already taken place and sumo was in tears he stood by her side and held her by her shoulders and squeezed them a bit assuring her that he is there for her and sumo luked at him and she found a trace of her old shravan in his eyes, the shravan who had once promised her that she will be alright till the day he is wid her. he made her sit in the car and closed the gate for her and sat on his seat and kept his hand on hers wid a smile and sumo gave him a smile in return a small but genuine smile.
After her grahpravesh she went into shravans rum where she had visited several time but today was a different feeling she had a different role to play in his life now SHE WAS HIS WIFE IT GAVE HER FEELS. Shravan had left saying he had some important work actually he wanted to inspect the items in the box bcoz shravan found pleasure in doing wat sumo says he shouldn't.
This made suman sad but she pacified herself by saying sumo tu use pyaar karti hai voh tujhse nahin'.
Shravan went into his cabin with the box along with a few pairs of orbs which were of his employees wondering wats in the box and he was no different. He closed the door and started to unwrap the things in the box first was the frame (same which sumo held in her hand) and then were a few photos of THEM some that they clicked in their childhood and some were the recent ones he couldn't help it but smile at whom he thought didn't value any relation kept everything, everything related to them so carefully. He was content on knowing that even if sumo didn't value his love, she definitely valued their friendship as much as he did. Then there were a pile of letter tied together with a ribbon he untied the knot and started reading the first one (it was the one in which sumo had confessed her love for him) his mischievous smile turned into a straight face as two or more tears escaped his eyes
:sumo ..tum..mujhse...kabse..kitna bataya nhi (he stammered as he felt happiness that sumo who he loved from all his heart also loved him but was sad that she didn't think of him to be capable of her love)
He tuk the next one and it was the one in which she confessed she pained she was after ignoring him (this is my modification) and ramnath being the reason for it.
He was broken once again
:Sumo kitna dard kitni hurt sehen ki hai tumne ur main tumse puchne ki jagah tumhain aur hurt kiya
He had fallen steep low in his own eyes he thought "y didn't he confront sumo he just broke their friendship without even knowing the reason behind her behavior"
He was feeling choked and to get out of the feeling he opened the first 2 buttons of his shirt, tousled his hair and aimlessly headed to his house and ignoring everyone in the hall he headed for his room to find his only solace sumo.
He entered the room to find sumo arranging the pillows and tiding up the room she didn't even stir at the sound of the door bcoz she knew it was shravan ,these days she is hyperaware of his presence, it was only when he called out her name with a voice which was pleading for support. She turned around to find him in the same state as she saw him when he got to know about ramnath's plane crash. Her expression changed from a plain face to a distressed one, her heart clenched at seeing the luv of her life in the state he was, she was happy that shravan still trusted only her to tell his problems even after so much she reached out to him and kept her hand on his cheek and cupped his face and asked in a comforting tone
: Kya hua shrvan kisi ne kuch kaha tumhe
Shravan for the first time since he entered the rum directly luked into her eyes
:kuch kaha hi to nhi kisi ne sumo, kisi ne bhi nhi and with this he fell down on his bed with a thud and stared at nothingness
:kisi ne kuch kaha hi to nhi kisi ne bhi tumne bhi nhi tumne bhi mujhe iss kabil nhi samjha ki tum mujhe apne dard bata pao
She wanted to ask wat he was talking about even though she knew wat was it.she continued in a serious tone.
:shravan tum kis bare main baat...
He didn't let her complete her sentence and turned his glare towards her that made her realize she was right about wat he was talking about. she sat down beside him and his eyes stared her continuously she knew now there was no escape she had to speak, she closed her eyes preparing wat to tell him and wat to not, the tell him list far longer than she actually imagined and not to tell him was a lot shorter than her imagination then she spoke as she stood up so that his ripping gaze was not over her.
:shravan mujhe laga ki tumhe batane ka koi fayda nhi tum meri baat nhi manoge
He stood up and held her hand by elbow and made her turn around: kyun sumo itna bhi bharosa nhi tha mujh per aur ek baar koshish to karti
Sumo had the saddest smile on her face: ki thi shravan koshish aur yaad hai mujhe tumne kya kaha tha mera aur tumhara koi relation nhin I hate u yahi kaha tha na tumne main aesa nhin chati thi ki fir se tum mujhse vahi kaho nhin khona chati thi main tumhe lekin mujhe nhi pata tha ki tumhe main dono hi cases main kho doongi tumse na baat karke tumse zyada takleef mujhe hui hai.
The scene of Nirmala (10 june epi) meeting him after 10 years crossed both of their minds at the same time
:im sorry sumo
That's all he could say but that sorry brought up a smile on her face.
:koi baat nhi shravan its ok
How can she forgive him instantly that was the only thing in his mind after all the hurt he had given her he didn't deserve someone like her, her forgiveness was not deserved by him.
He tuk her hand and kept it on his head: promise me sumo tum ab kabhi mujhse kuch nhi chipaogi
Sumo smiled at his childishness: promise
She said in a barely hearable whisper.
To this he would label as the most beautiful moment of his life he lifted her up and twirled her around she let out a moan of happiness and could only thank god for she was now shravan Malhotra ki wife and they couldn't be separated now.
When he kept her down a thought crossed her mind : shravan tumhe iss sab ke bara me kaise pata
Shravan had the slightest smirk : voh tumhara memory box
Sumo: tumne daboo se liya?
She wanted to slap him hard for why did he always do what she told him not to, shravan had already gone to a distance bcoz he knew now he's gone.
Sumo: ruk qutub minar teri to..
Soon they found themselves chasing eachother and the rum was filled with their giggles teases and wat not. Tum mujhe nhi pakad sakti, shravan , sumo were something they occasionally spoke.
Now this was missing from both of their lives ,both had to agree and eachothers presence made them feel complete in all sense.
Done. Now how did u guys find it im really luking forward to see how the CV's are going to handle the after marriage stuff. 🥱
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