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Hello Astonm 😃, I have read one of your prev Os naam yaad nahi hain magar you are brilliant dear esp in romantic OS's , loved reading your work, when time permits I shall try to go through your other OS 😃
Okay Brilliantly written 👏, from Dreams to Reality what a transformation, how well you have started with her happiness and dreams in which lies her real content...to something which nothing less than a nightmare ie her present. Sumo wanted to share so many wonderful moments with Shrvan and treasure them while in reality it the complete opposite.
She got her dreams, hopes everything shattered and now nothing else matters to her at all, she is in a living hell right now, no one is there to share her pain as well. The charm she was supposed to have is not seen anywhere on her face.
No where does she looks like a blushing bride but instead looks like a dressed up doll...Thanks Astonm for your wonderful Os...Its really emotional you got exactly what was going on in sumo's mind n penned it down so well...Loved reading it...Keep writing ...Till then take care.
Edited by pearl100 - 7 years ago
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