TwiNj FF: Of Iridescent Touches||Chp10 Pg18 (21/06/18) - Page 5

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Blissfullife

@Blisfulllife

Senior Member

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

No wonder why they call u magician writer.. 👏 👏

The jealous kunj... I looved him..
I think the colours he saw while Maya's time gonna fade soon...
Their conversation was beautiful...
The way he tried to cover it up with a reason ..very smart move

And that classroom part... My heart literally sank when he didn't noticed ..
Poor twinkle 😭

If I would say I loved it... I don't think I would be doing justice... cause "loved" wont be the right word to define what I was feeling while reading it...I really don't know what the right word is...
it was sooo touching
.. ... I just wanted it to go on and on and on...it was magical

Continue asap...

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imkinju

@imkinju

Newbie

Posted: 7 years ago

Hmm i like possessive kunj...bt kunj ko kab realise hoga that she is his soulmate...waiting fr next ch

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Aditi

@adi_FMT_ct

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

Meh at first such a fabulous inspiration.

Once Sherlock Holmes was drugs to me,not the serial one it's the book.😊

And now the story.

Meh you definitely carry a special fLavour for your story,just like here the first part in italic.

Love this so much.👏

& About Kunj;Jealousy is on the way and also with it another thing😳.

Freakingly Waiting for the next one now. 😃

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neverlandspirit

@neverlandspirit

IF-Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: J.arora
I am back after reading it 2 times...😃..this was damn amazing ...kunj being a possessive friend is the most awesome part I just loved it...😊..please show this kinda nature more...now I am totally hooked up with the story...so I am being a bit demanding sorry for that but please post the next part soon...😊

I love you for the fact that you read it twice!

❤️

Hey, if you commented then you have pura haq to demand!😆 So no need to apologize!

Thanks buddy, really glad you enjoyed this!😃

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neverlandspirit

@neverlandspirit

IF-Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: amlavs
Wonderful update..
God he is damn possessive abt her man..
Loved the way u showed kunj worry and all..
Maya already I'm having some head ache feels...
Lovely...it's getting more interesting..
Plz continue soon...
Lots of love.,.,
LavSriya..

😃Hi Lavs!

Firstly thank you! Super glad you liked it.

Hmm, I know Maya may seem like a headache now but trust me, she will be a headache later too😆

Thanks again buddy! And Hi to Sriya!

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neverlandspirit

@neverlandspirit

IF-Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Jambread3
Meh,thank you so much for dedicating this chap to me,I'm super flattered!
Being dedicated a chap of one of my current fav stories makes me super happy so thank you for that😃

You won't believe I was just thinking of texting you,asking you to update the story and you did😉
I'm tired of saying this but
I LOVEDDD IT
I actually got excited when Kunj said that ofcourse he "noticed it" but then my dreams got shattered just like Twinkle's😆
I loved how Kunj got all possessive about Twinkle
Looks like Kunj can't like Yuvi even in fanfictions🤣

the conversation between Kunj and Twinkle was
It's funny how I'm so attached to this story already!!!!
Please continue as soon as you can

P.S Ras malai,I can't thank you enough for writing this story,this has my heart❤️

Of course I had to dedicate something to you, you is the Jalebi of mine!😆

Sorry to shatter your dreams like Twinkle's so early on this story but prepare for more hearache! Just kidding. MAYBE😆

Well Yuvi and Kunj what can I say about their relation...boys will be boys

Thanks for such a lovely comment!

🤗

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neverlandspirit

@neverlandspirit

IF-Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: MaliciousAngel

Outstanding, fab, amazing. wonderful, *sigh*..😆😆

I love your style, have I told you that before?? It's just AMAZING...how you put in all the thoughts and its subtle but at the same time someone slow like me picks up all the hints. This story is hands down my favorite one here and I'm going to be on your tail for faster updates but I guess you already know that, teehee 😆

Kunj is so jealous and yet he is trying to come up with logical explanations. Boy, its jealousy, realize it. He turned into a full blown stalker for Twinkle lol. Looked up Yuvi on Facebook in the middle of the night and what he saw, isn't good for jealousy 😆
I LOVE JEALOUS GUYS. I want more of jealous Kunj. Pretty please?
I can't even imagine what he'd do when he comes face to face with Yuvi or even witnesses Twinkle having a nice time with Yuvi. I don't blame him, I stand by the policy of mera best friend sirf mera hai 😆

And Meh, my heart broke when Kunj said he noticed but then he hadn't noticed the thing he was supposed to notice.
Twinkle and Leela are goals though 😆

Also I just realized that I feel like reading this again so I'll go do that.
And Meh, update soon okay?

OOo...a long comment! LOVE IT ALREADY!

Well even if you have told me that you love my writing style, I may have forgotten about it and its always nice to be reminded of it again😆

You have already won me over by calling this piece your fav and there is nothing more you can do to make me happy! A BIG BIG BIG THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Lol, there is just something about jealous guys, isn't it? They are soo cute!

You are reading it again?! Compliment enough!

🤗

Thanks for this! You have lifted my spirits

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neverlandspirit

@neverlandspirit

IF-Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: tikit
Meh loving this ff.
I love this possessive kunj 😆
Nd he checked facebook too.
Loved twinj
Meh continue soon.
Magician Writer🤗
Jaldi jaldi update.
Thanks for pm.

Thank you sooo much Eshu!

I love possessive Kunj too😆

Glad you liked it!

🤗

Edited by neverlandspirit - 7 years ago

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neverlandspirit

@neverlandspirit

IF-Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Komal1298
Eee
This eee means that i love the this chappy very much...
My eee always means m excited aftr reading the chappy
Nd den possesive kunj eee

Well in that case Eee!!!!! Because I liked your comment too😆

Thanks Komal!

Glad you enjoyed!😃

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neverlandspirit

@neverlandspirit

IF-Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Dinky28
Ooo myyy godd i cant believe that kunj is hell bent to know abt uv n he is jealous n people those u r soulmates dont get jealous n if maya was his soulmate he wont be thinking of twinkle while being with her n the flasback of twinkle inher college n superbly defined i loved this chp very much do continue soon
N don't forget my all time fav storm in our soul

IKR!! Stupid Kunj!

😆😆

On the other hand, glad you liked this chapter.

Thank you😃

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