FF | My Heart Beats In My Mind | Teaser on Page-39 | Oct|18 - Page 6

interesting story ... raman is a culprit omg shocking and he is acting like innocent person hope he will understand his mistake and rectify it...poor ishu Bcoz of Raman mistake her parents died... plz continue soon

Nice start 

Interesting and intriguing. New concept though I like it. Raman is really huh I don't know how to judge him. He is bad and good as well. Ashok I like him here. The most I like in Raman is his ATTITUDE. It's good. Hope you will continue and thank you for PM.

Interesting concept.

Woahh!!

Mindblowing part,,,it will be interesting jab ishita ko truth pata chlayga!!,,waiting next

Originally posted by: Mad4Divz

wow di v.intrstng different concept loved de 1st updt didn't accept dis shock ...but i love dis Raman ...thanks4pm

Thank you dear...
Glad you liked the concept 😳

Originally posted by: akriti154

suoperbb update
at first i thought puttar is a good boy
taking care of ishu
bt den he's d culprit
n he framed ashok
having sinful thoughts about ishu
😉
n nw he tells iahita that she has to marry him
giving her tym to say yes in 4 hrs
hw great it is
she beat ashok n he tried to save him empathizing with himself
wht will b ishu's reaction on knowing d truth?
cont soon
thnxx 4 pm

Hi Akku...
I know Raman seemed good in the first half 😆
But you know you can't expect a good Raman in NY story, that too in the very first part itself 😎
Thank you so much for commenting... 😳

Originally posted by: Divanii

Superb update
You made Raman Hero & villian
Two in one
BTW my name is also megha
Update soon

Hi Megha...
RKB two in one 😎
Glad you enjoyed the update... 😳

Originally posted by: ishrasoul

Awesome update
A nice idea.
Update soon

Thank you Riduuu 😳