ShraMan OS: Rain

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Edited by orion23 - 7 years ago

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Zoya, you beat me to it! 😆

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Anjali, it's amazing how you can write the simplest of scenes with such beauty. Very heart-touching scene. When Shravan held out his hand to feel the rain, I knew ShraMan scene that would follow. And I was right! 😆




Edited by -Sarcy- - 7 years ago

Res
I m late😆
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Apologies for Delay 😔
This is Amazing🤗
Another Masterpiece by You❤️
The way You have written it;Her Pain is something I can feel😭

How it feels to her that nothing is Normal
Mami is not making any issue over her ever now & then,She can not Make Pakodas and Chutney with hot Tea in Rain😔

Shravan Remembering how she used love rain
You left me in Tears
Aah That Doorstep memories
Something so blissful to read😊

Every single time when Sumo refused to do what she used to love bcoz she can't do it anymore;He Felt more Guilty for whatever happened to her,He is the reason Behind😭

It was mesmerising to read how He made her enjoy the Rain other way till she can dance
"First smile directed to Him"😊
Chai with Shravan Malhotra😉
Their Journey Is definitely Most wonderful one❤️
How I wish this could happen in The Show*Sigh*
But CVs have handled Episodes So Beautifully that I don't Have complaints for on-going Track😃

Waiting For Ur Next stuff😉

Edited by .shivi396 - 7 years ago

Anjali 🤗 what a treat so beautifully and well written piece , it's like I am watching a movie running infront of my eyes . How I wish what u pen Cvs can show even mere glimpse of it I will have no complains . Thanx again my friend as I always say you are so talented Mashallah

It was beautiful, could imagine the whole scene, CVs need to read this ! Do write more I love love your writing.

I so loved it..
I felt as i was the one standing in the rain..
Waiting for this kind of scene to come ... ❤️ 😊

A-N-J-A-L-I! This is such a beautifully restrained and sublime piece... Love it!!! So many feels... Shravan has indeed become her shadow, hasn't he? Edited by an_chau - 7 years ago

When astonm writes, it has to be beautiful n a masterpiece. N no wonder it is 👍🏼 Shraman, rain n anjali's os; wat a magnificent combo. Loved it 😳
P.s: If possible update meant to be real soon. Looking forward to it 😆

Fanx 4 pm dr

Love, Sidhi ❤️

Anjali🤗