SwaDarsh OS Series ~ Those Moments | Post-marriage Moments

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Two weeks back I woke up at 6 am with a fluff attack - ideas that could be used for a cute couple. But I was just lazy to put them down. But then, recently, I have been so zealously promoted as the sole JJ lover in this forum by my fellow forumwasis, just because I started writing a SS on them (back in those days when quite a few people were interested in their story) that I think it is time to give evidence of my allegiance to SwaDarsh. πŸ˜† So here goes.

Because we've had a dry spell of SwaDarsh moments in the show, I have decided to write a series of One Shots featuring the moments of their life after marriage. These pieces will mostly be fluff and nothing serious and heavy - no deaths and misunderstandings and arguments and separations. πŸ˜† So if you're looking for a plot, you won't find it here. SwaDarsh moments is all that you will get here! 😳

Before jumping into moments their married life, I decided to take a step back and also write about the proposal.

Hope you guys enjoy this endeavour and looking forward to your thoughts.

P.S: If anyone is unaware about my Jaidev-Jaya SS and is curious to take a look, here's the link: Chasing Love ~ A Jaya-Jaidev SS


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1 ~  The Proposal


Swadheenta Ramakrishnan, or Freedom - as her dear brother, Asad Gilani, loved to call her, couldn't decide whether agreeing to come on this family holiday with both the families, the Sinhas and the Gilanis, was a good idea or not. More than a family holiday, it had turned out to be a couples' retreat as the newest couple in the group, Asad Gilani and Radhika Deshmukh, was fervently busy planning activities for couples. While this meant unlimited fun and plenty of romantic moments for couples, for Swadheenta and Adarsh, the only singles in the group, it was a headache because they were relegated to being either the coordinators or referees. The saccharine sweet atmosphere didn't help either. Their only moments of solace came from their mutual conversations at the end of each game, when everyone dispersed to share some private moments with their partners, leaving Swadheenta and Adarsh to their own means. However, right now, Swadheenta felt like coming here was a big mistake. Especially because Adarsh was nowhere to be seen and Swadheenta was forced to endure Radhika's incessant prattle while Asad had stepped out to take a call from a friend.

The last that Swadheenta had seen Adarsh was in the afternoon, during another of Asad and Radhika's fun activities. The game being played required everyone to share their proposal stories - how they had proposed to their partners. For a change, Swadheenta and Adarsh weren't required to do anything as Asad and Radhika had taken charge. As they sat at the end of the group, listening to everyone's stories, Adarsh asked her, "Swadheenta, how would you like your boyfriend to propose to you?"

"I don't have a boyfriend so I haven't really thought about it," Swadheenta replied with a shrug.

"C'mon, you can still think about it. Doesn't every girl have a fantasy around it?" Adarsh teased.

Swadheenta quirked an eyebrow, "I don't know many girls."

"Or you simply don't want to tell," he laughed.

"Why is it funny?" asked Swadheenta, annoyed.

"Because you're blushing," Adarsh leaned in and whispered in her ear.

"Nonsense, Adarsh! I don't blush. Ever," Swadheenta snapped, irritated.

"Fine, then tell me, are you the chocolate-flowers-diamonds kind of girl or the more practical one?"

"What's impractical about these things?"

"What's not? Why do all girls love chocolates, flowers and diamonds more than the guy who gives them?"

Swadheenta laughed, "Well, maybe because the sweetness of the chocolates makes her forget the bitterness of the hurt when he breaks her heart. The fragrance of the flowers reminds her that love is as fleeting as it. And the sparkle of the diamonds, it acts as a silent strength, reminding her that though she may be delicate and fragile from the outside, she is as hard as they come."


 "Cynical much, aren't we?" asked Adarsh, one elegant brow raised.

"Not really, I would never accept these things from a guy who I trusted would break my heart," she said as she waggled her brows.

"Fair! So you love chocolates, flowers and diamonds but you won't accept them from any guy. You will only accept them from him who you trust implicitly. Does that mean if you accept chocolates from a guy, he should be happy that you love him?" Adarsh queried.

"I didn't say that."

"Swadheenta Ramakrishnan, you are a conundrum!" Adarsh sighed, exasperated.

"Takes intelligence to know one," she winked.

"So have you found this guy?"

"Who?"

"The one you trust enough to accept chocolates, flowers and diamonds from."

She looked at him a long moment before saying, "May be."

"I wonder if I should be envious of him or pity him," he muttered.

"Adarsh!" Swadheenta smacked him playfully on the shoulder.

She toyed with her hair as they sat in silence, watching the proposals play out as each couple told their story. 

As she observed the expressions on Adarsh's face while he listened to each couple's story, curiosity got the better of her and she asked, "How would you propose to your lady love, Adarsh?"

He raised a brow at her question but replied, "I don't believe in telling. When I propose to my girl, you will see."

"You're mean!"

"Says the mean queen!"

*
"Diii!" Radhika's whine brought Swadheenta back to the present.

"What is it, Radhika?"

"You're not listening."

"I don't need to anymore because Asad is here."

Radhika pouted at Swadheenta's words but Asad's presence beside them in the next instant lit up her face with a radiant smile.

"Yo, Freedom, what's up? Where's your Adarsh Sinha?"

"Your Adarsh Sinha has deserted me today."

"Then you should join Radhika and me. We'll have fun together," Asad offered, not wanting to leave Freedom out.

"Asad, this is a couples' party. You guys go enjoy yourselves," Swadheenta replied.

"But di - "

"I'll be fine, Radhika," Swadheenta reassured her.

She smiled as she watched the love birds walk away arm-in-arm. Asad and Radhika made a very cute couple. Despite being complete opposites, they complimented each other.

Swadheenta finished her mocktail and got up to leave. As Adarsh didn't seem to be joining her tonight and she was in no mood to wile away her time, she decided to get back to her room.  Her cellphone buzzed. It was a text from Adarsh.

'Time to show you something. See you in 10.'

She wondered what did his cryptic message mean. They hadn't made any plans for tonight.  As she stepped into her room, she was greeted by the dizzying fragrance of fresh roses and as she looked around, she spotted a charming bouquet of roses, the deepest red, on her dresser with a note.

"These beauties reminded me of the prettiest woman I know. Their dizzying fragrance, I wish, remind her of the dizzying joy that she brings to me. 
A future without her seems bleak, thus by my side, I always wish her be."

What started as a smile across Swadheenta's face soon turned into laughter as she read the last line again. Her heart skipped a beat as she realised this is what Adarsh was talking about showing her. She had been a tad sad when he'd said, "When I propose to my girl, you will see." If she were completely honest with herself, she had also felt a little jealous but she would never accept it before him. In all the timethey had been friends, she couldn't pinpoint the exact moment when her feelings had started intensifying for him, but she knew that he meant more to her than just a friend.

Turning around, she saw a basket lying on the nightstand. As she took a closer look, she saw an assortment of chocolates, truffles and more filled the basket. Another note stuck out.

"Chocolates. Their sweetness will never leave room for bitterness between us because distance is always temporary, and 'Me' will always be 'We'."

Her phone buzzed with another text.

"The balcony"

She raced out of her room, willing her heart to calm down, running as fast as her heels would allow her.

As she opened the door to his room, she found it deserted. Bracing herself, she walked in and headed straight to the balcony. The ambience in the balcony was exquisite. Though his room overlooked the pool, it was quiet below. The inky black sky was littered with glittering stars, winking from above. Candles glowed on the balustrade and a tiny table that was set for two. He stood leaning against the balustrade.

"Adarsh."

He turned. Dressed in a dapper black suit, his hair slicked to the side, and an enigmatic smile adorning his face, Adarsh looked breathtakingly handsome. Their eyes met and locked, and they stood looking at each other in silence for a moment while their eyes did the talking.

Finally, Swadheenta broke the silence.

"Who's the lucky girl?"

"You."

*
Adarsh watched in delight as joy spread across Swadheenta's face at his words. Her question had left him equally elated. If she thought that a girl whom he proposed to was lucky, then he was one lucky man. Swadheenta was his best friend and had always meant the world to him. He had always treasured their relationship but was reluctant to confess his true feelings lest he lose their friendship as well. But today, he wanted to take the risk and see where this would go. He wanted to know if Swadheenta felt the same as he did about her. He had his suspicions, but he wanted to be sure. When he had heard her say that she may have possibly found her special person, he hadn't liked it one whit. But the long look that she gave him before saying that gave him hope. He decided he couldn't stand the risk of some other guy sweeping his Swadheenta from before his eyes and so decided to take the plunge.

"I love you, Swadheenta. Will you do me the honour of being my wife?" 
 
Swadheenta was at a loss for words and her only answer was a dazzling smile that started on her lips and lit up a face, adding a brilliant to her eyes. Adarsh pulled out a velvet case from his pocket and opened it to reveal a dazzling string of the prettiest, most delicate diamonds. He walked up to her and stood behind her. Pushing her hair to a side, he clasped the delicate chain around her neck as he said, "Diamonds, to remind you of the strength of our love. Its shine will forever remind you that you add the sparkle in my life."

He could feel the pulse jumping at the base of her throat but not a word left her mouth. Unable to resist teasing her, he bent and whispered in her ear, using the moniker that her brother used for her, "Imprisoned, is your tongue, Freedom?"

That did the trick. She spun around in the next instant and with hands on her hips and a charmingly furious expression on her face said, "You're an insufferable, pompous, and arrogant idiot, Adarsh Sinha. I didn't say yes."

Adarsh threw his head back and laughed, a hearty laugh that melted away Swadheenta's anger and left a pretty smile in its wake. He lifted her in his arms and swirled her around to squeals of delight from her. Moments later, he brought her to the ground and they stood close, leaning their heads against each other, their hands held together.

"Thank you, Swadheenta, for making me so happy."

"I love you, too, Adarsh, even though you're such a lame poet."

He laughed, she followed suit, filling the night air with infectious chuckles of a couple deeply in love.

And so, Swadheenta and Adarsh walked out hand-in-hand, all set to steal the limelight from the newest couple and claim it as their own.

Because BAE is my best friend.
***

Edited by -Sarcy- - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Sarcy, whatever we watching JJ is nothing but CVs reciprocation to JJ fans demand as there is lot of potential to their story to unfold nd stretch. But not at this critical time , which making everyone annoyed as the couple, who newly married nd not in terms since their weddin finally come to terms should be shown better way as they more concerned about each other than JJ.
Honestly feeling JJ also deserved their screen space but would have been better its happend before Swadarsh wedding. 

A lot of hell happening around them and JJ intense romance ,its become unwanted for most of us as we love Swadarsh more than JJ. 

But its the one track the CVs has to close it before the show ends. 

Will come back on the Story later this evening.

Keep writingπŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 7 years ago
Jeez !!! I wish it could or somewhat close to it could have been shownπŸ˜ƒ   Loved it Sarcy !! Truly fantastic ! 


Waiting for the next ! 
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Posted: 7 years ago
awesome and lovely 
looking forward to read more
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Thank u so much sarcy.. Let me read this. But I m already very excited by the heading it self so here I m go. 
And thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Just loved it.  Such a beautiful n cute proposal.  I again fall for them 
Just Awesome 
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Posted: 7 years ago
I opened this bcoz I was left in wanting for more in the proposal scene (In show) .
Though I loved the pigeons,purani dilli and sirf salary mein kaam chalana padega dialogue with the realistic touch ,yet , the endless chasing this IAS officer had done for Swa leaving his high responsibility Job , was not in line with Proposal .
Either you could have shown Adarsh as a serious lover who had grown bonding in a more mature way or a cheesy stalker one. Proposal scene was something I found little amiss .

## Thats why I actually loved the proposal scene you have written here .I love realistic stuff but still I loved it  as it was more in line of characterisation of Adarsh .Thanks . πŸ˜Š

# Btw its really admirable to write a gripping story with all the visualization readers can do .And the typing is more so . πŸ‘

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Oh Man Sarcy. That was something. 

I had planned on reading it after the show, but couldn't wait. I could so imagine the entire scene playing out in front of my eyes. And I was hoping Swadheenta will take her time saying "Yes".

Simply loved it. 

How nicely he redefined the meaning of flowers, chocolates and diamonds in their life. And loved the "Me" will be "We". 

Cannot wait to read the next bit. 
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Manonidz

Jeez !!!I wish it could or somewhat close to it could have been shownπŸ˜ƒ Loved it Sarcy !! Truly fantastic !


Waiting for the next !



Thanks, Mano! Glad to hear that. πŸ˜ƒ

A lot of our wishes with regards to SwaDarsh have been ignored, so this is my way of fulfilling them. πŸ˜‰