NEW RAYA Three Shots : Tum Bin prologue

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Posted: 2016-06-19T13:44:24Z

Curtains Flying with Wind just like finger playing with piano Shimmering bell came to match the rhythms with curtains ...    

She was standing at balcony her hands spread in air She was Enjoying Cold breeze her eyes was closed Suddenly She started Singing A long rhythm

She wiped her tears He always liked my singing specially when i sung for him...And Now he hated ...He is going...

Away from Me i what destiny want from us

Wherever we came close destiny came in between and tore us apart,,,No No us only me whenever i got happiness its only for short time Her thoughts broke by deep intense voice

" Ms Sharma  please close the Door i am leaving "...

She run back from balcony and stopped in front on the Door...His hand on Knob of the door She doest know what to say what to do How to Stop him How ...

She grabbed his other hand..he turned his face still his one hand on knob and one in priya's hand He felt grip on this hand became more tight And He looked at her She is Crying Even her sobbing voice is musical and then he heard the most beautiful voice again She started singing song...again For him

Kuch pal toh tehar jao na
Ya phir laut ke aao na
Yoon kehte nahi alvida
Mudd jao idhar aao na



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Posted: 2016-06-19T22:24:22Z
interesting pls continue soon
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Posted: 2016-06-20T00:31:06Z
superb. but next time se mujhe pm Karna when u update. keep posting.
Madhuri Dixit and Sakshi Tanwar....FOREVER FAVOURITES
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Posted: 2016-06-20T11:16:40Z
Very nice
pls continue soon
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Posted: 2016-06-21T05:55:33Z
nice prologue...
contd soon
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Posted: 2016-07-04T07:30:19Z
It was interesting prologue it's clear that the woman is in very much in love with Ram but wat are the reasons that he has been rejected by her. 

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Posted: 2016-08-13T15:31:27Z

awww what a lovely story I really enjoyed it a lot too cute update really awesome all the way why she said no to him what's the reason need to find out plz update soon waiting for ur reply plz continue this soon...
I enjoyed it a lot moving for next...
Edited by leena04 - 2016-08-13T15:41:17Z
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