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Posted: 7 years ago
Nice update.
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Nice update.
Waiting for a long time.
Kya aaj dusra update be milsakta hai?
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nice that it was not rajat!!! wow...thanks a lot...so rajat ki entry late hai...well i guess he will just be a jealous maker ;) hehe...next jaldi plzzz
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Posted: 7 years ago
hii
read all the parts
I like the story.
Actually I don't like big Pihu..I even cant imagine her  but here in ur story she is positive so its OK...but still
Ram having a big ego.
I like Priya character...hope Raya will reunite soon
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Part 14

Ram- bilkul nahi.

Pee- meri baat ko naa nahi bol sakte iss liye aap aise bol rahe ho.

Ram- nahi peehu tum se mai jhoot nahi bol sakta, haan ye baat alag hai, priya aayi thi sab thik karne lekin mai gadha Jo ego lekar baith gaya aur ulti baat ki.

Pee- papa aap bhi na.

Ram- haan pata hai, mai bhi.

Pee- aap na abhi jaldi se sorry bol do, mere miss.kapoor se Mrs.kundra hone se pehle.

Ram- haan meri maa.

Peehu only smile.

Ram asked her- kya chahiye hai tumhe.

Pee- mujhe toh aap chahiye the meri shaadi me, Jo wish thi wo maa ne puri ki.

Ram- priya ka ho gaya, ab meri taraf se kya chahiye.

Peehu act like think- umm.

Ram- bolo bhi.

Pee- aap dono ek dusre ke saath humesha ke liye ek saath rahe aur kuch nahi.

Ram- ye toh jarur hoga phir aur kya chahiye.

Pee- pehle aap maa ke saath sulha karwa lo phir baata deti hun.

Ram- iss mamle par tum puri priya par gayi ho.

Pee- kya karu saare good habits maa ke hai.

Ram very innocently- haa wo toh hai n he again recognize her words n said.

Ram- it means saare baad habits mere hai tujh me.

Peehu started laughing, ram looks at her very sweetly n said.

Ram- itne saal tak ye sab Maine miss kiya, sorry peehu.

Pee- papa don't say sorry na waise bhi i m sorry too, aap se uss din rudely baat karne ke liye.

Ram- wo tera gussa tha, toh thik hai.

Pee- mumma ka gussa ka kya karoge aap.

Ram- aloo parathe.

Peehu confused- aloo parathe!

Ram- lunch me kya baana hai, wo dekhte hai, chal.

Pee- kuch accha hi hoga.

Ram- niche toh chal n priya listen there full convo n she hide herself from both.

Priya- toh ye sab chal raha hai inn baap-beti me, mai bhi dekhti hun mujhe kaise maante hai, kal tak ka waqt hai ram ke paas n she smile with tears.

At dining table, they both seat on there place, ram asked to nuts.

Ram- aloo parathe hai kya choti.

Nuts- aloo parathe?

Ram- pehli baar sunn rahi hai.

Nuts- humesha sunnti hun lekin shaadi ka ghar hai aur aap ko aloo parathe chahiye, kabhi kuch alag khaa lijiye.

Ram little serious tone n blink one eye to peehu- jitna pucha utna jawab do.

Nuts- gussa kiu kar rahe ho.

Peehu join to ram- mujhe bhi aloo parathe chahiye, n priya enter in dining hall.

Priya to pee- tujhe kab se aloo parathe pasand aane lage.

Pee- jab se papa ne aapke aloo parathe ki tarif ki hai tab se.

Priya go to say something but didn't found any word n she go to kitchen making parathe with little irritated, ram n peehu gave each other winning smile, nuts n khush notice these n asked.

Nuts- ye kya tha.

Khush- same question.

Ram to nuts- khaana khaa.

Peehu to khush- ek fight dungi kuch bola maa ko.

Nuts- hum dono bhi hai aap dono ki planning me.

Ram- koi zarurat nahi hai, we both handle.

Khush- peehu these not done you shared everything with me from childhood.

Peehu to ram- haan right papa.

Ram- peehu.

Nuts- bhai plz.

Ram- ok come.

Priya came with parathe n saw four of them talking in little voice.

Priya- kya chal raha hai.

All said in one tone- kuch bhi nahi.

Priya warn to all- aisa waisa kuch galat kiya toh mujhse bura koi nahi hoga.

Neha- priya mujhe tum se kuch baat karni hai.

Priya- haan bolo.

Neha- tum lunch kar lo phir.

Priya- thik hai.

All taking there lunch, after lunch neha take priya with her.

All are give suggestions to ram.

Nuts- flowers doo aur sorry bolo baat khatam.

Khush- mamu aap sidhe radio par jaa kar sorry bolo ekdum unique hai.

 Vik- tu na letter likh de kam bann jaayega.

Neha- best way greeting.

Kar- na song, perfect.

Ram fed up- sab ekdum chup mai dekhta hun kaise sorry bol na hai.

Pee- kaise!

Ram- hum dono ke bich ki baat hai hum dono dekh lenge n he go towards priya's room.

 At priya's room, she doing some packing n same time knocked on door, she didn't saw a back n said- koi bhi hai aandar aajao.

Ram came in n saw priya doing packing he asked- kidhar jaa rahi ho.

Priya listen ram's voice n turned n said- haan kal shaadi hone ke baad mujhe parso Mumbai ke liye nikal na hai.

Ram- Mumbai kaisi liye, kuch kam k liye.

Priya- nahi kisi ko sambhal na hai, nahi gayi toh galat hoga toh jaana jaruri hai.

Ram- kitne dino k liye jaa rahi ho.

Priya- humesha ke liye jaa rahi hun.

Ram- lekin.

Priya- kya lekin, beti ki shaadi hone ke baad yaha par akeli ho jaaungi issey accha hai Mumbai chali jaati hun aage ki life bitane.

Ram- lekin yaha par sab hai, nuts, kartik hai khush bhi toh hai.

 Priya- haan lekin n she stop between.

Ram- lekin kya.

Priya- ab mujhe Mumbai ki Rj banan hai koi problem hai.

Ram- lekin mai n knocked on door.

Priya- darwaja khula hai aandar aao.

Khush enter like someone push him.

Priya- arrye dheere gir jaayega, kis ne push kiya tujhe.

Khush look at door n said- kisi ne nahi bas, mai wo mai.

Priya- kya bol bhi.

Khush find a word to say something, in mind- ye peehu bhi na, push kar diya mujhe aandar, lekin aandar aa kar kya bol na hai ye nahi bola, pagal.

Priya in little high pitched- KHUSH.

Khush came from his mind voice- haan.

Priya- kya baat hai kaha par khoya hai.

Khush- wo...wo haan yaad aaya.

Priya- kya yaad aaya.

Khush- wo maa ko aap plz maana lo na.

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Posted: 7 years ago
Nice one.
Mission Priya manao! Has started.
Ek lamba update dena Yasir please...
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Part 13
Khush is funny making bet on RaYa argument with Nuts and Peehu and it's sure Ram Priya madly in love but their ego is stopping them


 
Part 14
Planning is going good of Ram and Peehu to manofy Priya as she is melting down but she wanna go to mumbai and now wat new plan has been made by kush.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Nice update
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hehe...so everyone knows the plan .. maha milap of raya...including priya!! :-P lol... really cute update...and arpita sis to be honest u r really emerging as a writer...abhi aur clearness aarahi hai aapke writing me ;) superb...keep it up... :-) :-D nice really...so priya is all set to go back in mumbai ;) cute...next soon plzzz and thnks for pm
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Part 15

Khush- wo maa ko aap plz maana lo na. 
Priya- kis baat ke liye. 
Khush- wo raat ke show ke liye. 
Priya- iss mamle me, mai tumhari koi help nahi kar sakti. 
Khush- mami plz dekho aap yaha par nahi rahoge toh mai aapne Rj life me busy ho jaauga. 
Priya- aur suhani ka kya. 
Khush- kon suhani! 
Priya- Jo raat ko 9 to 11 ka show karti hai, naye tarane wali. 
Khush- haan usska kya. 
Priya- usse dekhna baand kar aur bol de, night shift karne ki koi zarurat nahi hai. 
Khush- aap ko kaise pata. 
Priya- sab pata hai. 
Ram look to khush n in mind- 2min late nahi aa sakta tha. 
Khush to ram- waise mamu aap kya soch rahe hai. 
Ram- mai kuch bhi toh nahi, chal teri maa se baat karni hai chal n he drag him with him. 
At hall, were nuts doing some work. 
Ram came with khush. 
Ram- nuts ye tera beta bachpan se aisa hi hai, ya ab mere yaha aane par hua hai. 
Nuts- kiu kya hua. 
Ram- mujhe priya se baat karni thi aur ye bich me aa tapka aisa laga tha jaise ye khud aaya bich me. 
Khush- nahi aisi baat nahi hai maa wo mujhe mami se baat karni thi. 
Ram pulled his ear n said- jhoot bol raha hai, ye 10min waha par soch raha tha kya bolna hai. 
Nuts- kya bolne gaya tha. 
Ram- aur upar se tujhe bahu (daughter in law) dhund ke rakhi hai, koi suhani naam ki ladki hai, usski ke liye issey Rj ki night shift karni hai. 
Nuts- what? Khush! 
khush give look to ram- kya kiya aapne. 
Ram give to look him back- tera mamu hun bachhu. 
At terrace, ram thinking what should i do now how can i talk with priya about stay with her for life time. 
Priya came there with coffee mug which is ram's fav. 
Priya go near him- coffee. 
Ram turned to her voice- haan thanks n he take mug n move for another work. 
Ram- priya can you give me 20min plz. 
Priya- lekin wo mujhe. 
Ram- plz. 
Priya stop there, ram came near her. 
Ram- i m sorry what i did in Mumbai with you, mujhe pata tha tum waha par sab sort karne aayi thi, lekin me pagal insan sab galat kar baitha, mujhe aisi ulti sidhi baatein nahi karne chahiye thi, lekin tum jaanti ho mera ego mere weight se bada hai aur wo sab mera ego tha mai bolna kuch aur chahta tha aur muh (mouth) se kuch aur nikala, tum mujhe college ke dinno se jaanti ho mai kaisa hun, tum hi ek aisi insan ho Jo mujhe jhel sakti ho, mujhe bare kar sakti ho, mujhe raastein par i mean sidha chalna sikha sakti ho mai uss time Sach me galat tha, i m sorry. 
Priya take a deep breath n said- ho gaya aapka mai jaau bahot saare kam hai, kal shaadi hai. 
Ram- arrye yaar itna kuch kaha usska jawab to doo. 
Priya- i need a time. 
Ram- what kind of time yaar. 
Priya- jaise aap kapoor hai waise mai bhi hun toh. 
Ram- tic for tact. 
Priya only blinked her eyes. 
Ram went from there without any kind of question. 
Priya- kya bhagwan itne saal tak dur rakha, lekin thoda sa dimag aur dil me soch ne wali aadat nahi Di Mumbai jaa rahi hun saari packing karke,ye baat baata Di, ye pucha bhi kitne dinno ke liye jaa rahi hun lekin ye nahi pucha kis ke ghar jaa rahi hun, jawab bhi diya humesha ke liye jaa rahi hun phir bhi nahi pucha, kaisa pati diya hai mujhe aapne, abhi bolungi bhi nahi innke saath hi rehne wali thi aur wo bhi humesha ke liye jawab ke liye wait karne doo, mujhe bhi wait karwaya na abhi meri turn hai, waise bhi itne saalon me sorry bolna acche se sikha diya, thankyou bhagwan ji  n she smile. 
At night, peehu at terrace, counting stars her fav.game priya came with her phone. 
Priya- peehu. 
Pee- haan maa, kya baat hai. 
Priya- tera phn kaha par hai. 
Pee- meri pocket me n she show to her mobi to priya but her pocket empty.
 Priya show to her mobi- kitchen sambhal raha tha n she give her. 
Priya- samar ko call kar bahot baar aa kar miss hua hai. 
Pee- hmm n she text him. 
Priya- arrye baat kar na. 
Pee- nahi maa wo ritual hai naa shaadi se pehle groom aur bride ek dusre se baat nahi kar sakte. 
Priya- mil nahi sakte baat toh kar sakte hai na. 
Pee- phir bhi. 
Priya- ok jaisa tu chahe. 
Pee- maa kuch kam hai kya niche. 
Priya- nahi toh, kiu kuch baat karni hai. 
Pee- haan ofcourse kuch tips leni hai aapse. 
Priya- konsi tips. 
Pee- patni wali, wife n all. 
Priya- ohh. 
Pee- you are the experience wife na toh thoda sa mujhe. 
Priya- tips nahi bol sakte lekin ek baat humesha yaad rakhna. 
Pee- kya. 
Priya- yahi ki pati-patni ka Jo rishta hota hai wo na rubber ke jaisa hota hai jitna jaada khichoge toot jaayega agar samar khich raha hai toh uss rishtein ki dorm ko tujhe thoda lose karna hai, naa ke khichna hai, samjhi. 
Pee- you mean to say like see-saw. 
Priya- ahhh! Aisa hi kuch samjh le. 
Pee- hmm. 
Priya- aur ek baat no arguments with any one, samne walon ko baat prove karne sikho naa ke argument. 
Pee- haan maa. 
Priya- waise tu samjhdar hai, aur kuch. 
Pee- maa aap sach me Mumbai jaaoge papa ke saath rehene. 
Priya- tujhe kya lagta hai. 
Pee- papa aapke saath yahi aakar rahe toh. 
Priya- tere honeymoon ke baad hum dono aa jaayene. 
Pee- agar mujhe incase aap sab ki yaad aaye toh. 
Priya- jab chahe tab tum aa sakti ho, ur house at anytime. 
Pee hugged by priya's waist- i love you maa. 
Priya kissed her forehead- love u 2
Edited by Arpipatil - 7 years ago