Fanfiction ViShi "wo jo adhori si baat baki hai" last chaptr - Page 7

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Posted: 8 years ago
#61

😕 i shud tke it as gud or bad
vry honest m nervous nw 🤢 evryone telling me chptr 5 ws gud but to continue stry i hv to write sad part too
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Posted: 8 years ago
#62
Yaar kya likha h tumne , u r superb , I know this part of ff is heart wrenching but u potrayex it very well 👏 and ur story is awesome buddy , u just nailed it , I m shorting of words to praise u , kudos to u 👏 and thanks for quick update next bhi jaldi dena
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Posted: 8 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: bishmakhan

Yaar kya likha h tumne , u r superb , I know this part of ff is heart wrenching but u potrayex it very well 👏 and ur story is awesome buddy , u just nailed it , I m shorting of words to praise u , kudos to u 👏 and thanks for quick update next bhi jaldi dena



ufff 😆 thank god i got my bteath bck dil dhuk dhuk dhuk kr raha tha i thought log gaali denge for breaking their hearts abhi m feelin bit relax i hope i wil update soon i dnt wnt ppl to be sad for long
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Posted: 8 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: crazy_inu



ufff 😆 thank god i got my bteath bck dil dhuk dhuk dhuk kr raha tha i thought log gaali denge for breaking their hearts abhi m feelin bit relax i hope i wil update soon i dnt wnt ppl to be sad for long

arey tu pagal h itti achi story h Teri kaun gaali dega , twist to aane hi chahiye na story mai 😉 han par tune jaldi update nhi di to zaroor maar khayegi 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
#65
ohhh I loved it.. arey woh love story hi kya jisme ko problems na aye...n woh love story hi kya jisme love test na ho...its superb inu..m just loving shakti n shivika...nxt prt me thoda ananya or garv ka bhi scene dalna..
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Posted: 8 years ago
#66
lovely ... waiting for the next update
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Posted: 8 years ago
#67
lovely dear waiting for next part
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Posted: 8 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: bishmakhan

Update kab degi suggu 😡


kal sharp 12 o clock per pakka aaj sir dard ho rha tha tmrw pakka wala
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Posted: 8 years ago
#69
Suggy i am back.
I am telling u...u r an awesome writer...
I liked the heart break too.
Iss heart break mein bhi pyaar hai...
Sooo good.
Imagine karne mein bhi accha lag raha hai...wow continue baby.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#70

Originally posted by: crazy_inu


kal sharp 12 o clock per pakka aaj sir dard ho rha tha tmrw pakka wala

suggu tere 12 kab bajengey 😲