Manan FF - Kaisi yeh Yaariyan season 3 Thread 1 - till chapter 63 - Page 36

rockstarlover

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Posted: 8 years ago

#351

awesome update
loved it
cont soon

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1_drop_of_rain

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Posted: 8 years ago

#352

Originally posted by: shoana
this was super cute
manik sent those cupcakes for his cupcake😉
and he bought shoes too...so sweet of him
p.s. he remembered that she is forgetting to make cake😲
it means there are chances that this time he may not forget anything
i had a question...is he fully recovered 😛

nandini sent thank you message ..😕but why didn't it reached maniik
oh i think...she wants to wants to thanks him personally😉
and manik is waiting for her thank you message...aww😛

and shocking part was navya seeing cabir
pls bring cabir back
i'm missing him very much...the cupid of manan
and missing manbir moments🤔
pls bring manbir back...pretty please

mukti wanted to kill navya and her mother🤣
but i loved this twist
pls bring cabir back...and abeer too
cavya a new couple😉
i know i'm going too far...but kya karun...u make us so desperate for next part

thanks for pm dear
continue soon
take care

"Nopes.. Kuch nahi.. The earliest memory I have is of getting some sort of an electric shock in a hospital in Denmark. Doctors ne kaha tha ki my memory is like a hard disk but ek connection kanhi snap ho gaya hai in between. Agar main Denmark aur Switzerland nahi jata jo it could have been worse. Like Every day I would have woken up and forgotten what happened the previous day. But ab aisa nahi hai. Jo abhi ho raha hai, I mean life after the memory loss, I will not forget it... but if there's a miracle, someday I may wake up remembering my entire life. But that's that, a miracle and as much as I wish that it happens, I don't have much hope."

I cant answer any other question bcz i cnt answer without giving away too much. 3

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1_drop_of_rain

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Posted: 8 years ago

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So guys, how was it sweet or shocking.. I know u r still reeling under the shock.. Wondering what was it.. I can see that because u all hv asked so mny questions.. Generally i reply to Ll your comments but not this time 😉

Chill i m not angry... 😆 i wont reply because i cant reply without revealing more than i should. But i want to know are u guys enjoyong? Do u think the way the story is progressing from one chapter to the next, is it predictable..when u get a new chapter, is it something u had expected or u find something new?

Wen u read the story, do u get the real kyy feels?

Ur feedback is important because it lets me assess where i m standing and where i need to go. Blame it on my engg/business background.. I like to analyse n structure even creative wrk 😃

I m damn serious about this FF n i better do a good wrk of it. So send in ur wishlist nd ur complaint buckets..

Love u..all

Rohini

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shoana

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Posted: 8 years ago

#354

i got the hint dear
no worries/...continue it the way you wanted to
and my wishlist is mentioned above in last comment😳
and tbh i never felt that this is ff...
it looks like kyy is continuing where it was left
and yeah it's very intriguing..just for once or twice i was able to predict upcoming scenes😛
this story always keep me hooked to it..
and day by day it becomes more interesting...

once again thanks for starting this dear...

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Boomchelesa

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Posted: 8 years ago

#355

Of course m getting feels of watching kyy..!! And the dialogues which u write is the most amazing thing...manik & navyas dialog r something Which i really feel yess even in real kyy they used to speak tht way..!!! U r really doing a wondrful work..!!

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thamannamanan1

@thamannamanan1

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Posted: 8 years ago

#356

hello

hai

aaahhh

I don't know how to react shout louder laugh like crazy or jump like a monkeyyy

hhhuuu...

r u telling me that kabeer s alive

navya s dialogue was really funny

hamari maa kehthe hai ...

did she really saw him ???????????/

then our nandini madam

she promised to bring cake for her bacha party n she forgot as she was busy in her monster land

but surpriseee

she got a parcel

kids told its from her boyfrnd

the small gift box was for the big kid

😆😆😆

monster is waiting for a thanq message

😆😆😆

he selected a shoe for nandini awesome part

nandini murthy don't follow any fashion

he met her just one week before n he knows her in n out

{buddu ko samaj mein nahi aatha hai kyaa she s with him from saath janam }

😆😆😆

but one confusion

nandini madam has already typed one thanq message no then why he didn't receive it ?????????

did she forgot to press send button ?

or signal problem ????

do something fast nandini miss bcaz monster is going out of control waiting for your THANQ

awesome update

😆😆😆

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monstermanik

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Posted: 8 years ago

#357

wonderful story...
lived it

manan got separated bcoz of manik's dad ...
he made false promise to his son...
his point was right bt intensions were too bad...
poor manan...

i m loving this new manan journey...
nandu *trying* to hate manik bt alas...her heart disobey her every single time n she ends up caring for him all over again...
hope manik will get his memory back...

u r amazing writer...
keep it up...

cont soon
waiting

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Keeprak

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Posted: 8 years ago

#358

I came across this story just this morning and now I am done with all the chapters. I must tell you, this is a beautiful story and you are an amazing writer. You said that this is your first attempt at writing ffs and you are doing a wonderful job. This story has every emotion in right proportion, and they are all expressed beautifully. I had tears in my eyes at times and also smile on my lips at places. That it self shows how good a writer you are. Now I am all excited to know how manan's story will progress and also eagerly waiting for the return of kabir or should I say ranvir. Waiting for the next update. Stay blessed.

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1_drop_of_rain

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: monstermanik
wonderful story...
lived it

manan got separated bcoz of manik's dad ...
he made false promise to his son...
his point was right bt intensions were too bad...
poor manan...

i m loving this new manan journey...
nandu *trying* to hate manik bt alas...her heart disobey her every single time n she ends up caring for him all over again...
hope manik will get his memory back...

u r amazing writer...
keep it up...

cont soon
waiting

Thank you :) So you are one of my new readers, is it? If so, welcome to the family. From the next update, do drop in your mandatory comments 😉. I know I am being greedy, but this what a writer works for...

N thank you for your kind words :)

Love

RK21

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1_drop_of_rain

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: Keeprak
I came across this story just this morning and now I am done with all the chapters. I must tell you, this is a beautiful story and you are an amazing writer. You said that this is your first attempt at writing ffs and you are doing a wonderful job. This story has every emotion in right proportion, and they are all expressed beautifully. I had tears in my eyes at times and also smile on my lips at places. That it self shows how good a writer you are. Now I am all excited to know how manan's story will progress and also eagerly waiting for the return of kabir or should I say ranvir. Waiting for the next update. Stay blessed.

I am so glad to read this... your tears and your smiles and how you swing between the two, thats what i intend to do, to give you fifty shades of Manan.. in the most believable sort of way :)

So since u r my new reader, so I welcome u to this small family. B with me in this journey.

Love

Rk21

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