|| Tum Mile ~ A Musical ShraMan OS ||

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Hey! Am back with another OS!! This time it's a musical one. Which means lots of music😉
So enjoy😳
Do leave behind your love. I hope this new style is equally loved by you all.



Tum Mile




That Night was here... The Night was here... Was she happy that her best friend was returning after years...? Or was she sad that she had unintendedly had hurt him that day, and that bitter events would surface again? 

"Uggghhh!", she just wished things would have been better for them, both of them. Why did it end so abruptly, on such a tearful note?

The flashback made its way...


Shravan was waiting for her to come, one last time he could hear that voice before he left, maybe forever.

" Shravan!", that jerky screech appeared from behind him.
"Shravaannn!!!", she was running to catch his glimpse.

" Jaldi chaliye...", his voice got soaked in tears as sat in the car. Not once did he turn back. Not once did he see her coz he knew he wouldn't be able to leave then. Being content on hearing her voice and with a heart full of memories, he went away. Far away. London.


"Sigh!", Sumo was freaking out. Her heart raced at a million miles an hour. It could explode anytime. "If he didn't wish to come back or even talk to me all these years, what happened now?", she thought. It had took her ten years to get of that childish feelings. And now that finally when everything seemed settled, he was here to raise a storm.

" How would he be like now...? Tall? Handsome? Or that nerd?", she guessed.

Yeh bachpan kaa pyar agar kho jayega
 Dil kitna khali khali ho jayega
 Tere khayalo se ise aabad karenge tujhe yad karenge
 Jab hum jawan honge, janey kahan honge
 Lekin jahan honge waha fariyad karenge, tujhe yad karenge
 Jab hum jawan honge...


Trriinngg, Trrriinngg!! Went her cell.
It was Pushkar.

"Kahan hain yaar Sumo?! Sab wait kar rahein hain yahan Teri. Jaldi AA!"

She knew he wasn't waiting for her. Not after what she did. Never.

"Aa rahi Hoon yaar!", she said.




Party Venue

The Malhotra's

Sumo walked in nervously. Never had she been so nervous. Her eyes were scanning each and every person. Tensed, she walked around blankly and then slowly stopped. Why was she blank? 

" Sumo...?", came a tap on shoulder. Her heart froze. She turned around slowly. It was Pushkar.

"Ohh, Pushkar!", she heaved with relief.

" Kya hua Sumo, itni tensed Kyun hai? Kuch problem hai?", he asked.
"Aree nahi nahi, kuch nahi", even he made it out. " Sumo just relax girl!!", she thought.

"Pushkar ko pata hoga woh Kahan hain", she was about to question him. But just as she was about to do it, he got a call.
" Excuse me,", he said and gushed off.

Why was it getting so damn difficult?

She continued to roam around.
"Mujhe laga tha ki woh itna tall hai ki Ek kilometer se dikh jaaye", she wondered loudly.

" Hey Suman!", came a call. She turned around to see it was Urvashi and her girly gang.
She sighed aloud.
"Kuch Dhoondh rahi ho?", she taunted.

It was then he came. He returned to the party lawn after making an important call. And it didn't take him even a second to see Sumo, His Sumo amidst the crowd... Even after these long years.
He saw her from a distance. Kept looking at her while she babbled.


Hoton pe tere, shikwoon ka shor hain,
Par yeh nigaahein, kehti kuch aur hain...
Jo lamhe yeh hain mile,
Choot naa jaaye haath se...
Mil jaane de dil Jo bane,
Ek Duje Ke Vaaste...



" Kise Dhoondh rahi Hoon", Sumo corrected Urvashi. "Now will you please excuse me?", she was about to leave when Urvashi went ahead and stepped on her gown, making her trip.
She giggled on it cruelly.

Shravan just jerked himself ahead to catch her, but soon found that she had balanced herself. She had changed. Sumo had grown up, she needed no one to support her, unlike those days where she took his name for every other work. He smiled sadly and turned to meet others.

But Sumo's dress had been torn in this prank. She shot daggers at Urvashi which were enough to have her silent.

" Ommmggg Suummann!!", entered Vandy Bhabhi.
"Come let's change dear!", she took her inside to change her dress. Shravan saw her leaving. After all she still needed a little help.

After sometime, Sumo returned to the party. And there he was! In his black suit, black boots! Her Shravan was there, in front of her finally! She went towards him as he stood talking to others, not noticing her. As she came close enough, she was about to grab his attention but then

" Aree Suman!", Pushkar came back.
He had said it so loudly that now even Shravan had noticed she was standing near him.

But he continued to be unaffected and appeared to get engrossed in some discussions.

"Tu theek toh hai naa Suman? Aur yeh dress kaise badal gayi Teri?", he questioned.
" Wrong timing yaar", she thought.

But he dragged her aside and told her "Tu Shravan Bhaiyya se Mili yaa nahi?"
"Ab Tu Milne dega toh naa", she mentally grumbled. 
" Woh keh rahe the ki unko kisika intezaar thaa itne saalon se", he winked.

Sathiya tune kya kiya
Beliya ye tune kya kiya
Maine kiya tera intezar
Itna karo naa muje pyar
Itna karo naa muje pyar

Sathiya tune kya kaha
Beliya ye tune kya kaha
Yu na kabhi karna intezar
Maine kiya hain tumase pyar
Maine kiya hain tumase pyar


Haaye sacchi?! Her heart leapt.

He looked at him from a distance and at that same instant he looked at her. They shared a split second eyelock after which Shravan walked away to the food counter.

"Huh?!", she gasped.

Benaam rishta woh...
Benaam rishta woh, bechain karta jo
Ho naa.. sake jo bayaan, darmiyaan
Darmiyaan Darmiyan
Darmeyaan Darmeyan
Kuchh to tha tere-mere darmiyaan
Haaye
Darmiyaan Darmiyan
Darmeyaan Darmeyan
Kuchh to tha tere-mere darmiyaan


" Theek hai! Nahi milna hai toh naa sahi! Main kaunsi mari jaa rahi Hoon Milne ke liye", she knew she was lying. She also walked off, in the opposite direction and Shravan turned back and saw her leaving.

 "Huh!", he too walked off.

" Ladies and Gentlemen!", announced Pushkar. "Bhai dance ke bina bhi yeh party bhi bhala koi party hai? So common people, hit the dancefloor!"

Suman stood aside enjoying the music when Pushkar grabbed her hand."Chal naa!", he took her.

All the couple's started swooning to the music and changing partners. Urvashi caught hold of Shravan and they joined too. They both looked at each other, least interested in the person they were dancing with.

As they changed and changed partners, finally came that beat when Shravan and Sumo came face to face, directly, with no one in between. He looked into her eyes. The charm was gone. That innocence was gone. Pain prevailed and he could see it.

She looked into his eyes. That childish glance was gone. That nerd was gone. Stubborness prevailed and she could see it.


Tum mile toh mil gaya yeh jahaan
Tum mile toh har pal hai naya
Tum mile toh sabse hai... faasla
Tum mile toh jaadu chaa gaya
Tum mile toh jeena aa gaya
Tum mile toh maine paaya... hai khuda


They stood still in the centre, while others danced. They were too busy to dance. Hand in hand they stood.

Tumse milke aisa laga tumse milke
armaan huey purhey dil ke
aye meri jaan e wafa
teri meri mere teri ik jaan hai
saath tere rahenge sadha
tumse na honge juda
tumse milke aisa laga tumse milke


Finally, Shravan realised it and turned to leave when Sumo's bracelet got stuck around his coat button and they were unable to separate.

They both moved aside. Sumo struggled to get it separated but was unable to do so. A thousand words to tell him. And this was the moment. But somehow, she couldn't mutter even his name. 

Kyun Hain dabi si khwahishein,
Dil mein tere bewajaa...
Jaake Zara use bol de,
Chahta jise Tu raha... Ho ho...
Kahin Teri khamoshiyan,
Jeet naa jaaye pyaar se...
Mil jaane de dil Jo bane...
Ek Duje Ke Vaaste...

Finally, she removed her bracelet and left it hanging there , on the edge of his coat. Without a sigh, she left, just as he had left. Shravan stood there for sometime, looking at her. Then he left too, blank and reminiscing the past and present. He did remove the bracelet afterwards and kept it safely in his cupboard.





Hope it was nice!


Love,
Mahishee😳

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Posted: 8 years ago
It was great Mahi!!
It was as beautiful as your other works...
Keep writing more!!!!
And, congrats on becoming a rockerz..
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This is amazing


Mahi mahi mahi mahi yaar I love you
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Posted: 8 years ago
This is good man ... 
i really enjoyed reading it from her emotions to his all so well put,

do write more
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Posted: 8 years ago
Very well written Mahishee 😃 plz do write more os ss ff 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
This was amazing...
Loved it...
Continue soon...
Love Ishita 
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Posted: 8 years ago
OMG this is brilliant! Absolutely enjoyed reading it! Please do write more xx
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Posted: 8 years ago
Another beautiful os Mahi❤️
loved d ending especiallyyy😳
Him keeping her braclet 
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I just realized I needed to read the written emotions of that event! And you did the job perfectly well. Thank you so much for sharing such a wonderful piece. ❤️
Do write more often.
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Posted: 8 years ago
omg 
so adorable.
u write so well. like really
keep writing. 👍🏼