|| Kya Hua... Tera Vadaa ~ A ShraMan OS || (Part Two Updated)

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Hello all lovelies!🤗
Today, I am here with my first ever writing on this Magical ShraMan... So do read it and enjoy!


Note: I like writing, it's more like my passion. It's been an year since I started as an official FF writer... And the journey uptill now has been classic! I have been crazily addicted to this serial since a week, but it was today that I decided to pen down thoughts on them. Not that it's great, but I love expressing feelings in form of words.

So without much ado, let's begin!




               Kya Hua Tera Vadaa




Night time. The stars were twinkling in the sky and soft humming sound of insects could be heard, which seemed in complete harmony. The entire lane had fallen silent, except for the whistling rush of a few cars here and there.

The Tiwari Mansion had slipped into slumber, except for Suman. The night lamp of her room was still burning. As she lay upside down on her King sized bed, uploading her FB status and her outings today.
She mentally recalled everything that she did today and typed it...

Shopping @ Veggie Market

Seeing children's happy faces on eating yummy food@ Ground
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After she had done, she was about to close her lappy when a she heard a notification.

Shravan Malhotra sent you a message.

"Online, itni raat ko?", she quizzed. Quickly, she clicked on the notification and read the message.

Kal kya kar rahi Ho?

Suman recalled her appointments... 
Payment collection, Preeta kar legi...
Shopping aaj hi ki...
Dabbo ke exams bhi khtam Ho gaye...

Nothing much... She replied.

Great! Then let's meet tomorrow @ CCD at 3?Tumahaare ghar ke paas waala, OK?
" Hmm..., CCD?", she was a bit puzzled.
She then giggled a bit and typed something

Kyun, date pe le jaa rahe Ho?

Ugghh... Jo samjhana hai samajh lo!

Okay then, kal milte hain.

A bright smile appeared on her weary face as all her heaviness vanished. Shravan always managed to do that. She switched off the lights and lay on her. 

The recent events flashed in her mind... How the both of them had resolved fights. Shravan didn't go to London after all and her house matter too had been solved. They had come to talking terms again and it seemed things were getting back to normal. She was the fun sumo again , though Shravan wasn't that nerd, and she was glad about it.

But main hamesha mere buddhu Shravan ko miss karungi!, she thought.

And thinking about all this, she too slipped into her dreamland.



The Next Day

Brrr... Brrr... Brrr
The alarm went up.

"Sone do mujhe please", she pleaded to her alarm but it refused to shut down.
Surrendered, she finally opened her eyes and saw the sunshine entering her room.

" Meri tarah Mera alarm bhi bohot ziddi hai!", she giggled and shut it down.

"Chal Sumo, aaj bohot kaam hai!". The previous night chat hit her head and she remembered... 

A smile appeared as she saw the clock. It was ONLY 7!! 
" Ugghh, 8 hours left", she sulked.

But time flew by as one by one she completed tasks... Getting ready, delivering tiffins, seeing accounts and calculating profit.

Finally, at 1.30, her chores were over.

"Preeta, main jaa rahi hon, tum log nikal jaana time se", she said and was about to leave.

" Aree wah Sumo, aaj toh Badi khush hai, kya baat hai?", she winked at her. "Koi mil gaya kya, woh sapno ka rajkumaar?", she said dreamily.

" Oyye Chup kar! Tu bhi naa, bass kahin bhi chalu Ho jaati hai!"

1.30 ,she looked at her watch. Matlab an hour to get ready.
"Bohot hai Sumo, vaise bhi Tu kitni khoobsurat hai, ready hone mein time hi nahi lagta!", she giggled to herself.

By 2, she reached her home. She quietly slipped into her room. She very well knew that people in this house just waited impatiently to load her with chores... And today she couldn't take even a tiny risk.


She sat in front of her dressing table. 

"Kya pehnu... Uff, yeh kapde!"
"Sumo itna Kyun Soch rahi hai? Pehen le kuch bhi..."
"Nahi yaar, ab woh bada aadmi hai, acche se dress up toh hona hi padega"

She realised a tennis match had begun in her head.

"Bass!", she freaked out. She went straight upto her closet and pulled out a long kurti and teamed it up with glossy leggings.
A little kajal, gloss and a lose hairdo, she was done!

" Wah! Kya lag rahi hai Sumo! Tera jawab nahi!"

She patted her back and took the car keys. It was 2.15, 45 minutes left. But it was always better to reach early.

As she crossed the courtyard and moved towards the door, Mami stared at her angrily and in her usual grunt, Began grumbling.

"Yeh Dekho! Chal padi shehzaadi! Ghar mein kya kaam hai, isse kuch Matlab nahi. Yeh accha hai, yeh bann thann kar ghoome aur hum yahan pisste rahein." Sumo stopped.

But today Sumo didn't want to listen. Even once she couldn't follow her heart? She did all that they said, but not today... For God's sake! 

So she smartly ignored the entire babble and continued walking towards the door.

"Aaj agar Priya yahan hoti toh kya...", Mami didn't want to stop though.

Enough!, she thought. This was the limit. Why bring mom in between?
She turned around and said blankly.

"Boliye Mamiji, kya kaam hai?", she killed her hopes.

" Bartan pade hain kitchen mein, aaj kaamwaali nahi aayi.", Mami said heartlessly. Sumo stiffened herself and went to the kitchen.

She washed and wiped all the vessels and finally when it was done, she thought she could leave now but no! Mami had other plans. She further made her wash clothes, fold the dried ones...

Sumo looked at the watch, it was 4.15!! 

"Nahi..." Her heart screamed.


(To Be Contd...)




Hope it was fine

Love,
Mahishee😳

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                                                Part two




It was beyond time and yet she had work, which refused to get complete. A lone tear fell off her face. Didn't she deserve to live?
She looked up with an expression of complaint. Why was her life so?

And as if in response to this, the bell rang. She went to open it. It was Daboo,the genius. A ray of hope flickered back in her heart.

"Daboo... Woh mujhe bahar jaana hai... Aur", she started.
" Aur meri chudail Maa ne aapko naukrani bana diya?", he completed.

"Tumhe kaise pata?", she asked innocently.
" Mujhe kya, kisi buddhu ko bhi pata chal jaayega", he giggled. Sumo looked in the mirror. Half an hour of dressing... Down the drain! Grrr... This was annoying!

"Bohot nainsafi hai my lord!", Daboo announced. " Par yeh kanoon ka rakhvaala aisa nahi hone dega! Aap jayiye Sumo di, yeh Daboo dekh lega", he said in full confidence.
"Par Daboo..."
"Aap jayiye!"

OK, whatsoever it was ... She didn't mind it. After a short makeover, she rushed to her car. It was 4.20.

She checked her phone. 9 missed calls, 11 messages. Ohh damn! She was hell late!

"Call back karke kya karoon? Pata nahi woh vahan hoga yaa nahi... Chala gaya hoga... Sumo! You are a big idiot!"

Sumo raced through the streets as if in an Olympic race. Her desperation was on seventh heaven and she needed to reach asap. 
In ten minutes, she was in CCD, frantically looking out for him. She checked every table, every person. She stared at all the faces seated but she couldn't find him.

"Ugghh... Pagal ladki! Ab kya karegi?"
She dropped her bag in dejection and heaved a sigh. He was gone. She had failed him once again.

"Late aane ki aadat Abhi bhi nahi gayi?", called someone. 


Kya hua tera vaada woh kasam woh iraada 
bhoolega dil jis din tumhe 
woh din zindagi ka aakhri din hoga 
Kya hua tera vaada woh kasam woh iraada

Bhoolega dil jis din tumhe
woh din zindagi ka aakri din hoga 


Sumo's face lit up like a Diwali lamp. It was him undoubtedly! She could identify him even in millions of people. He was there! Tears started flowing as she turned around to find him standing right behind her! He had waited for her... Over an hour.

" Woh... I am sorry...", she babbled. But seriously, she was out of words for this.

"Mujhe laga tha tum itne saalon mein thodi si responsible Ho gayi hogi, par kuch log badalte hi nahi!", he said tauntingly.

Sumo's smile turned into a slight frown.

When through both of them this flashback flashed. They remembered how even years before she had made him wait for over six hours in hot Sun, waiting to give her her homework book.

Sumo was feeling terrible. And ashamed too!

" Ab finally AA hi gayi Ho toh baithein?", Shravan asked. Sumo sheepishly followed him to the table and they sat.

"Tum seriously Kabhi time par nahi Ho sakti?", he asked.

" Shravan ka baccha, ab Ho gaya late toh chodega nahi... Kya kahun ise?", she thought.

"Oye...!", he waved his hand in front of her, " Kahan kho gayi?"

"Areee woh tumne yahan kisliye bulaaya tha?", she brought up the important topic, and changed the present one too.

Shravan's face turned soft as a smile appeared. From his pocket, he tenderly removed a baali.

Sumo looked puzzled for a while, but after a few seconds she realised it. Her face turned so bright as she started smiling happily. She extended her hand to grab that baali but Shravan swerved it back.

" Ruko! Pehle bataoon tumhe yaad hai?"



Flashback


At the Farewell Party

Shravan had been waiting at the entrance for quite sometime now. It was a couple entry so obviously he was waiting for his Sumo so that they could go in. But he would have waited even if it wasn't a couple entry.He knew that she was never on time... But atleast today... Atleast today she should have been here. Even her cell was unreachable. As he was about to try it for the fifteenth time, he saw her approaching from at a distance. Dressed in a pink flowing gown, his Sumo was looking adorable today!

She saw him too and smiled at him. 
"Aree, tum Abhi yahi Ho, Andar gaye nahi?", she asked.

" Pagal Sumo, Phirse Bhool gayi ki couple entry hai, yeh ladki bhi naa!", he thought. 

As he was about to hold her hand and take her inside, a tall handsome boy appeared from nowhere. He politely asked for her hand and she readily gave in.

Shravan was just too shocked to respond.
"Aise kya dekh rahe Ho? Ohh... Main toh milvana hi Bhool gayi. Isse mil, yeh hai Rocky, my partner for today."

Shravan felt as if his world crashed in front of him. His Sumo... With this ugly Rocky. Sumo walked past him, ignoring his tears.


Kya hua tera vaada woh kasam woh iraada 
bhoolega dil jis din tumhe 
woh din zindagi ka aakhri din hoga 
Kya hua tera vaada woh kasam woh iraada

Bhoolega dil jis din tumhe
woh din zindagi ka aakri din hoga 

As she was on the gate, she tripped on her gown,but balanced herself. She moved ahead , into the Hall, but failed to notice that one of her earring had dropped. Shravan saw it and went ahead and picked it up. He remembered Sumo telling him that it was her mother's jewellery. And today she had dropped it so casually. He picked it up and left home while Sumo couldn't find that piece ever. Shravan had left for London, the very next day.

Yaad hai mujhko tune kaha tha
Tumse nahi ruthenge kabhi
Dil ki tarah se haath mile hain
Kaise bhala chootengey kabhi
Meri baahon mein beeti har shaam
bewafa yeh bhi kya yaad nahin


Flashback ends


"Yaad hai...", Sumo said heavily and softly.
" Ab bhi naaraaz Ho?", she asked. "Naraaz nahi Hoon... Par yeh kissa hamesha yaad Rahega".

O kehne waaley mujhko farebi
Kaun farebi hai yeh bata
Woh jisne gham liya pyaar ke khaatir
yah jisne pyaar ko bech diya
Nasha daulat ka aisa bhi kya
ke tujhe kuch bhi yaad nahi

Kya hua tera vaada woh kasam woh iraada
bhoolega dil jis din tumhe 
woh din zindagi ka aakhri din hoga 

Kya hua tera waada woh kasam woh iraada


Sumo was touched. Every time she met him, she saw his new face. The first time they met, he failed to recognise her. The second time, he gave her a gift and invitation. The third time he insulted her in front of a crowd of hundred people. Then, helped her repaying her greedy Maami. Refused to take her jewellery and called it cheap. Helped her again in saving her house. Cherished all her memories, even the faint ones and he had safely kept a small thing like this all this while. Who was he?...


Sumo was about to take it back when her phone rang.
She received the call, but Shravan snatched it.

" Pehle toh late Aayi, ab phone disturb kar raha hai", he said.

He was about to tell the person on the other end but heard sharp, rough voices.

"Suman ki bacchi! Aise kaise kaam chodkar chali gayi? Samajhti kya hai Tu? Daboo ko bol diya ke Preeti se kaam karva Lena? Aisa bhi koi Karta hai bhala? Manaa tune bahar naa jakar Bartan maanje, kapde dhoye par phir bhi!"

Shravan had heard it all,inspite of the resistance from Sumo. His heart felt heavy. Kaam? That too in such a harsh manner? It was so unfair! Then he realised that Pushkar had told him Sumo wasn't that Sumo whom he knew, her life had changed. He had underestimated those talks but now he knew it all. Sumo lived with hungry monsters who treated her like a servant. And yet till now he didn't know of it. He knew nothing about her.

Sumo took back her phone and earring too. She felt that she couldn't match her eyesight with him. All the time she was looking elsewhere.

They kept talking of trivial things. When it was around 5, Sumo got up to leave. Still, she couldn't look into his eyes, as she always did.

"Ab jaana chahiye. Thank you for the earring. Maa Ki thi.", she said.
Shravan knew she was returning back into her gloomy house. Yet, she wasn't hesitant. That was the new Sumo.

He dropped her till her car and saw her leaving.

He recalled instances how she was a big kaamchor, how she ran away from her homework. And now, this Sumo was so different.

" I'll have to know her all over again, and how did she change. "

"I'll have to know this new Shravan,all over again.", thought Sumo as she drove back home.


The End



I hope you all like it
Love,
Mahishee😳

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You it's awesome

Shranan's fb chat




And mamiji grrr



It's awesome mahi



Mahi love u
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Mami 😡
Tumne aise kyun kia
How can you leave the OS on a Cliff-hanger 🥺

Update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
mahi...
good story moved to next track

liked sumo and Shravan fb talk
liked prerna and sumo convo

ohhh ye mamiji bhi OS me aana hai kya...?

it's wonderful... plz update soon
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... ohhh NAHIII... mamiji ko me goli se dhichkawww kar dungi... jaldi se update verna
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aww..ab kya hoga?plz jaldi update karna😊
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Part two updated... Do catch it!
Res for all replies!

Thanks :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
awesome..👏👏.saw the updated part only now.plz do write more...😊
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Second part fabulous