OS - IMPRESSING SUMO ( teenage sharman )asli wala hain .

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He looked at the 1.5 kg dumbles, heck. It looks heavier than he had seen online.
He gulped and tries to lift the dumbbells but that stubborn thing refused to get lifted .

"Ughhh" he gathered all the energy that his 16 year old body could have provided him but again that dam thing still rested where it was.

After the third try which also failed by the way he sat beside the dumbbells in the Indian style his hands on his sweat coated face.

" Yar agar salman jaisa koi body builder mil jaye toh life set ho jaye by God " she had mumumbled admiring strong muscles of salman a week ago a   when they were watching movie at her place.

" Tujhe ASA ladka chahiye , pehelwan chap " he prompted the question suddely secretly hoping she was just joking.

" Han toh , Kyun ? she asked without taking her eyes off the screen.

" kuch nahin ,asayhi " he adjusted his speaks stunned by the sudden change in the behaviour of his sumo .

No doubt she enjoyed this song each and everytime it played but she had never really shown interest in any male species before . So he never actually knew how to impress her not that he needed to .They were already best friends but he wanted her to look at him the way she was looking at salman right now of which chances were rare , becoz according to the look on her face she liked strong dabang type guys whereas here he was 55 kilo weight getting bullied by Chetan every second day of the school.

Suddenly his eyes glimed behind his speaks with wild idea that had occupied his mind then and there .
A.three.step.plan.

1) work on the body for two months

2) challenge chetan infront of the whole school for a fight

3) impress suman


Unknown to his brilliant plan suman started cutely mumbling the song along which she enjoyed every time it played.

" OH oh Jane Jana dundhe tujhe diwana sapno mein Roz aye aa zindagi mein Ana suman "

" SUMAN" came a naughty voice of phusku

"S...Sanam bola meine, oh oh Jane Jana. dundhe tujhe dewna.
Sapno mein Roz aye.
Aa zindigi mein Ana SANAM. han sanam , tune galti se suman suna hoga dono ek jaisa hi sound karta haina .pushku rolled his eyes mentally as shravan actually recited it like a poem ." tu yaha kya kar rahin hain" he asked adjuating his speaks nerviously on his nose .

" Han woh meine apko dumbells ke pas sir par hath rakhe o oh jane jana gate hue dekha toh socha apko bata doon ki en dumbbells NE apne kan paida hote hi gawa diye the." Pushku smirked at his brother galti SE sun liya hoga as if he is going to believe it his brother needs to know that he is fifteen not five.



Shravan actually wanted to hit himself with the same dumbells for mumbling that stupid song along with the memory of suman like a love sick puppy but remembering how heay it was he dropped the idea.

Waise apko achanak se in sab cheezo mein interest kab se hone laga " pushku walked passed pushku towards bumblles picking them like a vegetable and adjusted himself comfortably on the bed. A controlled laughter threatened to escape his mouth when he realized that it was just 1.5 kgs.

" Woh mein Chetan , mein use challenge karna ccha...chahta hoon " this words sounded surreal even to himself .

." CHESS MEIN DUMBBELLS USE HOTE HEIN ? Shravan smaked his head when that idiot genuinely looked shocked and the fact that he was holding those dumbbells like a freaking toy iriked him more.

" mein chees mein nahin fighting mein " he mumbeled to himself

Chess mein Kya "? That stupid still sounded curious.

" CHess mein NAHIN gadhe fighting mein harana chahta ho. " he finally said.

Pushu almost dropped the dumbbells he was holding. He had met this Chetan champ , a well built bull who will easily chew away his fifty five kg brother like a grass

He composed himself from the shock his brother had just delivered .

" Bhai come sit " he patted the place beside him. When shravan hastily took the place he again started. " Dekhiye Bhai har insan mein koi na koi gunn hota hain ap exam papers ko kaccha chaba jatein hain aur wo Chetan chabata hain logo ko ,ladkiyon ka kya hain agar hath pair sahi salamat rahein toh phir Pat jayegi . ap samaj rahein haina ? . " pushkar delevired that psychotherapic leture as if he was talking to a mentally retarded person .

Shravan jerked his hand from his shoulder" tera homework baki haina ja kar warna dad ko batata Hun.apne " pushkar forgot everything which had occurred in last 15 minutes as soon as he heard bade papa's name " A..pko kaise pata mera homework baki hain " he tremble d slightly . " Rocket science nahin hain hamesha baki hi hota" shravan replied with a shrug.

That made him leave but remembering something shravan stopped him " sun, dad ko mat batana " "Oh ho Bhai mein to vaise bhi unhe kuch bhi nahin batata Hun " he joked and started leaving but shravan again stopped him " sun ye dumbbells kaise uthaye thein tune "

" Han wo side SE nahin bech SE uthate hain " this time he couldn't control his laughter ." isiliye kehta hoon Bhai padhai ke alwa bhi
kuch kar liya karo,ASE impress karoge sumo ko woh toh ase dedh kg ke dumbbells utha utha ke Marti hain bullies ko " pushku teased his brother .

" DAD ... " shravan called his dad who was probably in court right now but that made pushku ran till his room.
...Edited by sweetmishthi - 8 years ago

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Part 2

Two months later. ( After training ).

" A ... A... "

" Chup gadha kisne bola tha us sandh ko lal kapda dikhane ke liye . ab aa kar raha hain " sumo scoled him without having a pity on his black eye and bloody nose.

She was right though pore panch minute bhi nahin chala woh challenge all he could remember was he challenged him outside the scholl after school was over, punched him in his stomach and then sandh decided to get active too and started punching .After two beatings shravan opened his eyes in sumo's home .



" Tu Mujhe Kyun dat rahein hain tune hi toh bola tha problem SE lad lad le lad liya . aur tune bhi toh madad nahin ki."

" Ek mukka maronge Na doosri ankh bhi soojh jayegi ladne SE mera MATLAB tha princy ko Jake complain kar . tune apni hadiya tudwali ! aur madad ki toh bat hi mat kar. side mein dekh.

Shravan stood up from the bed slowly and looked at the sofa there stood that bull but he looked in pain with a hand on the side of the mouth .

" Abe oye Jo bolne ke liya kaha tha phataphat bol aur nikal Varna dusra daat bhi Tod dongi . "

"shravan i am sorry Mujhe Asia behave nahin karna chahiye tha pls Mujhe maf karo." He recited the complete apology in one go

" Han han shravan NE maf kar diya ab meri bat sun voh sunhere din jab tu ise bukky Kia karta tha UN Dino SE leke ab tak tu sab kuch bhul Jayega samjha tu ise nahin janta aur isko mein yad nahin karne doongi."

Shravan kept looking back and forth listning to their conversation like a lost child.

That bull noddrd his head in complete obedience. " Waise tum itni taqleef kyu utha rahein ho uske liye .tum dono dost ho?.

" lagtA hain there ma bap ko nyi batesi ka karcha karwana hi padega tujhe bola Na sab bhul ja agar ye bat tujhe yad Ayi toh ." Shravan got a little hurt but this was always like this and it didn't matter that much now.

" Han han pata pata hain dat Tod dongi ja rraha hoon " he rushed out the room and sumo paid attention back to shravan who was still confused so she explained

" Jab tak Mujhe pata chala tere is suicide mission ke bare tab tak fight shuru ho gai thi aur shuru hotae hi khatam bhi ho gai thi uske bad mein shuru ho gai . " she said as if she was talking about how she made a Dish today." Ab ASE mat dekh ruk khana lati hoon tere liye. Aj sev ki sabzi banayi hain tujhe acchi lagegi phir pain killers le Lena "

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When she comes back with a food inside she was surprised to see that shravan was sitting with her civics assignment in his hand which he had almost completed.

She kept the food in shravan lap and took that sheet in her hand grinning like a maniac to see that shravan had solved all the difficult question in the sheet.

" Thanks yar shravu tujhe pata hain do din SE doondh rahin hoon ki konso dhara kis case ya situation PE lage aur tune 10 min mein solve kar diya. "

" Mere Papa lawyer hain sumo , ye basic traffic aur election laws toh mere baye hath ka khel tha. " he said proudly putting that roti full of sev sabzi in his mouth when sumo startled him by huginh him with full strength.

" Thanks ya shravu dekhnabek tu ek din bohot bada lawyer banega " she said still hugging him sounding highly impressed.

Maybe then you will proudly introduced me as your friend to everybody he thought with a sad smile playing on his lips

But he was happy for two reason one that he finally impressed his sumo that too just by being himself not up to the extent he wanted but atleast he earned a hug.

Second by considering what she did to Chetan it was final that for next ten years koi bhi ladka uske five meter radius mein bhi nahin ayega so he had nothing to worry about atleast for next ten tweleve years.



Comment and like warna battisi behjti hoo.

Edited by sweetmishthi - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Wow a teenage Shraman os. It was so adorable and supercute . I loved it.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Aayushi15

Wow a teenage Shraman os. It was so adorable and supercute . I loved it.

tnx glad u liked it
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Posted: 8 years ago
It's lovely

U should write more and more on Sharman
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: --fero--

It's lovely

U should write more and more on Sharman



If people will like this I surely will tnx yar fero for such a lovely comment
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Posted: 8 years ago
Lovely... Mazaa AA gaya! Sorry was being late par next time pls PM karna!
So damn funny🤣🤣
Battisi part was 🤣
And pushy was ❤️

Loved it! Do write more!
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Originally posted by: Artist_Forever

Lovely... Mazaa AA gaya! Sorry was being late par next time pls PM karna!

So damn funny🤣🤣
Battisi part was🤣
And pushy was❤️

Loved it! Do write more!



I will surely agar response accha raha toh 😕

Tere replys hamesha khush kar dete hai yar thx for such a detailed comment it feels so great   😊 Edited by sweetmishthi - 8 years ago
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This is sooo cute. Loved it❤️