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This is my first ever os on Lakshmila. Plz forgive the mistakes n do tell how it is. Then only I will try to post something more
"Urmila dwar kholiye..." screamed Mandvi's voice
"Didi aaj apki tapas poorn homr wali hai. Jijasree laut rhe hai, Sita didi aur Ram jijasree k saath"
It was like somebody gave Her the medicine she needed, like she got back air to breath.
Urmila-"meri pratiksha ka ant abhi nhi hua hai... jab tak unke pad-chap mere kano ko sparsh nhi karte meri tapasya ka ant kaise ho sakta hai?" She touched her mangalsutra, the sign of her love being fine n all healthy, the sign which gave her the power to survive these years.
Hire moti nain na chahu,
Main toh chahu sangam tera.
14 years she spend without him, only with the hope that these 14 years are nothing infront of their promises for eternity n their unconditional love.
Not only her Sita didi, jijasree n her husband were on exile, but she was also on an exile for 14 years. She counted days n spend sleepless nights just waiting for her husband.
Main toh teri saiyyan,
Tu hai mera...
Today the news came that he was coming back, n along with that she felt as if she got her reason of breathing back again.
She did not opened the door for anyone in all these years.
Soon her sisters went away knowing she will not open the door. Urmila went to her almirah n opened it after years. She lived a simple life like her husband, without any jewel or luxury.
Urmila-"aaj unke liye shringaar karungi main. Sirf unke liye"
Saiyyannn... saiyyannn...
She opened the almirah n the first thing she saw was a pair of bangles. She remembered the day when lakshman brought it for her.
"Urmila where are you?"
"What happened Arya?" She came inside their dorm.
"Come n sit over here" he signalled towards the couch. She sat near him.
"Apne netra band kare aur apne haatho ko aage badhaiye"
"Ji?!?!" She asked confused
"Jo bola hai vo kariye"
N she obeyed his words n closed her eyes. She felt something crawling up her hands, n she realised that it was HIM who had caught her hands.
Tu jo chu le pyaar se aram se marr jau
she felt some tingling sensation when he touched her for the very first time.
"Netra kholiye"
She opened her eyes to find a pair of bangles in her hand.
She looked up at him surprised.
"Vo humari pehli raatri ko humne apko koi tohfa nhi diya tha na... isliye. Hum apke liye kuch vishesh karna chahte the isliye apke ke hatho k liye ye kangan banwae humne. Apko kaise laga?"
She smiled at her husband's innocence.
"Ye ati sundar hai arya. Dhanyavad iske liye" she smiled n looked at the first ever gift she received from him.
She kept her head on his shoulder. Moon was also smiling looking at the couple infront of him n their puruty of love.
Aa jaa chanda baho mei tujh mei hi main kho jau...
She touched the bangles n felt as if Lakshman is standing beside her. It still gave her the feeling n essence of her husband's touch. She looked at the moon, who was smiling at her, as if telling her that its time when her wait will payback.
Unknowingly saline drops started flowing from her eyes after touching the bangles.
Saiyyan ... saiyaann...
She took out the attire of her wedding n started getting ready as if she was a newly wedded bride. N why not ! Today was no less than her wedding day. Her husband was coming back to her, making her feel like newly wed.
Mere din khushi se jhoome gaaye raatein.
Pal pal mujhe doobayein jaatein jaatein,
She was smiling n blushing profusely. She remembered how he was smiling n giving her teasing looks on their wedding. She was reliving the past which she had buried when her husband had gone.
Tujhe jeet jeet haru, yeh pran pran waru
She remembered when she got the news that Lakshman was hit by arrow. She felt as if it was her own life coming out. But then it was all about her love n believe that her husband will be fine. He had promised to come back to her, n he will surely fulfill his promise. Afterall, it was raghu-kul's reeti to fulfill their promise. His brother Rama had followed this, n he follows Rama's path so he will also come back to keep his words. N indeed her trust paid her back
Haye aise main niharu, teri aarti utaaru.
She was wearing all her jewels after 14 years. N why not her life was in her husband n what was the use to get all dressed up if ur lover is nit there to acknowledge n appreciate it. Ahe had closed herself behind the doors of their room. Afterall all the relations was because of him n if he is not there , what the whole world will mean to her.
Tere naam se jude hai saare naate,
Saiyaan, saiyannn..
Banke maala prem ki, tere tan pe jhar jhar jaaoon
She started arranging their room inorder to welcome him. Her sisters returned to ask her to open the door, but they knew that the door would open only when the key of that door her husband arrives.
Baithun naiyan preet ki sansaar se har jaoon main,
Tere pyaar se tar jaaoon
Saiyaan, Saiyannn
It was now dawn-break n now the dam of her patience was on the verge to break . She was getting impatient with each passing minute n her anxiety level was increasing. She was feeling nervous, excited both at the same time.
Then the news came that pushpak viman had landed n now the trio would enter the palace anytime. She remebered how he pushed her when she stopped him from going to attack Bharat. She was finding solace in their fights n comfort in their memories
Yeh naram-naram nasha hai badhta jaaye.
Here the trio came inside the palace. Whole of Ayodhya, their mother, brothers n sister-in-law were standing to greet them.
His eyes could find everyone but whom he was searching for.
Sumitra-"Lakshman jisse tumhare netra khoj rhe hai vo yaha nhi hai."
He looked confused.
Sita-"ye aap kya keh rhi hai mata?"
Kausaliya-"sumitra sach keh rhi sita. Tumlog vaha van mei vanvaas par the par Urmila vo toh raj mahal ke andar vanvas jaise reh rhi thi. Inn 14 varso mei usne swayam ko apne kamre mei band kar ke rakha tha. Ek pal ke liye bhi bahar nhi aayi. Inn varso mei usne na kuch zyada khaya na piya, bus utna hi loya jitne mei vo jivit reh sake."
Sita-"pati se viyog ka dukh aur dard kya hota hai ye main janti hu. Devarji aap srigha..." but He was already on his way to open the closed doors
Koi pyaar se ghunghatiya deta uthaye,
She could feel his steps approaching, could hear his heart beating somewhere near. N just then the door opened n came his voice, "Urmila... priye..." n she saw the face she wanted to see for years
Ab baawara hua mann,
Jag ho gaya hai roshan,
The glow n smile on their face could tell tgeir whole story. Both were looking with the feeling of longing, pain n Bove all Love. She started taking small steps towards him.
yeh nayi-nayi suhagan,
ho gayi hai teri jogan,
She took the plate of Arti n perfkrmed his arti. The mere feeling of being able to touch Him after years made her close her eyes. It was as if she wad trying to freeze the moment forever n ever.
koi prem ki pujaran mandir sajaye.
He touched her n said, "kaise ho urmila?"
Urmila-"bina atma ke sarir jis prakar hota hai ! Aaj mujhe meri atma punah mil gyi ab main thik hu"
Laksman-"ye kya dasha bana li hai? Apna khyal kyu nhi rakha?" he could see dark circles n paleness in her face. He could feel how weak she has become over the years.
Urmila-"meri dasha ka jawab hai kya kabhi sooraj-mukhi bina sooraj ke khil sakta hai ? Uske pran toh suraj mei baste hai. Aaj 14 varso ke grahan ke baad mujhe mera suraj nazar aaya hai, ab main bhi khil uthi hu"
Saiyaaan, Saiyaaan (2)
She smiled at him. Despite the weakness n paleness, she was the most beautiful woman for him.
Urmila-"par aap itne kamzor kyu lag rhe hai. Vann mei thik se nhi khaya?"
He had come home after years n instead of complaining she was worried for his health. How he missed her !
Urmila-"koi baat nhi main abhi khana bana ke lati hu. Apko bhook lagi hogi" she smiled at him n started going out.
Heere moti mai na chahu mai to chahu sangam tera,
He caught hold of her hand n made her bang his chest. She felt her breathes getting heavy.
Laksman-"hume aaram sirf aur sirf aap hi de sakti hai." He hugged her, she too allowed herself to drown in his arms. Now nothing could seperate them, they had united for once and for all. There relation is for eternity.
mai na jaanu, tu hi jaane mai to teri, tu hai mera...(2)
mai to teri...
tu hai meraaa..
Do tell how it is...
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