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1(There was noice everywhere in the palace aare obviously it had to be bcoz it was sita's swayamvar) 'Everything has to be perfect' urmila said to the dasi. (Her voice was so sharp and loud that people who are far away could also hear her :p)sunaina:Urmila kahan ho putri shigra aao, urmila , URMILA.(Par humari urmila ko toh kuch gyat hi nai hota ki kaun usse kab bula raha hai)Su: yahan ho aur hum tumhe pure mahal mei dhoond rahe thae. Kya kar rahi ho?U: maa humme shama kijiye, vo hum sita didi ke swayamvar ki tayari kar rahe hai. Yeh dekhiye unke liye jhumke banaye hai vo bhi mor ke aakar wale , kaise hai?(Sunaina was proud of her daughter, she was her own blood, and the love she gave to sita was so pure)Su: bhaut sundar hai bilkul tumhari tarah. Ek kaam karo yehi jhumke naa sita swayamvar mei pehenegi.U: parantu maa wahan par inhe pehene ki kya awashyakta , vo aur bhi sundar jhumke daal sakti hainaSu: haan parantu yeh sabse kimti honge sita ke liye kyonki tumne itne pyaar se jo banaya hai. Aare dekho baato mei pata hi nai mai kis kam se aai thi aur yahan hi bhaith gai. Putri aashram jao aur mata gargi ko nimantran de aao avem wahan bhi sajavat karva do. Kyonki wahan bhi log theherenge naa.U: theek hai ma jaise aap kahen.(Urmila left for ashram along with some dasis)IN ASHRAM:U: ek kaam kijiye yeh rang na wahan lagaiye... nahi nahi vaise nai...aaree rukiyee hum dikhate hai...(she took the paint vessel in her hand and started to show them )Dekha aisa kijiye
(And from other side lakshman was coming , the moment she turned she clashed with lakshman and the paint was on both of them aur unke saar takra gaye)U: ouch...dekh ke nai chal sakte thae aap...saara rang gira dia aapne...L:waah urmila...galti aapki hai...aap aachanak se mudh gai...U: toh kya hum abb aapki aagya lete kya mudte samay...ek toh yeh saar mera kitna dard de raha hai...aapko wajah se vo bhi.L:haan sab toh meri galti hi hoti haina...U:haan yeh aapne uchit kaha...idhar aaiye hume sirh wapas takrana hoga.L: parantu kyu punha???U: maa kehti hai ki jab sirr takrata hai toh punha phir se takrana chahiye.L: kya keh rahi hai aap..aise nai hotaU: aare aap jab dekho toh vivad karne lagte hain, hume kafhi kaam hai kripya jaldi sirr takraiye naa.L: hume bhi kafhi karya karna hai, aagya dijiyeU: aap na bhaibhit hai, yodha hokar isse dar gaye...haaww(Lakshman couldn't see this anymore bcoz he was actually loosing against a WOMAN, he quickly did a takar with his head on her )U:aahhh...kitna zor se laga hume...samajte kya hai yeh swayam ko...rakhasss:((Ram was noticing all this and he had a smile on his face. It was for the first time that his younger brother was fighting with someone...Actually a girl...and not on the field and that also on a petty issue. He knew that the argument was heating up so he came to calm both of them.)R: kya hua urmila? Koi samasya hai kya?U: pranam dashrat nandan. Samasya aapke anuj hai!R: pranam...parantu yadi hume bataogi nai toh hum uske liye upay kaise denge.
U : dekhiye na inhone saara rang humpe gira dia. :( ( urmi said making a puppy face )
L : bhaiyaa yeh jhoot bol rahi hai.
U : hum jhoote hai aur aap toh satya ki murti haina!
L : haan mai humesha satya kehta hoo.
U : jhoot phirse.
R: bass karo dono. Urmila mai tumse, lakshman ki taraf se shaama mangta hoo. Mai abhi mata gargi ke ashram se hi aaraha hoo ve tumhari pratiksha kar rahi hongi.
U : haan hume toh unse milna thaa. .parantu inke vajah se hum bhool gaye. Agya dijiye.
( Urmila left quickly, lakshman was looking at her with angry eyes and then looked at ram )
L : bhaiyaa aapne uss rakshasni se shama kyu maangi.
R : lakshman bada bhaiya hoo tumhara, sab janta hoo. Kaise dusri baar takar karte samay jaan bhuj ke zor se dia.
L : shama kijiye bhaiya parantu ve maan hi nai rahi thi. ...bhaiya bache meri pratiksha kar rahe honge.
Ram in mind : yeh dono ka mai kya karu agar ek teekhi mirchi hai toh dura aag. . . . .ek dusre ko ve swayam hi jhel sakte hai. . . . Mujhe aisa aabhas ho raha hai ki mere chote bhai ki zindagi badalne wali hai yaa kahun ki uska aarambh ho chuka hai.
TO BE CONTINUED:)
Heyya people
I'm back :)
So I wrote this one bcoz THA wanted me to write something on lakshmila.
Hope you guys like it and yaa pls give me feedback via comments.
Those who need pm, buddy me.
Love kriti :)
(And from other side lakshman was coming , the moment she turned she clashed with lakshman and the paint was on both of them aur unke saar takra gaye)U: ouch...dekh ke nai chal sakte thae aap...saara rang gira dia aapne...L:waah urmila...galti aapki hai...aap aachanak se mudh gai...U: toh kya hum abb aapki aagya lete kya mudte samay...ek toh yeh saar mera kitna dard de raha hai...aapko wajah se vo bhi.L:haan sab toh meri galti hi hoti haina...U:haan yeh aapne uchit kaha...idhar aaiye hume sirh wapas takrana hoga.L: parantu kyu punha???U: maa kehti hai ki jab sirr takrata hai toh punha phir se takrana chahiye.L: kya keh rahi hai aap..aise nai hotaU: aare aap jab dekho toh vivad karne lagte hain, hume kafhi kaam hai kripya jaldi sirr takraiye naa.L: hume bhi kafhi karya karna hai, aagya dijiyeU: aap na bhaibhit hai, yodha hokar isse dar gaye...haaww(Lakshman couldn't see this anymore bcoz he was actually loosing against a WOMAN, he quickly did a takar with his head on her )U:aahhh...kitna zor se laga hume...samajte kya hai yeh swayam ko...rakhasss:((Ram was noticing all this and he had a smile on his face. It was for the first time that his younger brother was fighting with someone...Actually a girl...and not on the field and that also on a petty issue. He knew that the argument was heating up so he came to calm both of them.)R: kya hua urmila? Koi samasya hai kya?U: pranam dashrat nandan. Samasya aapke anuj hai!R: pranam...parantu yadi hume bataogi nai toh hum uske liye upay kaise denge.
U : dekhiye na inhone saara rang humpe gira dia. :( ( urmi said making a puppy face )
L : bhaiyaa yeh jhoot bol rahi hai.
U : hum jhoote hai aur aap toh satya ki murti haina!
L : haan mai humesha satya kehta hoo.
U : jhoot phirse.
R: bass karo dono. Urmila mai tumse, lakshman ki taraf se shaama mangta hoo. Mai abhi mata gargi ke ashram se hi aaraha hoo ve tumhari pratiksha kar rahi hongi.
U : haan hume toh unse milna thaa. .parantu inke vajah se hum bhool gaye. Agya dijiye.
( Urmila left quickly, lakshman was looking at her with angry eyes and then looked at ram )
L : bhaiyaa aapne uss rakshasni se shama kyu maangi.
R : lakshman bada bhaiya hoo tumhara, sab janta hoo. Kaise dusri baar takar karte samay jaan bhuj ke zor se dia.
L : shama kijiye bhaiya parantu ve maan hi nai rahi thi. ...bhaiya bache meri pratiksha kar rahe honge.
Ram in mind : yeh dono ka mai kya karu agar ek teekhi mirchi hai toh dura aag. . . . .ek dusre ko ve swayam hi jhel sakte hai. . . . Mujhe aisa aabhas ho raha hai ki mere chote bhai ki zindagi badalne wali hai yaa kahun ki uska aarambh ho chuka hai.
TO BE CONTINUED:)
Heyya people
I'm back :)
So I wrote this one bcoz THA wanted me to write something on lakshmila.
Hope you guys like it and yaa pls give me feedback via comments.
Those who need pm, buddy me.
Love kriti :)
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