AarYa FF: Love Remains Within - Chapter 20 (Epilogue), pg 78

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Sharlene1410

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Congrats on the new story sis loved the start it is a very interesting concept as usual the scindhias are disgusting horrible people 😆 😆

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Busi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Sis tnx for the pm. Hmm (lamao) you made me laugh my ass out then you made me cry and i think i drain all the tear of my body. I knew ansh wasn't death. The ss was heart breaking yet amazayn.

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Folla

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

fabulous amzing one poor aarti they lie to her about ansh i hate them so excited to next part to see how aarya well meet and what well happen when aarti know about ansh

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Alamelu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#14

absolutely fantastic and emotional...just when they were going to celebrate their separation of a week tragedy strikes...and who separates them his family...so glad ash is alive and well...thank god..aww six years gone by and yash has missed his children growing up and his wife...glad arti is a strong person...waiting to see how they meet...

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annirogc

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Posted: 9 years ago

#15

intresting start.. eager to read more

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lassekool

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Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Hats off Miss T, for another superb story. This time the Schindya's have really outdone themselves. Shame. So sad their world turned upside down in a matter of minutes. I hope Aarti is doing fine with Palak and the other baby. Looking forward to next update.

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cuteariya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#17

uff aarti ka again rona dhona
why she cant fight for her husband?
aarti just let yash so called parents & sister separate her & palak from yash
how disgusting the parents that destroy their own son life 😡
poor ansh died 🥺
now aarti agin pregnant
hope prateek will expose his so called parents in front of yash
wish yash will get his memory back soon 😭
continue plz

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Fandu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Tess sounds like another amazing heart wrenching, very emotional story. You never know your whole world can turn upside down at the flick of any eye, which is exactly what happened with Arti. Yash losing his memory further made it worse. Just hope that Prateek does not take everything that his parents tell him at face value and starts to dig into this to find out the truth. Very intriguing and anxiously waiting for the next update.

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B-onesie

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Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Great great great start. I loved it.

Amazing plot. I am so exited about this story

Separating a family for reach their own sick goals is just cruel. What kind of people tells a mother that her son has died when it is not true. Separating children from their parents in my opinion is the height of cruelty. How do they think that they will getaway with it anyway. I am absolutely sure that Aarti and Yash has a love so strong that their hearts will find each other. And when that happens, those awful people will lose their son and grand children.

Can't wait for the next instalment. I know you want to complete the other stories first but please don't make is wait too long. 👍🏼

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jhil

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Posted: 9 years ago

#20

On the very first update you broke my heart into pieces and made me cry cry cry 💔 😭😭😭

But i can't blame you as I knew it from before.

But how i was enjoying the lovely family together.. Such a nice environment changed into horrible one.🥺

How a mother and wife could feel at that moment when her husband and children are at stake.. She tried her best but destiny planned some other thing for them..

And was that the family? How can a family be this much cruel? Separating husband and wife.. Mother and Son.. Father and daughter.. Brother and sister.. They really don't deserve any mercy from God or any human too.. I can't use red emo for them as i feel those are nothing for them. I don't know what punishment they would get in future.

Palak also their own blood how could they do that to the little soul? Why this different treatment with Palak? And what was fault of Ansh that he have to grow up without mother..

Yash has forgotten, really forgotten.. Pratiek was right. It is better that he don't remember otherwise how he would able to survive in this pathetic loss? And mostly I am feeling what he will feel when he will come to know what his own family did with him, his little world..

I so wish he never forgive them..

How I wish Aarti could run to her husband, even if he didn't remember then also there could be some little hope.

I am clueless how Yash couldn't remember little thing also in this six years? Such a tragedy life created..

How much I say i can't complete saying about Aarti.. She is the suffering most along with the children. Palak was small she couldn't remember her father much even Ansh also was not so big.. But Aarti will have to stay with the unlimited pain.. Knowing her husband is alive she can't get him.. And she have to stay in the fake thing that she lost her son too.. And the coming baby also will not get her father..

Such an emotional starting but you did the justice with it. I know you will handle it very well and will give another wonderful story..

You know I am already angry with you about the leap so you better make it up with quick updates..