Shravan Sumo TS: Confrontation Last part-Page 2 (COMPLETED )

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Posted: 8 years ago
Location 1 : Room
pushkar along with shravan and suman is in the room.
P: aap dono khudh ko samajhte kya hai?   Bachpan se saath hai magar in 10 years mei aisa kya hua ki jabse dekh raha hoo ek dusre ko ignore kar rahe ho.
Sumo: (tries to ignore d topic)kuch nai mai busy thi kafhi kaam hai mujhe , appointments thi.
P: aur aap bhaiya banaiye aap bhi koi bahana >_<
Shravan: actually sab frndz se milne ke chakar mai tumhe aisa laga hoga. Vaise bhi jo 10 saal pehle hua mujhe kuch yaad nai , so no use to talk about it .
Su: haan kuch yaad thodi na hota hai tumhe , short term memory loss jo ho gai hai. Sab kuch yaad hai like secret rasta , library mei clues chodna haa magar sumo kaun hai yeh toh imp hai.
Shr: meri marzi ke mere life mei mai kisko importance doon aur kisko nikalo.
P: waahh waah v.good , dono ko sab aache se yaad haina, bass attitude dikhane pe time waste kar rahe ho, aur kya haan MOVE ON . Yeh line toh aise bolte ho jaise manno ek shop se dusre shop jana ho. Aap logo ko lagta hai ki u guys have moved on naa
Su , shr: YESS
Sumo kya move on kia hai tumne toh haroz bhaiya ka fb check karti ho , unke baare mai sochti ho, unka favourite khana banati ho!
Hearing this shravan was shocked and sumo wantd to just hide somewhere.
Bhaiya aapko toh kya kahu mai , raat ko sone se pehle uski photo dekhna, uski har baat yaad rakhna , uski koi cheez dekhke mann mei aacha lagta hai par samne thodi na dikhasakte aap isliye bass gussa nikalte ho uspar Jis tarah earing par kia thaa.
Shravan felt that somewhere pushkar was right, he did feel good thinking about his sumo. Wait when did she became his sumo : 0.
Sumo : aisa kuch nai hai jaise tum soch rahe ho.
p: toh theek hai raho aap dono iss room mei aur jab taak sab kuch sort out nai hota hai maat nikalna yaha se actually mai na aapko iss room mei band kar raha hoo. So enjoyy

TO BE CONTINUED...

so shravn and sumo are one of my recent fav couples and I guess this one thing is moee imp btween them , so I felt I should write about it. Hope you guys like it. Feedbacks are needed. 😳 - kritiEdited by AMAYASTARSS - 8 years ago

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Posted: 8 years ago
Great idea.
Continue soon please.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Wow...

Lovely...

Pushkar yaar this guy ...
God bless him...

Can't wait to read further...

Do cont soon...

Bdw hie m Sonia nu..?
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Originally posted by: princessSonia

Wow...

Lovely...

Pushkar yaar this guy ...
God bless him...

Can't wait to read further...

Do cont soon...

Bdw hie m Sonia nu..?


hey sonia
ik right pushkar is just 😳 😳
I'm kriti 😃 just joined india forums
I'll continue soon once I'm done writing.
Your display even I'm a kriyaansh fanEdited by AMAYASTARSS - 8 years ago
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They both r mine fav. Too...so pls continue soon..
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice...Please continue soon 
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Originally posted by: AMAYASTARSS


hey sonia
ik right pushkar is just 😳 😳
I'm kriti 😃 just joined india forums
I'll continue soon once I'm done writing.
Your display even I'm a kriyaansh fan

wow thts great...
Take ur time...
Will be waiting for ur update...
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Originally posted by: Aayushi15

Great idea.
Continue soon please.


thanks will continue soon 😃
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2:
Both sumo and shravan were in the room , they felt that the room was locked but little did they know that pushkar just closed d door.
Shravan stood up and was moving to leave when sumo interrupted.
Su: phirse bhaag rahe ho jaise10yrs pehle bhaage thae.
Sh: mujhe tumhari bakwass sune mei koi tym nai
Su: haan ussi tarah jab pehle nai sunna thaa, (sumo also stood up) chila chila ke bula rahi thi magar sunke bhi andekha kia tumne. (There was pain in her eyes)
Sh: (screaming)
kya sunne ke liye rukta mai BATAO yehi ki tumhari reputation zyada imp thi hunari dosti se bhi kafhi zyada.
Su: haan I agree ki 10 saal pehle thii mere liye meri reputation imp par agar koi mujhe blame daale koi aisi baat ka jisme meri koi galti nai toh kya karu mai.
Shravan 10 saal se wait kar rahi hoon ki kab tumhe kahoo ki IM SORRY , nahi janti ki aisa kya kia maine jo tumhe itna hurt ho gaya, jab chale gaye naa tum tab realise hui tunhari imp. Tum gaye theek hai convince kia khudko ke sab theek hoga...phir dheere dheere sab chale gaye..mom..dad...mama , chacha aur nanu nai hote toh pata nai kya hota mera. Abhi bhi sirf tumhe tumhari padi hai. I realised ke tumse saacha frnd mera koi aur nai thaa sab mere saath mere fame ke liye thae. Now you understand how did I feel!
"Aachanak se aaye aur mujhpe chillane lage ki how could you do this to me, meri insult kyu ki tumne, aur kya kaha ki mujh jaise dost se aacha koi dushman bhi nai karta."
Phir bhi blame mujhpe.
3:
Shravan stood there still, listening to what sumo was saying.
Sh: toh tumne kyu nai kaha kuch mujhse.
Su:hahaha kaha kyu nai, tumne sunna. Jab library gai tumhara note dekhne toh koi note nai thaa wahan pe tabi meri frndz ne bataya ki tumne mere liye apni feelings likhi thi uspar , you know I was soo happy about it but jab tak tumhare pass aati javab dene ki I also feel the same u just left.
Poonam se pucha toh usne kahan ki humari gang ne tumhari insult ki aur vo bhi mera naam leke ki tum jaise nerdy ke saath love n relationship kabhi nai ho sakta. Isliye tumhara yeh chehra bhi nai dekhna chahiti mai. Aur waah shravan tumne yeh saach bhi maan lia, kya maine aake tumse yeh baat kahi thi, nahi naa phir kyu maan lai tumne (crying)
Sh: (his voice felt like he is also crying inside) mujhe laga ki phir tumhari reputation ke wajah se tumne kaha hoga, suman I had a hearbreak , meri puri zindagi tumhare aaju baju revolve karti thi aur yeh jaankar ki tum kya sochti ho mere baare mei , I couldn't control , mei bhag gaya tumse door kyuki agar rukta toh pyaar ho jaata phirse, aur mai tumhare liye cheeze aur complicated nai banana chahtha tha.
Su: toh jab wapas aaye kyu ignore kia aur yeh gussa
Sh: haan gussa aaye yeh sunkar ki tum mere baare mei kya sochti ho, nerdy naa isliye specks chodke lens daale, champu studious naa isliye body banai aur aisa bann gaya jaise ki koi mujhe no naa keh paaye. Aur jab yahan aaya toh tumhe dekhkar sab wapas yaad aagaya , mai chahkar bhi tumhe

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Edited by AMAYASTARSS - 8 years ago
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Ignore nai kar paya, laga mujhe ki whatever I felt for you was anger but it was love jo gusse ke picche chupa hua thaa. (The pain which he felt for so long was visible)
Su: itna kuch kia , bass ek baar baat kar lete naa toh sab kuch normal hota. She couldn't control herself. She went to him and gave him a peck on his lips. Shravan was shocked at what's happening and was not responding her back , sumo realised this and broke the kiss.
Su: problem kya hai tumhari , kehte ho I love you aur jab kiss kar rahi hoon toh respond bhi nai karte, mai jaa rahi hoon.
Sh:holds her by her waist, tum bhi mujhse pyaar karti ho?
Su: nai toh mai toh raste ke har bandhe ko jaake kiss karti hoon, maaza aata hai meko toh. Duffer obvi karti hoon isliye toh kiss ...before she could complete her sentence shravan kissed here...not giving her a chance to argue and yeah he did win this time.
Finally they were one they were ShraMan. Pushkar stood outside the window and had tears in his eyes after watching everything. He was the most happiest as his plan had workd and was glad that pe played a cupid btwn them.

THAT'S ALL FOLKS.
Hope you guys like it.
Love kriti :)
😳 Edited by AMAYASTARSS - 8 years ago