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Part 6

PAST: Ram came to priya's home. 
Sud- to tum kya karte ho. 
Ram- sir mai abhi MBA last year me hun aur papa ka business sambhalta hun. 
Ship- ghar me kon kon hai. 
Ram- ji mai aur mera chota bhai, wo abhi Canada me hai study k liye maa papa nahi hai aur dadi Punjab me hoti hai.
Sud- priya ko khush to rakhoge na. 
Ram- ji sir, priya ko kabhi kisi baat ki takleef nahi hogi. 
Ship- priya ko humne har ek azadi Di hai kya tum usse. 
Ram- ji mam, usse Jo karna hai karne dijiye, mujhe wo jaisi hai waisi hi pasand hai. 
Sud- issey jeans me shaadi karni hai, tumhe chalega na. 
Ram smile- pata hai mujhe sir, bahot baar bola hai mujhe. 
Ship- priya ko sab kuch aata hai lekin wo thik se tea aur coffee nahi banna paati. 
Ram- bansi kaka banna denge. 
Priya- maa papa KBC pura hua hai toh haan bol dijiye na. 
Sud- next Sunday tum dono kya kar rahe ho. 
Priya- mera kuch bhi plan nahi hai, ram tumhara. 
Ram- nahi. 
Sud- thik hai, tum dono ko Jo ring chahiye wo pasand kar lena, next Sunday tum dono k engagement hai. 
Priya- papa it means. 
Ship- we both are agree for ur relation. 
Ram n priya smile. 
Next day ram n priya told there group of their engagement on next Sunday, all are happy to listen the news, juhi didn't like that news. 
PRESENT: at morning, priya stand in balcony with her morning coffee n saw heer in park. 
Priya to herself- heer yaha par hai, in shocked. 
Kady came- good morning priya. 
Priya- morning, but her all concentrate on heer. 
Kady- priya aj busy ho kya pura din. 
Priya didn't replied. 
Kady- priya, but no replied. 
Kady jerked her priya looked at her- dhayan kaha par hai apka. 
Priya- kuch nahi wo kuch soch rahi thi, tum bolo kya baat hai. 
Kady- wo ap aj pura din busy ho. 
Priya- haan wo jab tak biddai nahi hoti tab tak, kiu kya hua.
Kady- who will with us. 
Priya- for what? 
Kady- rajastan ghumne. 
Priya- kal shaam ko ankita aur jeet aayenge tum dono k saath, ok. 
Kady- ok, lekin aaj shaam. 
Priya- aj shaam sangeet hai aur mujhe sab kuch dekhna hoga and tumhe peehu ko. 
Kady- yes boss. 
Priya- chup kar, n smile. 
In ram's room, neha n vik come. 
Neha- good morning fatty. 
Ram- morning darling, vik Maine kuch socha hai. 
Vik- kya. 
Ram- meri taraf se tum dono ko ye shaadi gift. 
Neha- kya bol raha hai. 
Ram- mai ye bol raha hun k tum dono ko anniversary ka gift meri taraf se shaadi hogi. 
Neha excited- yeeeyeee thankyou fatty. 
Ram- in sab se pehle mujhe uss PSK se milna hai. 
Neha- wo PSK utha bhi nahi hoga. 
Ram- wo professional hai yaar. 
Vik- phir bhi wo apne beti ke saath aaya hai. 
Ram's room bell ring, neha open the door, heer come. 
Heer- morning guys, konsi meeting chalu hai. 
Neha- shaadi ki. 
Heer- i am given u only one idea aur tu serious ho gayi. 
Vik- usse toh hona hi hai na, paise isske thodi na jaa rahe hai wo toh ram. 
Ram cut in middle- chup kar kanjus. 
Vik- mai kanjus. 
Ram- haan tu kanjus. 
Vik- dekha priya ye dono milke mujhe and then he realise that priya is not there. 
Vik- ahhhmm sorry, mai abhi aata hun n he go from there. 
Ram- vikram sunn toh, but no use he go from there. 
Neha- fatty relax mai sambhal lungi usse, give him sometime, he will be fine. 
Vik come in corridor n started to smoking n hide his tears, priya come in corridor n she give interaction to head of the sangeet n saw man is smoking in corridor so she give the mint mouth fresher n write a note on tissue, 'smoking is injurious to health & this area is not for smoking', and she give to her employee n told them to give that men, it means vikram and she go for her work, priya's employee give tissue and mint n told that these gave by her mam. 
Vik take it n open the tissue and read it, n smile, he throw the cigar n again re-read, neha came. 
Neha- are u ok vik. 
Vik- yaa i m fine. 
Neha saw the tissue in his hand- ye kya hai. 
Vik- ohh ye kisne diya mujhe and he show her. 
Neha read and said- ye priya ki hand writing hai. 
Vik- are you sure. 
Neha- ofcourse am i, usske paas se Maine bahot saare letter likh kar liye hai tumhare liye, just a moment priya's is here. 
Vik- its not possible. 
Neha- why? 
Vik- priya yaha par hai aur mujhse bina mile no way, i know her very well, ram aur usske bich kitne bhi difference kiu na ho wo mere saath aisa behave nahi kar sakti. 
Neha- vik wo bhi ek insan hai. 
Vik- wo insan ke saath saath wo meri sister hai, puri duniya baddal sakti hai lekin wo nahi. 
Neha- ok, ok relax don't get hyper now, hum pata karte hai.
Vik- usske baad ram ko. 
Neha- ya ok. 
Priya come to her room to wokeup peehu. 
Priya- peehu wokeup princess its morning baba. 
Peehu in sleepy tone- maa only 5mins plz. 
Priya- mai mera kam karne gayi thi tab bhi apne 5mins kaha tha, mai pure 15mins baad aa rahi hu, chalo utho n she seat beside peehu lying peehu wokeup n huged priya by her waist. 
Peehu in half sleep voice- mumma aaj ghumne jaayenge. 
Priya- haan ap aur kady didi jaana wo apko fav.ankita aur jeet aa rahe hai apke saath aur apko wo dono ghumayge. 
Pee- lekin aap. 
Priya- we all are going to to Sunday for shopping. 
Pee- sacchi mumma, with excited. 
Priya- muchi, ab chalo jaldi.

Part 7

Priya- mucchi, ab chalo jaldi ready ho kar aap breakfast kar ke, mujhe chota sa kam pura karna hai. 
Pee- konsa kam mumma. 
Priya- wo flowers nahi aaye hai extra. 
Pee- mai bhi aau apke saath. 
Priya- ummm ok, but aap ek jagah shanti se baithoge. 
Pee- ok with smile. 
At function area: Heer and neha there, peehu is seat on chair n she plying candy crush. They both watch her and look here n there and asked. 
Neha- beta aap yaha par akele kiu baithe ho, jaao waha par baccho ke saath khelo. 
Peehu pause her game looked at neha- aap meri mumma ho. 
Neha- nahi. 
Pee- aap meri mumma ko janti hai. 
Neha- nahi. 
Pee- then why are you ordering me. 
Neha- beta yaha par kam chalu hai, iss liye aapko. 
Pee- ye kam meri mumma handle kar rahi hai. 
Heer- ohhh toh aap PSK ki beti hai. 
Pee- hmmm and she again start her candy crush. 
Heer- aap humesha gusse me rehti hai. 
Peehu irritated- aunty mujhe ye level complit karni hai agar nahi mai har gayi toh kady didi jeet jaayegi. 
Neha- mai khelu. 
Pee- apko aata hai. 
Neha- haan i m champion in these game. 
Peehu give her mobi- win karoge na. 
Neha- pakka, ek shart hai. 
Pee- konsi? 
Neha- ap apna naam bataoge. 
Pee- meri bhi ek shart hai. 
Heer- deal? 
Pee- haan. 
Heer- bolo. 
Pee- ap bhi apna naam bataoge aur one selfi with me. 
Neha n heer- ok. 
At lunch time, priya saw its 2 already so she called on peehu's phn. 
Neha- apko phn aaya hai madam. 
Pee- mumma ka hoga. 
Neha- caller ID toh. 
Pee- aap do and she snatched, she on call. 
Pee- haan mumma. 
Priya- peehu apko bhukh nahi lagi hai. 
Pee- aap kaha par ho. 
Priya- room k taraf Jo corridor hai na waha par, aap jaldi aa jaao. 
Pee- ok bye n she cut the call. 
Peehu to neha n heer- phn mera nahi kady didi ka hai aur unnke liye mumma angel hai bye n she ran from there. 
Neha- arrye kaisi ladki hai naam bhi nahi baataya. 
Heer- gussa dekh kar priya ki yaad aayi. 
Neha- hmm naak par gussa hai. 
Heer- chalo uss PSK ko milna hai, usski beti thi. 
Neha- ye chota pack tha, bada dhamaka kaisa hai pata nahi and they both laugh. 
At evening function started, all people like the function arrangement. 
Ram to PE- excuse me. 
PE- yes sir. 
Ram- i want to meet PSK for my sister weeding. 
PE- ya sir aap corridor me wait kijiye, mam mam ko bolti hun. 
Ram- ok thankyou. 
Priya is wearing yellow & green combination Saree, with minimal makeup with zumkhas in ears n right ear is Bluetooth. 
PE- mam aap se koi milna chahta hai. 
Priya- for what. 
PE- unnke sister ki shaadi hai aur wo apse plan karwana chahte hai. 
Priya- naam kya hai. 
PE- mam pata nahi wo apko corridor me intzar kar rahe hai.
Priya- ok, mai jaati hun. 
All 4 waiting in corridor, they 4 watching dance from attached balcony. 
Priya come there and saw that 4. 
Priya- excuse me, i am PSK, you wanted to meet me na. 
All are turned to the voice and shocked to see priya infront of them, priya also same reaction to see them. 
Ram- priya tum and choked his voice. 
Heer n neha running towards her but priya showed her palm to them n they both stop there. 
Priya click her Bluetooth button- haan bolo, one side convo- what (pause) ok mai abhi aati hun, and she find a word what to say. 
Priya- sir, mam mai aap sab se kal morning me 10am ko cafe area me milti hun, thankyou, and priya go to turned with teary eyes which is unseen from 4 of them. 
In room she enter n saw peehu is in bandage on her knee and her left hand. 
Priya worried- ye kaise hua. 
Kady- priya relax wo park me hum khel rahe the tab ye gir gayi don't worry doc ke paas gaye the, doc ne kaha hai, she is totally fine only scratched hai nothing else. 
Priya wiped her tears- ok, lekin ye. 
Kady- hum hotel aa rahe the tab rasste me soo gayi. 
Priya- thik hai tu jaa change kar aur kuch khaa le aur aram kar. 
Kady- thik hai and she go from there. 
Priya seat beside peehu lying, she looked at peehu and again her eyes filed with tears, some voice echoing her ears " i hate you priya, i brocked up with you, i brocked our engagement, i hate you, you are the worse thing is in my life, i hate you, chali jaao meri zindagi se", she closed her ears by her hands n she cried silently. 
PAST: 
RaYa's engagement done, there life was smoothly like all person, juhi didn't like that RaYa got engaged coz, she like ram and also secretly love with him. 
Juhi- hi priya ram ka wait kar rahi ho. 
Priya- yupe, wo thodi Der me clg pochega. 
Juhi- ek baat puchu. 
Priya- permission kiu le rahi ho, bolo na. 
Juhi- aisa kya dekha ram me. 
Priya- his heart, wo dil ka bahot accha hai. 
Juhi- same answer, made for each other. 
Priya smile. 
Juhi- socho agar tum dono ke bich me kuch misunderstanding ho jaaye aur ram tum par trust naa kare toh. 
Priya- most important hum dono k bich me misunderstanding hoti hai to samne baith kar solve karte hai, secondly we both are trust eachother very much. 
Juhi- its over confidence priya. 
Priya- not over confident, ram knows my behavior n i know ram's behavior n she smile. 
Juhi think- iss trust ko mai khud todungi, mere ram ko tum mujhse dur nahi kar sakti. 
Ram came with one news that camp are going to shimla.

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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome story. 
Thanks for pm. 

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Good progress between past and present
RaYa are madly in love and it was uniqueness of the proposal 
in present Priya is with Kady and Peehu apart from Ram 
but in past situation created by Juhi can destroy relationship between Ram Priya.
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story is moving nicely
Raya met each other but Priya avoid Ram.
Juhi trying to create MU between Raya.
waiting for the next part
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Part 8

Ram come with one news that there camp are going to shimla for 3 days and after come that they all came in clg DJ night. 
PRESENT: 
Priya's sleep brocked by peehu calling her. 
Pee- mumma. 
Priya in worried- aap uth gaye, apko injuries dukh rahi hai aur aap aise park me giri kaise. 
Peehu slap her forehead- ohhh! Mumma kitne sawal karte ho aap. 
Priya- phir kya karu aap sawal puchne jaise hi kam karte ho. 
Pee- wo mai football khel rahi thi, mumma but now i am fine but. 
Priya- but what? 
Pee- i am very much hungry mumma. 
Priya- ok mai order karti hun. 
Pee- no mumma hum niche jaate hai na dinner karne restaurant me. 
Priya- lekin aap. 
Peehu cut in middle- plz mumma. 
Priya- ok pehle apko fresh karti hun usske baad hum jaayenge, ok. 
Pee- ok mumma. 
At restaurant, ram, heer, neha n vikram are seating there for there dinner. 
Heer- i think vik u should talk with priya. 
Ram- no priya bahot jaada. 
Neha cut in middle- ram wo baat 7years pehle ki baat hai. 
Ram- lekin wo aj bhi utni hi deep hai priya k dil me, mere trust na karne ki wajah se aj hum dono alag hue hai, mai priya ko jaanta tha, jaanta hun phir bhi. 
Heer- ram hum priya se baat karte hai. 
Vik- koi priya se baat nahi karega wo tum sab se naraz hai, mujhse nahi, mai khud baat karunga. 
Ram- wo heer aur neha ki baat sunne k liye tyar nahi hai, wo teri baat nahi sunnegi. 
Vik- ye Jo kuch bhi hua tha tab mai yaha nahi tha, mai khud priya se baat karunga, agar wo mujhe Sach me bhai manti hai na toh, sorry hum dinner karte hai usske baad dekhte hai. 
Sometime priya, peehu n kady came in restaurant n looking for table, but they didn't find it, so they waiting, heer looked at them. 
Heer- hey vik see priya is there and she point towards. 
Ram- i think she came for dinner, mai usse. 
Vik cut him middle- tu baithe mai lekar aata hun and vik go to called priya. 
Priya is busy in talking on phn, her back to him, he came n saw priya hold little girl hand n her left side one big girl talking with little girl. 
Vik go to taped priya but peehu stop him. 
Pee- aap waiter ho. 
Kady looked at him- peehu chup kar. 
Vik- mai waiter nahi hun mai vikram hun, mai yaha par priya ko bulane aaya hun, wo humre saath table share kar sakti hai. 
Kady- thankyou sir but priya didn't like it. 
Vik- ummm she is my frnd n i knw her, usse pasand hi aayega. 
Kady- aap priya ke dost ho. 
Vik- haan. 
Kady go to say something, priya end the call n she turned n saw vikram is infront of her, vikram give smile to her but she didn't give him any reaction. 
Vik- umm mai kuch puchunga nahi, mai bas ye chahta hun ke tum table share karo aur kuch nahi, yaha par bahot jaada rush hai, so can you. 
Priya didn't say a single word. 
Vik- tumhare chupi ko haan samjhu, hey little princess n young princess go to that table (he point to his table) mai waiter se bolta hun chair lagane ke liye. 
Peehu looked at priya, priya give her affirmation by her eyes. 
Pee- chalo kady didi n she go with kady. 
Vik walking with priya. 
Vik- how are you? 
Priya- achhi hun. 
Vik- PSK, wedding planner. 
Priya only smile, they both reached their, ram only gaze her. 
Neha- hey candy crush girl apne noon ko apna naam nahi baataya. 
Priya looked at peehu with confused. 
Pee- noon ko mumma ka call aaya tha. 
Heer- mumma? 
Pee- haan mumma, maa plz baitho na n she signal to priya her beside chair, the another shocked to them that priya have a daughter. 
Heer- priya she is ur. 
Priya- peehu her name n she is kady n she beside peehu. 
Neha- kya khaogi. 
Priya- mai order karti hun, she called the waiter n she give her order for her, peehu n kady. 
Pee- maa kulfi. 
Priya- no kulfi. 
Peehu with sad face- mumma. 
Priya- ok lekin sirf aj ke din. 
Pee- ok. 
Priya's phn ring n she excused her self. 
Ram asked peehu- aap mujhe bhul gayi. 
Pee- nahi. 
Kady- ap sab priya ko jaante ho. 
Heer- we are clg frnds, she is our besti. 
Kady- strange, priya ne kabhi baataya nahi. 
Neha- aj bhi priya gusse wali hai kya. 
Pee- mumma kabhi gussa nahi karti. 
Heer- oye teri mumma na bahot jaada gussa karti hai, pata hai tujhe. 
Pee- nahi karti. 
Kady- peehu shant ho jaa. 
Peehu show her index figure to kady- ap inhe shant kijiye na, warna mai apki complain daijaa se karungi. 
Kady- plz mam, plz don't. 
Heer, neha, vik n ram smile. 
Priya come on table n saw peehu's angry face- kis par gussa hai. 
Peehu didn't reply. 
Priya to kady- tera phn swichoff kiu hai. 
Kady- battery die, charging par hai. 
Priya- baad me daijaa ko call karna. 
Kady noded in yes. 
Priya- peehu anything wrong. 
Pee- maa ap gussa karti thi, bahot jaada. 
Priya- apko kya lagta hai. 
Peehu noded in no. 
Vik- so peehu ap konsi stnd me ho. 
Pee- 1st aur ap. 
Priya- peehu uncle office jaate hai, she again got the call, one side convo. 
Priya on call- nahi dinner kar rahi hun, restaurant me, yaha par lekar aao mai sing karti hun, ok. 
Vik- priya tum khaana khate samay tak phn side nahi rakh sakti. 
Priya- rakh deti lekin mrs.patel ne dimag khaaya hai, last minute bol rahi hai, full Indian dishes chahiye. 
Neha- kab se kar rahi ho ye sab. 
Priya- 6years ho gaye. 

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Very nice
Pls continue soon
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Awesome story. 
Nice update. 
Thanks for pm. 

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Good going
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Beautiful update...
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