Sandhir OS :- The Perfect Proposal ~~ For Sanyu aka mysticaura!!!

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Posted: 9 years ago
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This particular piece of crap is dedicated to Sanyu aka mysticaura!
Sanyu, I owe u serious apology darling!
Sorry dear for making u wait so long and coming up with a crap like this!
I seriously am very sorry!
Please bear with me!

So the theme of the OS is...
Considering the Valentine episode Sadda haq CVS has showered us with, I found it very unsatisfactory!
Of course it was funny, but Sandhir could have been highlighted more!
And the truth syrup was... umnn... too boring!
Isse zyada toh peekar confess karlete hai yaar!

Here is the way I wanted it to be...

OS :- THE PERFECT PROPOSAL!!!

"Do u love me?", it was an easy question but difficult to answer!
Not because the answer was a definite yes but the person asking the question did not deserve a no!

There stood Aryan on his knees, proposing Sanyukta, in between the Valentine party hall, with a flower in his hand!

Considering the way he had proposed her, no girl could give a second thought on saying no!😆
But since he had asked the question to Sanyukta, she was much flabbergasted to be realising that her best friend loved her!
And saying no would mean may be the end of their friendship!
She was drowned into a dilemma!

"Just say Yes!!!", the crowd cheered her.

She looked around!
Each face had a smile on their face except one who was frowning!
But where was he?
The one she was looking for!

"Abbey oye kya kar raha hai?", a husky drunk voice reached her ears!
Turning her eyes back to Aryan and the voice, she was afraid what this will lead to!😲

There He was, her Randhir, grabbing Aryan by his collars making him stand!
Shit! Possessive him!

"Kya kar rha hun? Propose kar rha hun Sanyu ko! Kyun koi gadbad hai?", he answered cutely!😆

"Kitna boring banda hai tu! Ladki ko koi aise propose thodi na karta hai! Seedha ye phool leke there muh pe maregi!"😆
What the! Was he kidding?!
Here a guy was proposing his wife and he was giving him tips to do so?!

"Toh fir kaise karun? Itna acche se toh kiya na!", Aryan said pouting like a kid!

"Abbey aise nahi! Dekh abhi...", Randhir said and took her hand in his, gently, kneeled down in princely manner, looked into her eyes deeply and kissed her hand!
She found herself drowned into his orbs, being touched by his kiss!
Slowly lifting up her hand, not once breaking the eye contact, he confessed in the most sincere tone,
"Sanyukta! The days I spent with u in FITE, were the best days of my life! I regret leaving u like that, at the most fearful phase of your life, I am sorry! I don't know what had gotten into me! But the days I spent without u I realised, that there is no me without u! I love u Sanyukta! I love u soo much! And I will love u till the end of my life and thereafter! I love u!"

It was divine... the moment!
The way he had proposed was a dream come true...
No doubt he had proposed earlier, in a typical Genius Shekhawat style, but she had always wanted this kind of cheesy proposal from him, not that she had asked him to do it anytime!
Proposal did not matter, did it?
Only the thing that mattered was, love!
But today, he had fulfilled her wish of a perfect proposal!

She was about to open her mouth...

"Abbey Randhir! Tu mujhe sikha raha hai ya apni wali pe chance mar raha hai?, Aryan's confused question brought Sandhir back from each other's eyes!😆

Both of them looked at Aryan, both with different expressions, Sanyukta with confusion and Randhir with frustration!

"Dekhliya na kaise karna hai! Jaa jakar apni wali par thop apna proposal! Mera flow mat todh!", Randhir said in an irritated tone!😡

"OK OK sorry! Tu continue kar! Mai tere baad karlunga!", Aryan spoke like an afraid kid!

The entire hall was confused, including the person who was frowning at the former proposal!

Randhir smiled and turned back to see her!
"Batao Sanyukta!", she shifted her gaze from Aryan to him, "Do u love me too? Will u marry me again? Like, a grand wedding?", he asked sincerely to which she smiled her best!

"Shadi?! Tune bataya nhi tum dono ki shadi hogyi already?", Aryan spoke again!😆

"Aryan! Chup kar warna...", Randhir growled angrily!😡

"Okay okay shushh...", Aryan put his index finger on his lips like an obedient child!

"Sanyukta ...", she looked at him, "batao na! Do u love me? Abhi mere knees tut jayenge...", Randhir complained like a KG kid pouting!

She giggled at his cute innocent face!
Her mirth seemed like heaven to him!

"Of course yes!", she spoke up, "From the day u had gone... I had missed u each second, I realised I can never love anybody except u! I love u too Randhir!", she confessed and added, "Aur han, shadi toh mai tumse hi karungi, phirse! Ab uth jao, shadi ke pehle knees todh loge toh kaise chalega!'
The people laughed and hooted at the perfect proposal of the Valentine day!

Sanyukta made Randhir stand up straight and just as she did, he engulfed her in a warm hug!
He was like this when drunk - less arrogant, more frank and freaking total cute!
Sanyukta hugged him back lovingly!
The entire hall clapped, including that one person!

"Abhi mai karlun?", Aryan spoke with his fingers still on his lips!
Sandhir broke the hug!
Randhir laughed when Sanyukta and the entire hall looked at Aryan, confused!

"Chal karle! Aur haan acche se kariyo jaise sikhaya hai, warna uska toh pata nhi mai reject kardunga!", Randhir warned!

"Abbey tu dara mat!", Aryan took his finger off his lips n complained!

"Theek hai theek hai! Jaa karle jaldi se!", Randhir spoke laughing!

Aryan dropped the flower off his hand and walked past Sanyukta, to stop in front of a girl, who was frowning at his proposal to Sanyukta, took her hand in his and kneeled down!

The entire hall looked on!
Sanyukta was shocked!

Aryan kissed the girl's hand and spoke looking into her eyes,
"SANAYA, I know I cannot propose in a perfect way like Randhir did, but I wanted to confess the to u! Since the time I had first seen u, I had always wanted to say this! Just that I lacked guts! But today, I wanna confess, I love u Sanaya! I really do! From the deepest core of my heart! Do u love me too?"

Sanaya smiled!
She pulled him to stand started straight and hugged him!
"I love u too Aryan! Finally u confessed! I love u too!", she spoke in the hug and Aryan hugged her back, lovingly!

The people clapped again, at the second best proposal of the Valentine's day!

Sandhir smiled at the couple!

"Oh toh ye practise kar rha tha mujhoar! Dara hi diya isne toh!", Sandhir said to Randhir!

"Han practise kar rha tha!", Randhir said!

"What if mai han boldeti?", she asked looking at him naughtily!

He grabbed her by waist and pushed her on the table behind, lovingly, such that she was half bent on the table from her waist!

The entire hall was busy appreciating the new formed couple, ArNaya!

Randhir leaned over her seductively and whispered huskily,
"I was pretty sure u would say no, MRS. SHEKHAWAT! I know u so much that u can't even imagine! Waise u liked my proposal?"

"I loved it! It was just... Perfect!", she smiled!

"Just like u and me!", he said before pulling her straight to a corner and smashing his lips on hers, savouring the taste of her sweet lips, after a time which seemed like ages!!!

So that was it!
I know it was an unbearable crap and u want to honour me with rotten tomatoes, eggs, all kinds of footwear and dumping things, but please pity me!
Thoda gussa control kar lena and jitni b galiyan hai, neeche reviews me dal dena!😆
Mai samajh jaungi! He he!😆

Please people, do leave your precious reviews!!!
And Sanyu, sorry again!!!

Love ya all tons,
Erina!!!🤗

Edited by jollyangels - 9 years ago

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Posted: 9 years ago
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awsme os loved it it was awsme I so wish aesa kuch sach me hota bt rd rude ignorant behaviour hurts aryaan was so cute the way rd proposed is mind blowing then Aryan proposed sanaya very entertaining
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hey awesome os😉😉
loved it😳😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Anwww!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Eri didu!!!!
Aap yahaan aao pehle!
Gives eri a biiig biiig hug*
Abhi cant comment...i have 2 go
'll b back! I wanna give a loong comment!
-Sanyu
Main aa gayiii!!!!!!!
Yess...
Toh aapka os ji...kya kahein!!!! It ws sooo cuteee!!!!
Haye...i wish this happens in the show
Pehle aryukta ka scen be like-
Aryan - Sanyukta i love u
Sanyukta (in mind) - Uff pata nhi kaha kahase ajate h i luv u bolne...ek proposal toh dhang se hota nhi...nw that randhir proposal ws d best one!
Aryan - Sanyukta do u love me too?
Sanyukta (in mind) - Haan haan aur koi kaam dhandha toh hain hi nahi mujhe, he na?
Aryan - Sanyukta chup kyu ho bolo na!
Sanyukta (in mind) - Arey itni der se toh bak bak kiye jaa rhi hu...oh shit me mind me bol rhi thi! Kash uske muh pe bola hota😡!!!


Aur meri reactions isko padhke??

When Aryan proposed sanyukta-->😡
When she kept silent-->😛 Aryan
When randhir tanted aryan--> Hein😕 Koi teri hi biwi pr try maar rha h aur tu usse tips deing😡
When randhir proposed--> Hayee!! Mere genius ne tareeka dhund liya pro marne ka!
When she said yes-->🥳
on that hug-->
When we discovered k aryan sanyu pr practice kr rha tha-->
When araya became couple-->🤢kitta boring tha🤢 mere sandhir isse kayiiin behtar h🤢 Aur sanaya tuhe jo yeh os me screenspace mili na woh bhi meri awesome writer eri di ki meherbaani h😳


It was a truly amazing os my dii!!!! I love u sooo much for writing this!!!!


And mereko dedicated !!!!! Anwww!!! Aap phirse yaha aao!
*Hugs u n breaks ur bones*
*Takes u to the doctor*
*Doctor jodofyies ur bones*
*Hugs u tightly again*
*Again breaks ur bones*
*U n doc be like-->😡*
*I be like-->😳😳Shollu😳😳*


Love u sooo much!!!!!!
Lots of luv!
-Sanyuuu😃
Ps - Thoda amba hogaya na😳
Infact size dekhke laging k os ka second part post kr diya ho😆
-S
Edited by -MysticAura- - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Eri galliyan toh tujhe padegi...
Aryukta nhi kia chalo thik h but Arnaya😡
I m really angry
Coz I love Aryan but that Sanaya is so clingy...

Sandhir part was beautiful
The way Rd again proposed her for their re-marriage...
Accepted his mistake, repented his guilt... it was perfect

He came to realise the importance of Sanyu in his life
N sanyu too said a yes thus accepting his proposal

Waha tak it was beautiful...
Aryan proposing was also awesome...

N sory coz of my hyperness towards Arnaya as I dnt want Aryan with Sanaya anywhere together in future...


So sory for my dat reaction...

Warna ur os was stupendulously fantabulously outstanding...

Luv u girl❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome OS
n hilarious too

Aryan wanted to propose Sanaya but he lacks the guts to propose her
n he has taken help of Randhir

Randhir's proposal to Sanyu is lovely, romantic
Sanyu said yes to this proposal,

at last Aryan proposed Sanaya

loved it
Thanks for PM
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Posted: 9 years ago
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it was just perfect
randhir and aryan convo was cute

Edited by florine_20 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Fabulous update
Thanks for pm
Please continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: newmoon18

awsme os loved it it was awsme I so wish aesa kuch sach me hota bt rd rude ignorant behaviour hurts aryaan was so cute the way rd proposed is mind blowing then Aryan proposed sanaya very entertaining


Thnx for the cmnt dear!!!
Glad that u liked it!
I too wish k real me aisa kch ho! Actly am frustrated by the way they are ignoring each other!
Why don't they just talk it out? Aarggh!😡
Thnx again for this lovely cmnt!!😃

Love u,
Erina!!!🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: -MysticAura-

Anwww!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Eri didu!!!!
Aap yahaan aao pehle!
Gives eri a biiig biiig hug*
Abhi cant comment...i have 2 go
'll b back! I wanna give a loong comment!
-Sanyu


Aagayi re! *hugs u back equally big*
Waise abhi tak wapas nhi ayi kya tum?
Review toh Dede! This is for u!!!
Bata mujhe did u like it or not! Jaldi han! I am waiting!

Love u,
Erina!🤗

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