~My lovely Twinkle~ twinJ FF Chapt 23

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Posted: 8 years ago


twinkle was raised in America, she came to india after her so call fiance yuvraj disown her out of embarrassment. tired of being treated like a garbage, she went back home determine to start a new life. their she meets  mr. hero a.k.a Kunj Manohar Sarna, she never thought she would fall again after her last relationship, but with kunj charm will this Americanized indian girl let her barrier down and let kunj charm his way into her heart? or will her past come back to hunt her.


Characters 

 Kunj Manohar Sarna: a honest man that invested into something small, that turn him into a millionaire, he loves to keep his life low-key, and prefer to live his life to the fullest.

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Twinkle Kunj Sarna : charming girl, thats full of fire.shes stubborn, love to be affectionate, and show some skin. she may fool around, but she's very protective over her heart. 

Leela Taneja: single mother of twinkle, shes been supportive of her daughter choices and hope she would find someone that will love her for herself. she thinks her husband is dead, but will be shock to see him alive and well.

Yuvraj Surjeet Sarna: ex-fiance to twinkle, he comes back to india and meets twinkle, their he realize how he messed up, and tries to woo her back, but with a girl from his past coming back, how will he woo twinkle


Trisha kapoor: her and twinkle graduated together, she was dating yuvraj before he got engaged with twinkle. because she was poor, his mother got rid of her, so now shes back with the intention of yuvraj taking responsibility for what he has done.


OTHERS COMING SOON

Table of Content 

PROLOGUE; PAGE 1

CHAPTER 1; PAGE 1

Chapter 2; Page 2
Chapter 3; page 3
chapter 4; page 3
Chapter 5; page 4
Chapter 6; page 4
Chapter 7;page 5
Chapter 8; page 5
Chapter 9; page 6
Chapter 10;  page 7
Chapter 11; page 7
Chapter 12; page 8
Chapter 13; page 8
Chapter 14; page 8
Chapter 15; page 9
Chapter 16; page 9
CHAPTER 17; PAGE 9
Chapter 18; page 9
Chapter 19; page 9
Chapter 20, page 9
Chapter 21; page 10
Chapter 22; page 10
Chapter 23,page 10
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sounds interesting and fresh
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Exciting.. Looking forward to this. 
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Prologue


"I LOVE YOU TWINKLE!!" a voice shout, she turn to see yuvraj with a sign up in the air. Happy she got up from her seat and ran to the front of the bus, pushing people out the way. the bus driver told her to go get him, smiling for her, while she thank him. 

she step out of the bus and ran to hug him. he was taken by surprise when she picked him up. he smiles before hugging her. " didnt i tell you, i will never let you go" he says letting go of her. she nod while wiping her tears " but what about your mom?"

"what about her?"

twinkle frown at this " she doesn't want us together" 

yuvraj frown as well before going to his bike " who cares about her, if she cant realise how much i love you than we dont need her" he says patting the seat so she can get on.

"ok" she says walking to the back of the seat to sit. as soon as she sat the bike tilt and yuvraj fell. worried twinkle asks if he was alright, he brushed it aside saying it was fine. she apologized, but he kept telling her it was ok. some of the people watching  were laughing at her, she felt like crying, but with one glare from yuvraj they quickly scram.

" come on lets just walk, i want to show you something in private" he says

he took her to the campus garden before getting down on both knees, twinkle was surprise,  he took out a box and showed it to her, asking her for her hand in marriage. The ring wasn't a diamond ring,  it was just  ok. " will you twinkle marry me" he says

"YES!" she says with tears, before kissing him

he told her not to tell anyone because he wants to announce it himself, this made her frown, but she agree.  when she came home, she accidently told her mom the news since she couldn't hold it in. her mom was so happy, she text yuvraj and told him she couldn't help but to tell her, and he was mad. he soon forgive her, and ask her not to tell anyone else she agreed. 

her mom told her it was strange for him too asked that of her, but twinkle reassures her that yuvraj wants to make the engagement a night she wont forget. Leela had a bad feeling about all of this, but seeing her daughter happy like that, she didnt want to ruin it.

Months past and yuvraj still didnt announced his engagement. he told her he was saving up his money to make the night special. twinkle told him, she doesn't care, and that she will help him as well, but he refuses saying he doesn't want his fiance to ruin her precious hands. still twinkle did it anyway without him knowing. she decides to work at a coffee shop to help him. she didnt tell anyone, when her mom would ask her where she goes everyday, she would tell her she was studying.

some of her co-workers love her attitude, while some tease her. while she was working one day, a young man came asking for coffee, he was in a hurry. he told her to make it dark and bitter because he need something to cool of his nerves. twinkle with her hair in her face, sweating. told him that she will bring it to his table. when she was finished, she was feeling dizzy. she walk to his table while he was setting up his laptop, "here you go sir" she says about to put the coffee down when she fainted. 

the workers quickly rushed to her worried.  the man bend down, and touch her neck, before he check her pulse. he observe the girl before noticing a rip on her shirt. he could see a corset underneath. so thats it, he thought, he turn to look at the friend and told her if the ambulance was on the way, she says yes. she asks him if he was a doctor and what was wrong with her friend. The man told her, she must have overworked herself, and that the corset she was wearing was to tight, that must have been why she was exhausted.

suddenly, twinkle open her eyes out if pain. she scream saying it hurts, and for someone to get rid of it. she grab onto the man tie and pull him forward, making his face closer to hers. she guy was trying to breath while she unaware choke him with his tie. "s-some O-nee G-et H-err" he says trying to get her hand away from his tie.

the friend tried helping the guy, but twinkle had a hard grip. it was soon before the ambulance took her to the hospital, yuvraj came and scold her for lying to him, soon leela came disappointed, yet worried.she told her to quit her job, but she refuses. " you're overworking you body twinkle, making your high blood pressure high. you have to let this go" she says

twinkle was adamant, she wouldn't do it.  "If this is the only way i can help him, than i won't quit" she says stubbornly, leela told  yuvraj to put some sense into her, but even he couldn't help her.
soon she was back to work, and yuvraj continues to ignore her calls. a week later, she was at school. yuuvraj had told her to wear something nice, so she did. she was looking very pretty in a red dress and heels. 

she walk to the campus, which was decorated so nicely. her mom was by her side giving her courage. she told her mom that finally yuvraj will announce her engagement, after waiting so long. her mom agreed, and apologized for doubting him. she told her all was forgiven because even she was getting suspicious at first.

when they enter the garden, many people were there. even yuvraj mom, who never liked her. she was so happy that she came, and yet surprise. "waw, he even convince his mom. i guess he likes you a lot" her mom says, making her agee. she saw yuvraj holding the mike, getting everyone's attention. soon everyone quiet down. he hand the mic to his mom, and she happily talk about her son, and how he was finally graduating all because of his fiance. she told them, how his fiance would dedicate her time for him, this made twinkle remember when yuvraj would make her do his homework and she would happily agree.

Anita talked about how perfect his fiance  is for her son, and how when he was sick, and she wasn't around, his fiance was the one that paid the hospital bill for him and more. twinkle smile thinking about it, she remember working day and night to pay it off, she was almost failing one of her classes because of it, but her mom helped her. twinkle watched as Anita asked for the fiance. " thats you twinkle, come go on" her mom says pushing her a little. 

she walk to the front, slowly, but fell when someone walked right passed her. people started laughing. her mom walk to her asking if she was alright, she nods before trying to get up. Anita roll he eyes before speaking " i give you my sons fiance maya", when she said this twinkle and leela were surprise. twinkle was confused, she watch as yuvraj kiss maya on the cheek before holding her hand. yuvraj seeing the look on her face smirk, so did his fiance. " w-whhat is this yuvraj?" twinkle asks "why is maya holding you hand?" she says looking at them hurt

" we are getting married twinkle, i thought you already knew" maya says

twinkle confuse turn to yuvraj " you are my fiance, why are you doing this to me" she says coming closer.

" i was never yours from the start, i was dating maya" he says

maya smile " you see we were just having fun, we didnt think you would fall for it. but apparently you did"

" but the ring, A-and you told me you love me" she says heartbroken

Anita scuff " my son would never date a pumpkin like yourself,  so the ring is probably fake"

twinkle was angry, she told them they were wrong, and that yuvraj loves her. she asks him to tell them, so they can continue with their life, but yuuvraj just grab maya and kiss her. this mad her heartbreak, she called his name one last time, but he ignored her. everyone started whispering, calling her names and laughing at her misery. leela heartbroken, drags her daughter out of there. when they reached the car, twinkle fainted, out of stress. 

few hours later, the doctor told leela that twinkle blood pressure is extremely high, and that she should take care her health more. she told the doctor she will, and sat down. twinklee opened her eyes after the doctor was gone. she told her mom she was sorry for worrying her. her mom told her it was fine. soon twinkle started crying, she told her mom she couldn't believe maya would do this to her, and the same with yuvraj. " you were right maam, i should have listened to you" she says

" its not your fault twinkle, everything will be fine. you just have to rest"

"I worked hard to help him, he took my earning money to decorate the place. i feel like a fool" 

leela, grab her shoulder before letting her head rest on her lap. she stroke twinkle hair, comforting her before telling her everything will be fine. calming down, twinkle wiped her tears " i promise you maam, i will get healthier and graduate. I won't let yuvraj affect my life" she says sniffing

" oh twinkle" she says before hugging her daughter.


TO be continued...
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Posted: 8 years ago
I am already hooked to this story.
The man at her work was Kunj I think.
Yuvi's just a heartless jerk. 
 Beautiful start. 
Do continue soon. 
M waiting eagerly for the next update. 
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interesting storyline
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Interesting start , Loved it.
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Chapter 1


FLASHBACK

After the little incident, Maya had no trouble flaunting the ring in her face. The whole school found out and made fun of her, some were very hurtful saying things like i can't believe how delusional she was to think yuvraj would marry her. And she should stay away from people boyfriends. While walking out of the school, twinkle remember the day she met yuvraj. See she was sitting on the bench, and yuvraj came. He had frown when he saw her, and she blushed because she always had a crush on him.

Maya her best friend, came and smirk seeing them on the bench. He told yuvraj to have fun before she left with some guys.  Shy, she looks at him with a dreamy eye, but she soon stop when yuvraj turn to see her. "This is a cruel way to reject someone" he says to himself, but twinkle heard it.

"What do you mean?"

Yuvraj sign before speaking "I asked Maya out, and she told me to meet her at the bench. I came, but she left me with you" he says " if this is her way of rejecting me, than she really did it" he finished making her frown

"i don't know if i should be offended or not" she says looking at him

"You're right, I'm sorry" he says" it's not your fault after all, you probably didn't know what was going on"

"It's fine, I'm twinkle by the way" she says

"Yuvraj" he says shaking her hand

 END OF FLASHBACK

Twinkle snort thinking about their first meeting, she should have known  it was a set up. But she didn't want to believe it. She got on the bus, feeling empty before reaching home. She stack her books n the table before going to bed.  The next day twinkle was determined, she decides to throw away all her fat food, but before she could throw them out she told herself, she just want to enjoy.sh ate them while crying, than she went to work. It wasn't soon she graduated, and got a job.

 

Few years past, and she was now ready to see her mom. See after she graduated, her mom decides to move back to India. She had always told twinkle to visit her, but with work she didn't have the chance. Now that the company transfer, she will move to India. Her mom was so happy hearing the news, she told twinkle she can't wait to see her. So here she was heading to her plane.  "Excuse me, the man said bumping into her" she bends down to pick up her ticket, but the man beat her to it, he grab it and hand it to her while apologizing. After words he disappear. The man left before she could utter the word thank you, this confuses her. Strange man, she thought before going to her plane. She found her seat and sat down before putting her head phone on. A man stand before her and cleared his throat getting her attention "excuse me" he says, but twinkle couldn't hear him, she was to busy enjoying her music, bobbing her head and shaking her feet. "Excuse me" he says again, but twinkle still didn't hear him.

Irritated the man, gruff before leaning towards her, and take of her head phone. Twinkle confuse look up to the man "what is it?" she asks

The man straightens his back, "you are sitting in my seat, so can you get up" he says

Twinkle looks at the number "you must be confuse sir, but this is my seat. Number 26"

"look it says on my ticket here 26 by the window, you must have got the wrong ticket" he says showing her the ticket, twinkle looks at it before showing hers " see, mine says the same thing number 26 by the window" " now if you excuse me sir, I'm going back to my music. The man look at the ticket and raised his brow, middle class, he thought he tap her again, this time she was irritated "WHAT NOW!" she yells

 

The man wasn't angry at her outburst but instead told her, that she was on the wrong side. He told her that she had paid for middle class, 26 by the window. Twinkle look at her ticket before realizing she did and that she was on the wrong lane, embarrassed she was about to get up, when the flight attendant voice was heard, saying we will now be leaving.

The man look at the girl and told her she could stay there, he will just seat next to her since, it's not a lot of people on this side. Twinkle didn't really here what he was saying, because she was too busy shaking. The man relax on the chair and turn to her when he saw her shaking. "Are you ok miss?" he asks

"NO! This is my first time on a plane, I can't help but to be scared" she says talking supper fast. The man understood, he told her to take a deep breath and calm down. Nothing will happen, but twinkle shook her head in denial. The man told her to listen to her music, and she did. He sigh when she calm down a little. Half of the ride to India was ok, when it was soon landing time and the plane started going down, twinkle puts her hand on top of his, and started chanting for the gods to save her.

 

The man tries to remove her hand from his, but she was holding on to it tightly.  "Excuse me, can you let go" he says feeling awkward, but all he could hear was her saying we are going to die, over and over. When the plane landed she was shaking, the man gave her some times to cool down before asking her if she was ready to get up. Twinkle opened her eyes and nod, she waited until the man got up before she gets up. The man waited for her to grab her stuff, from the top bunk, while waiting he observe her outfit, she was wearing denim jeans and a crop top, which shows her back and stomach. He groans uncomfortably.

Twinkle was having a hard time, grabbing her suit case, yes she's short, but she didn't think the flight attendant would put it so high. The man watch as she jump, and struggle to grab her thinks. She was making struggling noise, with her tongue a little out. One of the passengers passing by stop to stare at her skin showing. He was blushing, while watching her. His seeing this slaps him, making him snap out of it. The man sigh, seems like his been doing that lately. He walk to twinkle, hovering above her, he tried not to think about the warmth he was feeling being so close to her. He grab her suit case, surprising her, before putting it on the ground. Twinkle turn to him and thank him before grabbing it and walk away. The man looks at her and chuckle, he grab his suit case and walk out of the plane. He walk right past her heading to his car, while she wait for her mom to come get her. She watch as the rain fall, bringing some unwanted memories. She didn't want to think about her ex so she found something better to do.

While waiting she didn't notice, a car passing by her with speed. The car splash the water making it land on twinkle, soaking her from head to toe. Twinkle look at the white car, before running after it, but she didn't get far because the driver had no intention to stop. Grumpy twinkle walk back to her suit case, mumbling bad things. The driver, who happened to be the man from before smirk, before chuckling to himself, he wasn't stupid. He saw twinkle standing there, and wanted to pay her back for embarrassing him on the plane. He watch her from the rear mirror before saying her name "twinkle, what an interesting name" he says before holding her necklace in his hand.

 TO BE CONTINUED...

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Posted: 8 years ago
Loved it. Yuvi and maya are such cheap people. Poor twinkle. Hope she gets the strength to get over this. 
Do continue soon 
Looking foward to this 
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Posted: 8 years ago
Amazing update!
Hate this Yuvi and Maya. 
Update soon!