SS: Naa Paas Aa Sakey Naa Door Jaa Sakey [Epilogue PG109] *COMPLETE* - Page 65

it was an amazingly beautiful ss..

Amazing ending of a wonderful story.. loved it a lot.. will miss it.. 

Jiji... I must admit I had read the epilogue when you posted it... just to know how this story ends... But I had not read four chapter before it... so did not want to comment. Finally got the time to catch up on the story and here I am with my thoughts. Loved it! Absolutely loved how you have sketched out the story. The way you carved Lavanya's character, thankfully not making her too negative. I love how you write scenes between Arnav and Khushi... especially the intense ones. The way you perceive both of them as strong individuals is what I like best. I loved that chotu jhatka when you made Arnav turn Khushi away and the way they came back together... knowing well how much he truly loves her. When you write dialogues like "I missed you woman!", I can so think of you saying them. 😆 You call me woman all the time!! This was one fantastic story Jiji... and I apologize for not being able to comment before... but have truly enjoyed this intense, passionate story of Arnav and Khushi. Keep writing more such stuff... and some really passionate scenes between Arnav and Khushi! ❤️

Very nice story. Loved reading it.

A beautifully love filled story..

Awesome story.

Different concept J sis..I always don't like triangle love stories in which surely one of them 'll suffer a heartbreak or turns into negative only for his/her love..I hesitate to read it..but it's my fortune that I did it..nice story sis..the turn of events amazed me..I expected a typical Arnav-khushi..but I loved their another dimensions here..lavanya too..

nice story J sis..:)

Originally posted by: gprs

Different concept J sis..I always don't like triangle love stories in which surely one of them 'll suffer a heartbreak or turns into negative only for his/her love..I hesitate to read it..but it's my fortune that I did it..nice story sis..the turn of events amazed me..I expected a typical Arnav-khushi..but I loved their another dimensions here..lavanya too..

nice story J sis..:)

Thank you Mathi. Where were you missing girl? Glad you loved this.. Not a typical love-triangle I know right. 😳

Originally posted by: -FriedriceJi-

Thank you Mathi. Where were you missing girl? Glad you loved this.. Not a typical love-triangle I know right. 😳

a bunch of my monkeys(my beloved nephews ..ha..ha) landed in my place for summer holidays..my lap and mob were under their custody..now I'm back J akka..gonna stalk you 😉