The Devil (Promo pg:140) thread 2 link pg-1 8feb.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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The Devil

PROMO
Kehte.. hai.. ek na.. ek.. hr.. ishn.. uki.. gunaho.. ki.. saza.. jarur.. milti.. hai.. chahe.. fir.. voh.. ishan.. balhe badl hi kyo.. na.. gya.. ho.. This is the story.. of devil who fell in love.. with sweet Princess that girl changes.. him fully from head to toe.. the devil turns into.. a prince but his past never leaves his way..

"Manik.. kab tk aoge.. tum.. baby.. i m missing u.. so much.. "nandini said on phone setting at open restaurant

"Oh.. baby.. just.. close yr.. eyes.. i will be right in front of yr.. eyes vaise... u r looking super hot in red dress"manik said n nandini start looking here n there

"Stop.. looking here n there.. n just close yr.. eyes.. "manik said n nandini obediently closes her eyes

"Now.. open.. yr.. eyes.. "she heard his voice near to her n she immidaitly open her eyes n look down he setting on knees in front of her

"Will u be.. mine.. forever n ever.. will marry me.. "manik said deeply looking into her eyes n forward his hand infront of her

Nandini is numb.. at her place.. just looking into his eyes feeling his true love for her

"Nandini.. say.. something plz.."manik said getting up as he becoming restless as she didn't saying anything

"I m yrs.. only.. jbse.. u told me.. everything.. true.. about yrself.. infront me.. i love.. u.. manik.. "nandini said jumping on him n hug him tightly

"I love.. u.. to.. but.. still now.. u don't know... about.. me.. everything..."manik said but than he heart her scream

"Manik... "nandini scream n turn their.. postion n 2 3 bullet hitted on her back n surrounded people get frighten n start running here n there.. n in b/w the shooter runs away

"Na.. nandini.. "manik said holding her face as she fall in his arm

Manik collapsed on floor with her n put her head on his lap "nandini... "he scream as much louder he can n rain also started is like that whole world is crying with him

"U.. can't.. go.. like.. this.. bakwan.. meri.. gunaho.. ki.. saza.. tumhai.. nhi.. de.. skta.. "he shouts.. looking toward the sky..

So here.. chuta.. sa.. promo.. of my TS. For the first i m writing TS voh.. manik dark character.. guyz.. i will post 1st part of it.. i will get response it be a interesting one.. n dark.. too..



INDEX






PART:3A&B I LOVE HER

Part:4A&B MANIK'S Fear

Part : 5AB&C Our First kiss

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Patelsonu thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It's awesome wanna read more nic
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Posted: 9 years ago
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its interesting...
manik's past is still hovering around him...
ho no nandini got shooted...
well...wtng 4r update...
cont soon...

keep smiling!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It's awesome and very interesting plot
Continue Soon
Thanks for PM
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Dark ts...sound interesting...
Manik was a underworld man...(then he must b looking SO handsome...)...
But dear merit ek request rakh lo...
Es ts ka HAPPY ENDING karna...plz...😛.
Anyway cont soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nycc concpt
Thnx for pm me
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome and interesting dear...
Um excited... waiting for more...
Continue soon...
Thanks for pm...
Chocolava14 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Ooohhooo...i m realllyy exciiteddd fr dis one
Always keep writing😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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interesting promo dear...waiting for update
Sofiafarooq thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice idea. Story is gonna b amazing.

I'm sure u will bring another fresh different idea.

Will wait for update.

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