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Hey ppl I am writing an os related to the scene were survi falls into the water...so here it goes..
Survi was slowly and carefully walking on the bridge. ..suddenly a wooden plank broke and survi fell down right into the water..karthik was standing and watching all dis happen..
Survi tried her best to be afloat in the water..
S: bachao...KARTHIK BACHAO MUJHE...KARTHIK BACHAO..
Karthik came and looked down at survi how she was struggling...he has a flashback of how he saved survi from the goons...Survi slowly started drowning in the water...Karthik jumped straight into the water...he held survi by holding her waist..she had fainted ...karthik pulled survi close to him..she was slipping fron his hand so he pulled her more close, their clothes were rustling..and their chests met each other...she tucked her hair strands behind her ear..."how beautiful she was, innocence covered her face...the water droplets made her face glisten in the sunlight...he was staring at the beauty in front of him...he was lost in her...he felt like holding her forever and never let her go..he swam across the river with survi...they reached the shore and karthik placed survi softly on the ground.
K: survi utto..utto survi utto...aankhe kholo survi..
Karthik did not realise what he was telling...he was calling her survi instead of simmi...he started to pump out the water from her body...but she wasnt gaining consiousness...he touched her she was cold...he rubbed her hands and feet for more warmth...she coughed a little nd moved a bit. Karthik uttered her name survi..survi by tapping on her face...she was shivering out of cold...she needed more heat so he picked her gently and hugged her so tight that there wasnt space even for air...he was rubbing her back and was giving all his warmth to her...al he could think was about survi..
K: pls utt jao survi pls aankhe kholo survi...
she coughed, karthik took her out of his arms and when he saw her face her eyes was half open she was mumbling something..he went close to her and was shocked at what she was saying...
S: karthik. ...karthik. .maine ka..kaki ko kuch nahi kiya..kuch nahi..mein sach bo..bol rahi hun karthik..maaf kardo kujhe maaf kardo mujhe karthik...karthik..
and she dozes into deep sleep
Karthik was first a little happy while listening to her words..cuz he never wanted to blame survi..and somtimes he thought to himself weather survi did this or not...but he was confused now in what to belive..he saw survi and her condition wasnt gud enough and she needed some good rest...and he had to give her shelter in a secured place. He picked up survi in his arms and her face was burried in his chest...he held her close and started walking. Their car was far drom that place. He was out of the place and was on the road with survi...as he walked ahead a hotel was there he was relived to see it. He entered the hotel and got themself a room booked.
He went inside and placed her on the bed...he sat beside her and kept on looking at her innocent face...he let her sleep and went down to the nearby shop and got clothes for him and her. He returned to their room and got his dress changed. When he was out of the washroom he saw her and thought that she also should get her dress changed..
He went down and called the cleaner woman and requested her to change survi's clothes, and she agreed.
He led her to their room and after a few minutes the women came out and karthik thanked her then she left.
Karthik entered the room and locked the door..he went beside her and caressed her head...and he was led into deep thinking..was survi saying the truth? Is someone else responsible for her aai's state...many questions were circling around his mind.."Karthik..said a slow voice..karthik looked at her...she slowly opened her eyes..
K: survi tum teek ho...kaisa lag raha hai?
survi was shocked she thought to herself " so he does know that she is survi" and this couldnt be co incidence he called me survi twice...
S: aap mujhe survi kehkar kyun bularahe hain sir...
K: tumne bhi to mujhe karthik kehkar bulaya...
S: maine aapko kab apke naam kehkar bulaya..
K: jab tum paani mein girgayi tab tum mere naam lekar chilla rahi tumhe bachane ke liye..
S: isme badi baath kya hai vo mein darr gayi thi issiliye...
K: aur jab tumne mujhe karthik kehkar bulaya tab mujhe kisiki yaad aagayi...
S: kaun??
K: survi.. survi mujhe aise hi bulati thi mera naam lekar..aur bohot accha bhi lagta hai mera naam uske mu se..
S: aap meri har baat kyun survi se relate kar rahe hain sir? Kyun?
K: kyun tumhe koi problem hai??
S: haan hai sir..vo..vo..
K: kya vo..vo..laga kar rakhi hai tumne haan, main tumhe batata hoon..survi ko survi kehkar hi bulana padtha hai simmi nahi...
survi was hell shocked " so my guess was right..he does no that I am survi..but how..
K: tum ab sochrahi hogi na ki mujhe kaisa pata chala...vo kya hai na bure ki asli chehra bohot jaldi hi bahar aa jati hai...
kya hua SIMMI jhatka laga kya..
Survi slowly gets up from her bed and she walks towards karthik..karthik turns around and sees her..
K: vo karthik..
karthik sees her unstable condition she is about to fall when he holds her and an eyelock captures them both..karthik straightens her up and takes her to bed and makes her lie down...
Jab tum teek nahi ho tho kade hone ki kya zaroorath thi.
survi is totally appaled to see this concern after so many years...afterall she felt most safe under his concern..she felt happy inside her..
K: kyun survi..kyun tum baar baar joot pe joot bol kar jaa rahi ho..tumhari naam kuch aur, srikanth kaka naam kuch aur..kyun ye sab kar rahi ho??
S: me..meine aapko kaha tha na ki mein survi nahi hoon.to phir ...
karthik goes so close to survi and locks her against the bed.."bus survi bus mujhse jhoot bolkar koi faida nahi. Kyun tum ye sab kar rahi ho? Kyun baar baar mujhe dokha de rahi ho aur kyun mujhe aur dard de rahi ho?
Tears were rolling down survi's cheeks... she was unable to answer...
K: jawab do mujhe survi...aur kya tha vo jo tumne mujhse kaha haan, ki tumne aai ka ye haal ki zimendaar nahi ho
Survi was shocked to hear that...she said to karthik " ab aapko mera asliyat pata chal gayi...lekin aapne hi mujhe sikhaya ki vaade kabhi nahi thod the..yehi samjiye ki mera ye ki hui vaada meri majboori hai...aur ek baat, meine lata kaki ko kuch nahi kiya...such mein pata nahi tha ki kaki bhi uss din factory par thi" karthik glares at her.." such mein karthik mujhe kuch bhi pata nahi..mujhe yeh baat tabhi pata chala tha jab meine kaki uss din coma stage mein dekhi thi..mein kabhi tumhe ya kaki ka nuksaan nahi pohancha sakthi...agar tumne mujh pe kabhi bhi yakken kiya na to ye baat bhi maan lo...
K: tum jhoot bol rahi ho ...meine tumhe thappad mara isliye tumne mere nuksaan kiye...meri aai ka is haalat karke..
S: karthik..lata kaki meri aai ki tarah hai mein unhe takleef mein dekh nahi sakthi, aur aapko mein nuksaan to kya pareshaan bhi nahi dekh sakthi aapne mere liye itna kuch kiya aur apko lagta hai ki mein ye sab kar sakthi hoon, kaise karthik..mein to aapse pya...
Karthik was shocked to hear what survi was about to say...
K: kya kaha tumne?? Tum mujhse kya..
S: kuch nahi...vo bas aise hi aagaya tha...
They were staring at each other suddenly survi was feeling dizzy. Karthik made her sleep and coverd her wid blanket and was about to leave when survi held his hand..." tum mujpe yakeen karte ho na karthik? " and she dozed off.
A smile crept on karthiks face when he saw her sleeping like a baby...and he thought to himself...aaj tak survi ne mujhse kabhi jhoot nahi boli toh kya mujhe uss pe yakeen karna hai kya?? Vo baar baar kyun kahegi ki usne kuch nahi kiya...kya koi aur ne ye sab kiya...aur kis vaada ki baare mein baat kar rahi thi. Kuch samaj mein nahi araha hai aur ye survi end pe kya bol ne waali thi? Aisa lag raha tha ki voh ye kehna chati thi ki vo mujhse pyaar??? This thought itself made karthik blush...he looked down at survi and placed a soft kiss on her forehead and a faint smile appeared on her face as if she was with safest person on earth... " mujhe iss baat ki tey tak jaana padega "
So guyz how was it?? Pls leav ur comments..nd I hope u guyz like it..
Survi was slowly and carefully walking on the bridge. ..suddenly a wooden plank broke and survi fell down right into the water..karthik was standing and watching all dis happen..
Survi tried her best to be afloat in the water..
S: bachao...KARTHIK BACHAO MUJHE...KARTHIK BACHAO..
Karthik came and looked down at survi how she was struggling...he has a flashback of how he saved survi from the goons...Survi slowly started drowning in the water...Karthik jumped straight into the water...he held survi by holding her waist..she had fainted ...karthik pulled survi close to him..she was slipping fron his hand so he pulled her more close, their clothes were rustling..and their chests met each other...she tucked her hair strands behind her ear..."how beautiful she was, innocence covered her face...the water droplets made her face glisten in the sunlight...he was staring at the beauty in front of him...he was lost in her...he felt like holding her forever and never let her go..he swam across the river with survi...they reached the shore and karthik placed survi softly on the ground.
K: survi utto..utto survi utto...aankhe kholo survi..
Karthik did not realise what he was telling...he was calling her survi instead of simmi...he started to pump out the water from her body...but she wasnt gaining consiousness...he touched her she was cold...he rubbed her hands and feet for more warmth...she coughed a little nd moved a bit. Karthik uttered her name survi..survi by tapping on her face...she was shivering out of cold...she needed more heat so he picked her gently and hugged her so tight that there wasnt space even for air...he was rubbing her back and was giving all his warmth to her...al he could think was about survi..
K: pls utt jao survi pls aankhe kholo survi...
she coughed, karthik took her out of his arms and when he saw her face her eyes was half open she was mumbling something..he went close to her and was shocked at what she was saying...
S: karthik. ...karthik. .maine ka..kaki ko kuch nahi kiya..kuch nahi..mein sach bo..bol rahi hun karthik..maaf kardo kujhe maaf kardo mujhe karthik...karthik..
and she dozes into deep sleep
Karthik was first a little happy while listening to her words..cuz he never wanted to blame survi..and somtimes he thought to himself weather survi did this or not...but he was confused now in what to belive..he saw survi and her condition wasnt gud enough and she needed some good rest...and he had to give her shelter in a secured place. He picked up survi in his arms and her face was burried in his chest...he held her close and started walking. Their car was far drom that place. He was out of the place and was on the road with survi...as he walked ahead a hotel was there he was relived to see it. He entered the hotel and got themself a room booked.
He went inside and placed her on the bed...he sat beside her and kept on looking at her innocent face...he let her sleep and went down to the nearby shop and got clothes for him and her. He returned to their room and got his dress changed. When he was out of the washroom he saw her and thought that she also should get her dress changed..
He went down and called the cleaner woman and requested her to change survi's clothes, and she agreed.
He led her to their room and after a few minutes the women came out and karthik thanked her then she left.
Karthik entered the room and locked the door..he went beside her and caressed her head...and he was led into deep thinking..was survi saying the truth? Is someone else responsible for her aai's state...many questions were circling around his mind.."Karthik..said a slow voice..karthik looked at her...she slowly opened her eyes..
K: survi tum teek ho...kaisa lag raha hai?
survi was shocked she thought to herself " so he does know that she is survi" and this couldnt be co incidence he called me survi twice...
S: aap mujhe survi kehkar kyun bularahe hain sir...
K: tumne bhi to mujhe karthik kehkar bulaya...
S: maine aapko kab apke naam kehkar bulaya..
K: jab tum paani mein girgayi tab tum mere naam lekar chilla rahi tumhe bachane ke liye..
S: isme badi baath kya hai vo mein darr gayi thi issiliye...
K: aur jab tumne mujhe karthik kehkar bulaya tab mujhe kisiki yaad aagayi...
S: kaun??
K: survi.. survi mujhe aise hi bulati thi mera naam lekar..aur bohot accha bhi lagta hai mera naam uske mu se..
S: aap meri har baat kyun survi se relate kar rahe hain sir? Kyun?
K: kyun tumhe koi problem hai??
S: haan hai sir..vo..vo..
K: kya vo..vo..laga kar rakhi hai tumne haan, main tumhe batata hoon..survi ko survi kehkar hi bulana padtha hai simmi nahi...
survi was hell shocked " so my guess was right..he does no that I am survi..but how..
K: tum ab sochrahi hogi na ki mujhe kaisa pata chala...vo kya hai na bure ki asli chehra bohot jaldi hi bahar aa jati hai...
kya hua SIMMI jhatka laga kya..
Survi slowly gets up from her bed and she walks towards karthik..karthik turns around and sees her..
K: vo karthik..
karthik sees her unstable condition she is about to fall when he holds her and an eyelock captures them both..karthik straightens her up and takes her to bed and makes her lie down...
Jab tum teek nahi ho tho kade hone ki kya zaroorath thi.
survi is totally appaled to see this concern after so many years...afterall she felt most safe under his concern..she felt happy inside her..
K: kyun survi..kyun tum baar baar joot pe joot bol kar jaa rahi ho..tumhari naam kuch aur, srikanth kaka naam kuch aur..kyun ye sab kar rahi ho??
S: me..meine aapko kaha tha na ki mein survi nahi hoon.to phir ...
karthik goes so close to survi and locks her against the bed.."bus survi bus mujhse jhoot bolkar koi faida nahi. Kyun tum ye sab kar rahi ho? Kyun baar baar mujhe dokha de rahi ho aur kyun mujhe aur dard de rahi ho?
Tears were rolling down survi's cheeks... she was unable to answer...
K: jawab do mujhe survi...aur kya tha vo jo tumne mujhse kaha haan, ki tumne aai ka ye haal ki zimendaar nahi ho
Survi was shocked to hear that...she said to karthik " ab aapko mera asliyat pata chal gayi...lekin aapne hi mujhe sikhaya ki vaade kabhi nahi thod the..yehi samjiye ki mera ye ki hui vaada meri majboori hai...aur ek baat, meine lata kaki ko kuch nahi kiya...such mein pata nahi tha ki kaki bhi uss din factory par thi" karthik glares at her.." such mein karthik mujhe kuch bhi pata nahi..mujhe yeh baat tabhi pata chala tha jab meine kaki uss din coma stage mein dekhi thi..mein kabhi tumhe ya kaki ka nuksaan nahi pohancha sakthi...agar tumne mujh pe kabhi bhi yakken kiya na to ye baat bhi maan lo...
K: tum jhoot bol rahi ho ...meine tumhe thappad mara isliye tumne mere nuksaan kiye...meri aai ka is haalat karke..
S: karthik..lata kaki meri aai ki tarah hai mein unhe takleef mein dekh nahi sakthi, aur aapko mein nuksaan to kya pareshaan bhi nahi dekh sakthi aapne mere liye itna kuch kiya aur apko lagta hai ki mein ye sab kar sakthi hoon, kaise karthik..mein to aapse pya...
Karthik was shocked to hear what survi was about to say...
K: kya kaha tumne?? Tum mujhse kya..
S: kuch nahi...vo bas aise hi aagaya tha...
They were staring at each other suddenly survi was feeling dizzy. Karthik made her sleep and coverd her wid blanket and was about to leave when survi held his hand..." tum mujpe yakeen karte ho na karthik? " and she dozed off.
A smile crept on karthiks face when he saw her sleeping like a baby...and he thought to himself...aaj tak survi ne mujhse kabhi jhoot nahi boli toh kya mujhe uss pe yakeen karna hai kya?? Vo baar baar kyun kahegi ki usne kuch nahi kiya...kya koi aur ne ye sab kiya...aur kis vaada ki baare mein baat kar rahi thi. Kuch samaj mein nahi araha hai aur ye survi end pe kya bol ne waali thi? Aisa lag raha tha ki voh ye kehna chati thi ki vo mujhse pyaar??? This thought itself made karthik blush...he looked down at survi and placed a soft kiss on her forehead and a faint smile appeared on her face as if she was with safest person on earth... " mujhe iss baat ki tey tak jaana padega "
So guyz how was it?? Pls leav ur comments..nd I hope u guyz like it..
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