||~~ KaYa TS : The Regret ~~|| Completed ||

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Hi everyone!

This OS starts after Kabir congratulates Ananya and walks away. They haven't patched up yet. Ananya is mum as the guilt is eating her up from inside. She is not able to tolerate the fact that she blamed the person who always supported her.

Ananya was lost in her own thoughts when Richa approached her.

Richa : Ananya, kab tak apne aap ko rokegi? Baat kyun nahi karti Kabir Sir se? Ab to Kabir sir ne tere papa ko bhi insaaf dila diya. Kya ab bhi tu un par.

Ananya quickly interrupted her.

Ananya : Nahi Richa. Bilkul nahi. Mujhe un par pura trust hai. Main maanti hoon ke sachai pata chalte hi maine un ka saath chod diya tha laikin mere dil ne un par trust karna kabhi nahi choda. Unki aankhein saari sachai keh deti hain Richa. Un aankhon main maine dard dekha hai, guilt dekha hai aur pyaar ki tadap dekhi hai. And what did I do? I left him. I parted my ways from him. How could I Richa? How can I leave such a pure - hearted soul? I didn't even give him a chance to explain himself. Instead, I slapped him with my sinful hands.

While saying this, her hold tightened on the box of staples causing a wound on her hand.

Ananya : I don't deserve him, Richa. I do NOT deserve him.

She was crying hysterically and hugged Richa who felt helpless seeing her friend in such a vulnerable state.

Kabir was standing infront of the Kashyap house. He was invited for a dinner. The door opened and he was welcomed by Anita. He greeted her and she hugged him. Armaan too hugged his jeeju. Kabir's eyes were searching for her but she was not there. May be she wanted to avoid him, he thought. His eyes reflected the emptiness of not having her with him yet his heart was contented being guilt - free. Anita understood his condition. She made him sit and gave a glass of water.

Anita : She is not yet home, Kabir.

Kabir gave a sad smile.

Kabir : Shayad ab bhi mujhse naraaz hai.

Anita : No beta. Don't lose hope. I will talk to her.

Kabir : Nahi Maa. Aap bilkul bhi us se is baare main baat nahi karengi. Us ne jo decision liya hai, I will support her.

Anita : But Kabir.

Their conversation was interrupted by the door bell. Ananya came in and was surprised to see Kabir looking at her. He looked at her. She looked pale and tired. Her eyes were swollen. May be she cried. She quickly averted her gaze which hurt Kabir. His gaze then fell on her bandaged hand. He took long steps towards her and gently took her hand in his.

Kabir : What happened to your hand Ananya? How did you get hurt?

Ananya (Avoiding his gaze) : Ummm.. just a scratch. Nothing serious.

Her eyes then fell on their intertwined hands. How perfectly do they fit each other. How much had she dreamt of holding his hand and spending rest of the life with him. But she left him. She shattered the dreams. Most of all she had brutally hurt him. Her eyes caught the engagement ring he was still wearing. Her eyes filled with tears and she slowly removed her hand from his and walked away leaving a hurt Kabir looking at his life walking away from him yet again..


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chats53 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Oh that's beautiful 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Superb start.
Update soon

PS: is TR in you UN means Taani Rey by any chance??
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Rosu.

Superb start.

Update soon

PS: is TR in you UN means Taani Rey by any chance??



Thank you so much!

Oh YES!My TaaRey. My love and the reason why I had joined IF long ago. Then after they were butchered, I had left the forum.. KaYa brought me back ... You too a TR fan?
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey your ts is ossom!I loved the beginning.Wonderful work,please continue soon.waiting for the next part!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Its a beautiful start ! Do continue soon plz...
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Thank you dear!
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Originally posted by: chats53

Oh that's beautiful 😊


Thank you so Much!
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Originally posted by: Ksgrkfan

Hey your ts is ossom!I loved the beginning.Wonderful work,please continue soon.waiting for the next part!


Thanks a lot! Yeah will do so..😃
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Originally posted by: BedouinMe

Its a beautiful start ! Do continue soon plz...


Thanks a lot, dear! Will do so!😳

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