ArHi OS: Young Gods (16+)

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CheshireBilli

@CheshireBilli

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 10 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: BlueMystique
RES FOR GODS <-- I am just gonna leave that here

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If someone said to me what Arnav said to Khushi, I would have ruined the moment by laughing in their face. BUT, because it's Arnav, and because he preceded it with the explanation, I didn't laugh when I was reading that bit. Was it a bit conceited? Sure. Was it a problem? Of course not. Also, great tie in into the title, although I thought it was for a completely different kind of talent all together *wink* *wink*

Good OS, Chutki. You should do this more often. It's not like you have promised a number of updates for your other, non-existent, FF or anything. What? FF? Who's spreading lies?

I kinda second Ridz. Impossible to have kept a straight face during that conversation. 😆

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aquagal

@aquagal

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+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: boyznaka

Thank you sooo much! And yes.. I guess they'd be the action kind. Well, in my mind they were at least. I tried to make Khushi more confident too here (like, not nervous at the thought of sex, you know?), although Idk how that worked out. I usually think up things and they turn out very differently.
Ahahaahah you should talk to Ridz! When I shared the doc her first message was "Young God? LOL". Not even kidding. Thank you! Hugs xxx

They undoubtedly came across as confident, koi doubt mat rakhna😆
And I've to say that confident Khushi is way cooler than a confident Arnav. Confident Arnav mostly borderlines on arrogant but Khushi is cool and confident.
Lol.. But it's in sync with the story line.

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Fried Rice Ji ðŸš

@Friedriceji

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+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#43

Hey Malayka

This was so much fun to read. I remember reading your posts and analysis (Chameli posts and fanfaraktions) 😉

Ahhh.. this was so sexay man.. Arnav gave me immense feels and Khushi was no less, I loved how attuned they were with each other and what followed. Surely a god and goddess. You write so beautifully and the song is precious.

I am tempted to read Ravendor.

Love

Edited by -FriedriceJi- - 10 years ago

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@boyznaka

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Posted: 10 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: -FriedriceJi-
Hey Malayka

This was so much fun to read. I remember reading your posts and analysis (Chameli posts and fanfaraktions) 😉

Ahhh.. this was so sexay man.. Arnav gave me immense feels and Khushi was no less, I loved how attuned they were with each other and what followed. Surely a god and goddess. You write so beautifully and the song is precious.

I am tempted to read Ravendor.

Love
J

Hey! Thank you so much! So glad you liked it! And the fanfaraktion too.. damn that was so long ago. But an old forumie yayyy!

Thanks a lot man, you're too sweet. Haha I won't object, of course. Read away.

xxx

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Zuriah

@Zuriah

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#45

Wow M😛

Amazing one really. ..

Its funny yet endulging. ..absolutely goes with the titke young gods..

Yup they truly are gods for each other...tealky a sensual one. .left ne beet root red at the end..

There passion for each other is unresistable ...

Loved it..I m amazed that u gave ur wrote this os of urs soo efficiently. ..loved it to core🤗

Thnx for link

Looking forward for more os

Loads of love

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Mirabell

@Mirabell

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+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#46

Hm... that was a really fun read... Clever storytelling... a lot in a little space. I really liked it.

That little spiel that Arnav gave Khushi about what made them Gods (did not miss the G .. :) and not g) was reminiscent of Fountainhead? :)

Glad I clicked on your jokes link and glad to have found @IPK Fans Don't Say... and glad to have found this.

One of the better "smuts" (as you put it) I have read in a long time. ❤️

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RasgullaSP

@Rasgulla_sp

Trailblazer

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#47

My comment will either make you love me or hate me...

Reading this Arnav and Khushi being 'gods' gave me a very Ayn Randish feeling. I can sum up my entire comment in this one line.

Btw, werent you a little girl? You grew up so much in 3 years??? Arnavji mellow down ho gaye aur aap 16+ likhne lagi 😛

You write very well. I am impressed 👍🏼

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@boyznaka

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+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: Mirabell
Hm... that was a really fun read... Clever storytelling... a lot in a little space. I really liked it.
That little spiel that Arnav gave Khushi about what made them Gods (did not miss the G .. :) and not g) was reminiscent of Fountainhead? :)

Glad I clicked on your jokes link and glad to have found @IPK Fans Don't Say... and glad to have found this.

One of the better "smuts" (as you put it) I have read in a long time. ❤️

After reading your comment I thought about it and yes somehow even I am reminded of Fountainhead. Arnav would be the Howard Roark kind eh?

And I'm glad you liked both the OS and IPKFansDontSay- both were results of pointless procrastination. 😆

Thank you! Very happy that you think so. ❤️

Edited by boyznaka - 10 years ago

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@boyznaka

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Posted: 10 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: Rasgulla_sp
My comment will either make you love me or hate me...
Reading this Arnav and Khushi being 'gods' gave me a very Ayn Randish feeling. I can sum up my entire comment in this one line.

Btw, werent you a little girl? You grew up so much in 3 years??? Arnavji mellow down ho gaye aur aap 16+ likhne lagi 😛

You write very well. I am impressed 👍🏼

RASGULLAJI! I could never hate you or your comment!!!!!!!!!!!!

LOL, you're right. It does have an Ayn Rand-ish feel to it, albeit unintended. And I am sort of.. not much of an Ayn Rand fan.. but it's alright because it's true!

LOL. I was only 16? or 17? Ab if I am 16+ toh fic should also be 16+ na?

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Pramiti

@maverickmartin

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#50

I really liked this. I really did.

But...

I wanted to keep reading about their conversation. Kings and Queens in a world of their own. It really sounded like something that would go into a berlin-artparasite post on Facebook.

I dunno if you get that reference, but all I meant was, this was the first time ever I was disappointed to see smut come up in a story. ArShi smut, that too. :D

Fantastic writing. Where have you been all this time?!
Uck. That was so Christian Grey.

Edited by maverickmartin - 10 years ago