ArHi OS: Young Gods (16+) - Page 5

Posted: 8 years ago
This was smoking hot!!!
And not to forget extremely intriguing!!!
You are a wonderful writer, you know?
Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by IpKkNdSaRunArHi


This was smoking hot!!!
And not to forget extremely intriguing!!!
You are a wonderful writer, you know?

Hahahah, thanks a ton! You are really sweet, you know? :)
Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by BlueMystique


RES FOR GODS <-- I am just gonna leave that here

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If someone said to me what Arnav said to Khushi, I would have ruined the moment by laughing in their face. BUT, because it's Arnav, and because he preceded it with the explanation, I didn't laugh when I was reading that bit. Was it a bit conceited? Sure. Was it a problem? Of course not. Also, great tie in into the title, although I thought it was for a completely different kind of talent all together *wink* *wink*

Good OS, Chutki. You should do this more often. It's not like you have promised a number of updates for your other, non-existent, FF or anything. What? FF? Who's spreading lies?



I kinda second Ridz. Impossible to have kept a straight face during that conversation. πŸ˜†
Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by boyznaka



Thank you sooo much! And yes.. I guess they'd be the action kind. Well, in my mind they were at least. I tried to make Khushi more confident too here (like, not nervous at the thought of sex, you know?), although Idk how that worked out. I usually think up things and they turn out very differently.
Ahahaahah you should talk to Ridz! When I shared the doc her first message was "Young God? LOL". Not even kidding. Thank you! Hugs xxx


They undoubtedly came across as confident, koi doubt mat rakhnaπŸ˜†
And I've to say that confident Khushi is way cooler than a confident Arnav. Confident Arnav mostly borderlines on arrogant but Khushi is cool and confident.
Lol.. But it's in sync with the story line.
Posted: 8 years ago
Hey Malayka


This was so much fun to read. I remember reading your posts and analysis (Chameli posts and fanfaraktions) πŸ˜‰

Ahhh.. this was so sexay man.. Arnav gave me immense feels and Khushi was no less, I loved how attuned they were with each other and what followed. Surely a god and goddess. You write so beautifully and the song is precious.

I am tempted to read Ravendor.

Love
J
Edited by -FriedriceJi- - 8 years ago
Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by -FriedriceJi-


Hey Malayka


This was so much fun to read. I remember reading your posts and analysis (Chameli posts and fanfaraktions) πŸ˜‰

Ahhh.. this was so sexay man.. Arnav gave me immense feels and Khushi was no less, I loved how attuned they were with each other and what followed. Surely a god and goddess. You write so beautifully and the song is precious.

I am tempted to read Ravendor.

Love
J

Hey! Thank you so much! So glad you liked it! And the fanfaraktion too.. damn that was so long ago. But an old forumie yayyy! 
Thanks a lot man, you're too sweet. Haha I won't object, of course. Read away.
xxx
Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by yoga123


Beautiful...

Thank you!!
Posted: 8 years ago
Wow MπŸ˜›

    Amazing one really. ..
Its funny yet endulging. ..absolutely goes with the titke young gods..

Yup they truly are gods for each other...tealky a sensual one. .left ne beet root red at the end..

There passion for each other is unresistable ...

    Loved it..I m amazed that u gave ur wrote this os of urs soo efficiently. ..loved it to coreπŸ€—
Thnx for link
Looking forward for more os
Loads of love
Z
Posted: 8 years ago
Hm... that was a really fun read... Clever storytelling... a lot in a little space. I really liked it.
That little spiel that Arnav gave Khushi about what made them Gods (did not miss the G .. :) and not g) was reminiscent of Fountainhead? :) 

Glad I clicked on your jokes link and glad to have found @IPK Fans Don't Say... and glad to have found this.

One of the better "smuts" (as you put it) I have read in a long time. β€οΈ
Posted: 8 years ago
My comment will either make you love me or hate me...
Reading this Arnav and Khushi being 'gods' gave me a very Ayn Randish feeling. I can sum up my entire comment in this one line.

Btw, werent you a little girl? You grew up so much in 3 years??? Arnavji mellow down ho gaye aur aap 16+ likhne lagi πŸ˜›

You write very well. I am impressed πŸ‘πŸΌ

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