Swasan and RagLak FF Betrayal:Do you Still Love Me?? part 19 pg 34 - Page 2

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Con soon
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Interesting start ..It has got me interested in how you will continue.
Seems like Sanskaar is agyakaari. Lakshya loves his brother very much.Swara and ragini seem very close .Am curious to know ...
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Wow! Such an amazing concept! Continue soon!! Can't wait to read more! :)
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interesting ff !!
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if possible do pm whenever u update next !!
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The story seems so interesting ! 👍🏼 and it was beautifully written by you.  Update soon!!! ❤️
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It was awesome and different update dr...
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Part 2

Bangalore

Sanskaar comes downstairs. His mom comes in front.
"Why u did such a big deception with your mom Sanskaar?" She sounds angry.

"What have I done?" He asked confused.

She shows him Swara's pic.

"I got it under your pillow. you..."

Sanky cut her.

"I am sorry Mom. I tried my best but, I couldn't forget her." He said lowering his head down.

(Lucky comes)

"What do u mean by that?" She fumed in anger. "Is she any goddess that, you cannot forget her?"

"Do not remain silent Today Bhai. You have to fight today. Not for yourself, for your love. Say Sanskaar, Say!" Said Lakshya in mind.

"Today I'll erase this thing totally." Said Sujata trying to tear the photo.

Sanskaar held her hand.

"sorry mom, not today. This time I will not remain silent." He said meeting her eyes.

"Sanskaar..."

"If my Swara had trouble, it has to face me first." He said confident.

"Lakshya, tu sun raha hai yeah k keh raha hai? Say him to stop it!" She said in a hope.

"I was waiting for this day since two years, when it is happening today, you want me to stop this? Forget about it!" He said in a disgust and annoyed tone.

"For your sake only, I hurt my love, insulted my friendship. Becoz of u only, I betrayed Swara, lied Ragini and Lucky, my brother lost his smile, only coz of me. But I kept quite. I was forced to live with the memories of Swara only but I kept quiet and today you want to snatch them also? No mom, that's enough!" Sanskaar said teary.

"2 years, can you imagine? Since 2 years, we 2 are living in suffocation!... perhaps, we four. But not anymore. Now we will live our life. With each other. We know they're still waiting for us, So we are going to Delhi today mom, and this time no one can stop us. Not even you." Said Lakshya challenging. "Let's go Sanskaar."

They turned to leave.

"One thing the mom, " Sanskaar turned in anger. "Swara is not a thing, she is my life, and do not ever forget that.

They leave.

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Ragini opens the window. The cool breeze touches her face and the blow of air makes her hair flow.

"Today's a new feeling in the air, do not know why but seems like after so long, something very right is going to happen." She thought.

"I'm coming Ragini, to make everything right, to get you back. Then we will never be separated. Never." Lakshya thought while packing his stuffs.

"Why, it seems like everything is going to change, like life is taking a new turn. Something stands back. I am going to have something back.." Swara thought as she held her book from the study table.

"Your Sanskaar is coming back Swara, to get your love back. With the hope that you will forgive me." Sanskaar thought while driving to airport.

Delhi Airport

SanLak comes out of the airport.
"Lucky, Where will we go now? Even we do not know their address." Said Sanky arranging their suitcases.
 
"Don't worry Bhai, When Destiny has brought us here, it will show the way forward." He said hanging his bag pack on his back.

"You know what, these winds give a strange feeling, which was two years back." Sanskaar said expanding his hands to feels the wind with his eyes closed.

"Why am I having the feeling that I used to have before? Butterflies in the heart suddenly?" Swara felt uneasy.

"Why seems like the old story of the forgotten Love is going to write a new chapter? Are the winds changing their stance?" Ragini was confused.

"These winds will change their stance symptoms. Here come the real-hearted, who are about to complete an incomplete story, who are going to fill love, in these airs." Lakshya felt happy.

Ragini: Adhure sapne, zindagi adhuri, pyar ki yeh kahani rahegi hamesha adhuri,
Lakshya: Pure honge sapne phir sajegi zndagi, mohabatt ki iss dastan ko main karunga puri.
Swara: Bichad gaye sapne, zndagi ne b na saath diya, toot gaya dil jab tumne mujhe dhoka diya,
Sanskaar:judenge sapne, zndagi ne b hai palat liya, milenge ab hum, kismat ne hai mauka jo diya.

It's a short update but tried my best. Ready for all chappals n tomatoes!!!! But plz like and comment!!!

Love,
Shirisha😊


 

Edited by ShirishaTeddy - 7 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I love ur style..
The way u write.. Is poetic !!
Loved it !!
N m so happy finally laksh n sanskar is in Delhi..
Waiting for ur next update...
Try to update fast !
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wow yar 
loved raglak...
do update soon with more on raglak and swasan..
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Disclaimer

All the characters are entirely a work of fiction. Don't be over possessive for any Character or Bash them. All the characters present is a necessary need.  Any harsh comment will make the writer stop the story right at the moment.


Part 3



Sanskaar sitting in a hotel room. Thinking something:

Flash Back

Sanskaar enters in a room. Laksh was very excited.

Laksh: Sanskaar! (hugs him)


"Sanskaar, you know what? Ragini had must discussed with her parents about us... I am going to propose her officially today... For marriage! I m so so happy!" Lakshya said excited.

"Lakshya,... Don't..!" He couldn't meet his eyes.

Lakshya looked at him confused. Sanskaar finally got courage somehow.

"Don't  propose, ..don't propose... Ragini!" He said stammering.

"what?" Lakshya burst out. "But why...  You know how much I love her..."

"I know Lucky, I know everything but..." He felt helpless.

"Do you have any idea bhai what are you telling me to do? To stop breathing!" He turned his face.

"Lakshya I m also leaving Swara, then..." He was cut.

"1sec, what you are leaving swara? Oh! Got it. Its your tongue Sanskaar, but with her words." Lakshya said facing him.

"Its a son's tongue Lakshya." He said in stern voice.

"Son, is it?" Lakshya wa ready for an argument. "Then be a good son. But don't you have any duty towards Swara?"

"I don't want anymore argument. I will give you anything you ask in exchange of this, but today we are leaving for Bangalore and that's it!" Sanskaar said holding his shoulder.

"Fine, I will come with you, I will leave Ragini, but not because she is my mom, neither I m afraid of her, I am doing all this because I am your brother. We have tolerated everything together bhai, if now you want this, then I am OK with it. But remember one thing Sanskaar, I will not speak anything till the day when you yourself doesn't break your silence, just till you don't fight for yourself, I will also see, how much can you suffer..."

Present

Lakshya comes and sees Sanskaar thinking something.

"Bhai!" Lakshya called.

He gets senses back.

"What are you thinking about?" He asked.

He hugs him tightly.

"I m sorry Lucky, I made you to leave your love for 2 years, ui had no right of that. For me, you forgot smiling... I m sorry Lakshya, I m really very sorry!!!" He kept sobbing.
"Sanskaar!" He broke the hug. "Bhai relax! First thing, you are my bro and you have all right on me. And second thing, I love Ragini that doesn't mean I love you less. If my breaths are tied with Ragini, then my heartbeats are tied with you. Agar Ragini meri jaan hai toh tu meri zindagi hai Sanskaar. So don't speak this type of nonsense ever, got it? He said smiling.
"You know what?" Sanskaar gave a little smile. "I love u bro!!!"
"Love you too." Lakshya said hugging him.

Next afternoon

Swaragini were on dining table with mom. Dad comes.

"Look who has come with me." Shekhar said as he entered.

"Who?" Sharmistha asked.

"Laksh" , "Sanskaar"!!!" He called out.

Swaragini were shocked. They got up from the table and turned towards the door.

SanLak comes walking slowly.
Swaragini starts moving to them
They face each other
Swaragini moves their hand on SanLak's cheek.
SanLak keep their hand on Swaragini's.
They hugs tightly.

"Laksh, Sanskaar!"

They got their senses back and realized that they were dreaming and girls were still far. Shekhar informs he met with an accident and these guys saved him. They needed job and company could give it after a month or two. So they are going to stay at their home for some day. After sometime all sits and chatters. Ragya and Swasan were looking at each other during the convo with elders. Swara serves coffee to everyone. She gives it to Lakshya. He smiles but she avoids. When she comes to Sanskaar, it accidentally falls on his shirt. Mom scolds Swara and asks her to show him the wash room, unwanted, Swara went with him. On the other hand dad asked Ragini to show Lakshya their room. Ragini was helpless. They went.

Swasan

"There's the washroom." She turned to leave.

"Swara..."

"Sanskaar, I don't wanna talk to you, do for what you have come." She said not meeting his eyes.

"I am doing that only."

"What?" She asked confused.

"I am back for you Swara.!" He said coming close.

She showed her palm to stop there then chuckled.

"For me? Really? Why? Where is your that Bangalore girl? For whom 2 years back you left me?" She said with red eyes due to anger.

"Swara..."

"Sorry Sanskaar, if you think that I will fill her place on your life, then I m really sorry, I am not of that type!"

She turns he holds her hand.

"Sanskaar leave my hand."

"Swara atleast..."

"I said leave!" She shouted.

He leaves her hand.

"Don't you dare follow me!"

She leaves.

Ragya

They enters a room.

"Its your room."

She was leaving. Lakshya come in front.

"Let me go." Ragini said in a low voice.

"Ragini I..."

"Lakshya, let me go!"

She was going.

"Ragini at least listen to me!" He said to stop her.

She turned to him

"What should I listen Lakshya? What is now left to talk and listen? Every thing was over 2 years before, you left me for some other girl!" She had tears.

"But Ragini, I have only come to correct my mistake, I want you to forgive me..."

"Sorry Lakshya, but today I have nothing to do with you. Please forgive me." She said joining her hands.

"Ragini..."

She turns to go. He holds her hand. She stops. Looks at him and drops hand.

"Now, don't you dare touch me, did you get that Mr. Lakshya Maheswari?" She said pointing him and leaves.

SanLak and Swaragini

"I can't believe this, the girls who were once ready to die for us, hate us so much that, don't want to see our faces today!" Sanskaar said moving to and fro in the room.

"No bhai. They are angry with us, but they don't hate us. They have hid us in some corner of their heart." Lakshya said sitting on bed.

"In a small corner, where we couldn't forget them." Ragini said arranging bed.

"We have to control our feelings in front of them. Let they be agree or not, they have to go back from our lives." Swara said tensed.

"Let they agree or not, they have to come back in our lives." Sanskaar said smiling.

"That day will never come. We will never let it come!" Ragini decided.

"That day will come, we will bring it!" Lakshya was confident.


Love,
Shirisha😊

Edited by ShirishaTeddy - 7 years ago