OS on raya " Bacchon ki rhymes... Badon ki romance...."

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Posted: 2015-09-24T04:30:53Z

Here comes another small OS on our beloved raya from my side...

Here comes the story... my write up on jaipur track ... raya and peehu living happily in their small world... mr.kapoor ki mrs.kapoor and undono ki pyar ki nishaan peehu... one day evening priya and peehu busy with eachother... priya trying to teach her something by actions... but peehu didn't get what her mother saying

Peehu disappointedly : mumma mujhe kuch samajhme nehi aarahi hai kal kaise perform karungi school mein ... she is very upset.. priya steps towards her with her ever super splendid smile on her lips

Priya placing her hand on peehu head: peehu ithni upset kyu horahi hai simple haina bacche... waise bhi its just a rhyme competition and u know all ur rhymes... moreover jo rhyme tumhe diya hai wo toh simple rhyme haina accha abhi hum dono saath mein practice karengey ok peehu nods her head in excitement

Both priya and peehu practicing rhyme.. priya teaching her rhyme with actions... still peehu didn't satisfied ( satisfy kaise hogi mr.kapoor ki beti jo hai... she needs perfection)

Ram stood there enjoying these too mother daughter cute cute conversations , their practice, two most beautiful persons of his life.. all through smile didn't left his lips , priya in peacock green netted saree.. wearing her ever lasting beautiful smile ... she is looking very divine to ram

Ram thinking : ek bacchi ki maa bangayi hai lekin aaj bhi kuch toh hai mere priya mein.. she is just beautiful and divine... har tarah se complete woman... beti... behen... bahu... biwi...meri dosth...meri premika... ek maa she is a complete woman ... ahhh... ram punching on his chest ... am just madly in love with u priyaaa.. he said this in very low tone still priya heard and turn towards doorway

Priya smiles ... ram too smiled... priya noticed some difference in ram smile.. theres some naughtiness in his smile but cute...  ignoring that priya went to take his lunch bag and ofc bag from his hands

Priya : aap jaake fresh hojayiye mein aapki kapde nikalthi hu .. ram just nods his head with smile

Priya to peehu : princess .. aap thodider stop karo...aapke liye kuch khaane ke liye laathihu pehle khaali jiye uske baad firse hum try karenge.. gave a peck on her forehead

Ram in bathroom...

Priya : mr.kapoor kapde nikaldiye meine... bedpe hai aap tayyar hoke aayiye tabtak mein chai banathi hu dono milke peeyenge

ram from bathroom : OK ...

after a while ram came back from bathroom... he is changing his clothes.. suddenly his kurtha button stucked his head got stuck..

ram : Priyaaa... Priyaa... Priya... Priya ran to him when she saw that ram kurtha stuck in midway she starts laughing

ram irritatingly still his hands are up and kurtha covering his face: tum  hasrahi ho mera madad karo mera dum gutrahihai please

priya suppressing her laugh goes to help him : aap bhi na mr.kapoor kabhi kabhi bacchon jaise harkathe karthe ho... peehu bilkul aap pe gayi hai... dono baap bte kamaal ho ... she pulled his kurtha down ... now ram feeling lil bit relieved taking a long breathe .. priya folding ram office dress neatly with her beautiful smile on her face... ram mesmerized looking at priya smile...he reached her taking baby steps... stood behind priya.. priya still laughing remembering his antics... suddenly ram snakes his palm on priya waist giving sensations to her... priya closed her eyes held his palm tightly.. ram kept his chin on her shoulder

ram nuzzling : ab bolo kya bolrahi thi  mein bacchon jaise harkathe kartha hu...? Badi hasi aarahi thi mujhe aise fase huye dekhke he gave a small peck on her shoulder.. priya closed her eyes tightly priya composing herself

priya : mr.kapoor.. pls chodiye ... ye aap kya karrahe ho... peehu hai ghar mein.. aap ye.. before she continue ram turns her by his side... now both are facing each other ...

ram wiping sweatbeads on her forehead : mujhe patha peehu abhi bahar khel rahi hai... cupping her face in his palms ...u looking very divine today... gave a peck on her forehead... Priya closed her eyes with shy

ram saw her blush on her cheeks and shy smile on her lips... he smirked... slowly gave another peck on her eyes...  he bends to kiss on her cheeks ... priya tries to move... ram holds her hand... giving a smile... ram facing her back.. he moves towards her holding her wrist in his hand... gave a peck on her wrist... priya suppressing her emotions again tries to move this time he held her another wrist... now priya both hands are back ram held her both wrists in his hands...  ram clutching her both wrists slowly hugs her encircling her arms with his arms ... squeeze her a lil... gave a peck on her earlobe...

priya : Mr.kapoor pls chodiye na .. ye koi waqt hai kya inn sab ke liye... chai aur pakode thande hojayegi... still ram nuzzling on her shoulder ... priya jerks him

ram still held her one wrist in his hands ... both stood there like that ... as peehu stood there folding her arms on her chest

both raya flabbergasted ... both know whats coming to them in next few mins... ram slowly left priya wrist.. priya adjusting her saree on her shoulder looks at peehu with a smile...

peehu sternly : aap kya karrahe ho??? Ram shocked he don't know what to answer looks at priya for help

priya downcast her eyes ,... Ram scratching his temple bends down to peehu .. with a smile

ram : kuch nehi peehu...

peehu : kuch nehi toh aap mumma ko aise kyu pakde ho

ram searching for answer : wo... wo... kya.. haina... peehu

peehu cutting him in middle : kya aapko bhi kal office mein koi rhyme competition hai papa???

Ram confused : rhyme competition ??? priya bit relievd now that peehu didn't saw anything

Priya excuses herself : aap dono baathein karo... mein chai aur pakode leke aathi hu... ram smiles

By then ram peehu sat in living room chatting with eachother.. peehu sharing her full day activities with to his dad.. ram listening to her and smiling whole heartedly... priya came there with chai for two of them and pakode for peehu

Priya enjoying the sight infront of her eyes... she is sipping her favourite adrakwali chai... Thinking :ye dono baap beti same to same... peehu billkul apne papa pe gayi hai... ye mr.kapoor jab peehu saamne hothi haina bilkul bacche banjathe hai... jab mere saath hothey toh... thinking this a shy smile appeared on her lips remembering few mins before moment between them... ram noticed this ... priya looks at him .. ram winks at her she downcasted her eyes

Peehu disturbs these two love birds eye lock

Peehu : mumma ... papa... kya aap humdono ko aap train karoge...????... both came out from trance

Ram overjoyed hearing that ...

Priya : nehi bacche ... papa ko training ki jarurath nehi hai... he is master in all these things winks at ram... ram give a deadly look to her ... peehu and priya giggles gives hifi

Ram taking peehu in his lap : rockstar abhi aapko mummy papa dikhathe hai aapko rhyme kaise karthe , ram gave a wicked smile towards priya...priya sensed some thing fishy still she agreed

Now ram took priya in his arms ... like priya stood infront of him facing her back ... ram enjoying priya uneasiness.. shyness..

Ram : rockstar... aap aapki rhyme ki lyrics bolo mein enact karthi hu mumma ke help se uske baad aapko karke dikhana padega ok

Peehu said in excitement : OK showing thumbs up

Ram : good then starts ... priya too smiling

Peehu : One two three four five ...

Ram smiles : takes priya one hand... he opens her 5 fingers saying one two three four five

Peehu : once I caught a fish alive

Ram : hugs priya from back sueezing lil ... priya feeling goose bumps ... ram looks at peehu

Peehu confused : papa ye kya karrahe ho... priya glares at him angrily

Ram kneels down to peehu : rock star u said once I caught a fish alive so I caught mumma... think that she is fish for now

Priya gave unbelievable look at him ..|

Peehu : ohhh ok ok samajhme aayi papa

Ram winks at priya : priya just nods her head.. ram again hugs priya from back this time lil tight

Peehu : six seven eight nine ten... ram showed priya another hand fingers like counting

Peehu : Then I let it go again ... priya frees herself from his grip ... ram gave a shocking look

Peehu : Why did you let it go?... priya pats on ram hand ,.,, ram came back to reality

Ram clueless he don't know how to enact ... peehu sulks her face.. priya moves towards her lifts her chin

Priya : abhitak ka samajhme aayi na ab aagey ki rhyme mein enact karungi tum seekho ... ram still clueless what to do priya enacts

Peehu : Because it bit my finger so...

Priya asks ram to show his finger with a sad face... ram shows

Peehu : Which finger did it bite?

Priya enacts

Peehu : This little finger on the right.

Priya smilingly took ram lil finger ... ram enjoying ... priya bit his finger

Ram yells in pain : Awww...

Both priya and peehu laughing with each other ram glares at them angrily

Ram : rockstar tumhare rhyme mein sirf shuru ki two lines mujhe pasand aaya baaki sab mindless he left the place looking at them

Both priya and peehu hugging each other ...

Priya keeping peehu hair strands on back of her ear : so bacche ab samajme aayi aapko kaise enact karni hai kal competition mein

Peehu : jee mumma...  and giggles ram glares at them angrily

Priya indicating : agar tere papa jo dikhaye wo karogi na rhyme competition se nehi tujhe ekdum school se he nikaldenge...

Priya and peehu shows tongue showing thumbs down to ram ...

By the end of the day peehu ready for her school rhyme competition priya teached her ...

At night priya back to their bed room after peehu slept... she saw that ram already slept after that rhyme romance of ram... these two didn't get time to talk with each other ram busy on his office work... priya busy with peehu... her rhymes... and cooking dinner also went on peehu rhymes and all... both priya and peehu teased a lot ram ... ram too enjoyed...

Priya came back freshened up changed ... took her side of the bed... she moved lil bit close to ram... caressing his fore head... ruffling his hair... a smile crept on her lips...

Priya remembering whole incidents happened in between them from evening... she had a shy smile on her lips : mr. kapoor love u sooo much... aapko patha hai aaj aap bahuth cute lagarahe the jab aap kurthe mein fasgaye the she laughed a bit ... maannna padega aapko peehu ke saamne romance... waah... not bad... I think ab mere golu ab golu nehi rahe hai... kaaafi romantic... hogaye hai... nice improvement... mann karrahi hai kii... She stopped looking at him with all love ... slowly she took his lil finger which she bit... gave a small peck closing her eyes... she entwined her hand with his... made her self comfortable on her side... still she is looking at him without blinking...

Ram closing his eyes : kya karne ka iraada hai mrs. Kapoor ... priya perplexed hearing him

Priya : aap soye nehi ho???? Ram gets up and rests his head on head rest... nudging his eyes

Ram : sogaya tha yaar... teri yahan honeka ehsaas uttaya mujhe.. aur kya kya bolrahi thi tum...he dragged her in to his arms... priya safely landed on his chest

Priya : very bad mr.kapoor ... this is not fair

Ram : everything is fair in love and war ... and this is absolutely my love... hugs tightly.. priya blushing...  

Ram : mujhe peehu ki rhyme bilkul pasand nehi aaya said making weird faces

Priya still on his chest giggles... she comes out from there and slept beside him keeping her one hand under her head... facing ram ... ram too turned towards priya  both facing each other

Priya : aapko sharam nehi aathi hai peehu ke saamne ye sab karne mein.. saying this she laid down

Ram pulled her one hand and placed it as his pillow : meine kya kiya usko rhyme seekha raha tha... winks at her

Priya : u r unbelievable mr.kapoor.. ram smiles... priya turns towards him and hugs

Ram with a seduce tone : Priyaaa... Priyaaa

Priya : Hmmm...

Ram : jo kaam adhura kiya haina usko pura karein abhi

Priya knotting her eyes brows lifts her head to face him : kaunsa kaam ???

Ram ( he moving his finger on her face... priya closed her eyes by his touch) : jo shaam karthe waqt peehu ki wajahse disturb huyi hai ... wo..

Priya understood what he is saying ... she just smiles shyly...

ram got priya acceptance he hugged her tightly... both spent their night in each other arms...

 

 

 

 

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Posted: 2015-09-24T04:52:28Z
its really awesome os di
thanks for pm ...

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Posted: 2015-09-24T04:55:36Z
Wow just superb update Dee
Teaching Pihu rhyme and romancing too
Lovely update Dee
Loved it so much
Thank you for pm
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Posted: 2015-09-24T06:45:59Z
Awesome os
Very cuteee
Lovely
Thanks for pm
Any more parts??
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Posted: 2015-09-24T07:07:34Z
Wow
So cute and lovely...
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Posted: 2015-09-24T08:51:46Z
so cute. so innocent. so pure. beautifully written.
i hope k balh jaipur track me hume rayapee aise hi dekhneko milte. but ekta ruined this beautiful plot and wrapped it in just 2 weeks.

but u have written this superb os. thanks a lot. keep writing. thanks for pm.
god bless u.
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Posted: 2015-09-24T10:10:58Z
Superb romantic update...
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Posted: 2015-09-24T10:19:01Z
Awesome update
Love It
Plz do write more
Thanks for PM

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