OS: Raat Akeli Hai...

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Posted: 2015-09-10T13:14:37Z

Hi guys & gals...

Started watching bade accche lagte hai episodes again... and thought to pen down a short scene...

Hope you guys like it... as always tomatoes and cakes welcome...

OS:Raat akeli hai...

Ram and Priya are on their way back to kapoor mansion from Vikram-Neha's place...

Ram thinking... ye neha bhi naa... kya zarurat thi priya ke juice me vodka milane ki... haalat dekho iski... aise behave kar rahi hai maano jaise... koi 5 saal ki bachi hai... uff... ab isko kaise handle kare...

Priya: Mr. karpooor... aap... itne zor zor se kyun soch rahe hai...

Ram: arre yaar... phir se... priya .. mera naam kapoor hai... karpoor nahi...

Priya: he he ... karpoor zyada suit karta hai aapko... aapko.. kuch bolo... toh aag babula ho jaate ho aap... karpoor... jo phat se aag pakad le...

Ram: achha.. v. funny...

Priya; karpoor ... Ram karpoor... kitna acha lagta hai... mr. karpoor... aapko naa.. karpoor business karna chahiye...

Ram; arre meri maa... ab chup raho...

Priya: starts crying...

Ram: applies brake to vehicle and asks.. ab kya hua.. tum ro kyun rahi ho?

Priya: aapne mujhe aapki maa kaha... lekin.. main aapki maa nahi... biwi hoon.. aur aapki maa... niharika hai... mr. karpoor...

Ram hits his head with his palm... ab main kya karu iska...and starts driving...

Ram switches on his music player...

Song starts ...

Raat akeli hai.. bujh gaye diye.. aake mere paas...kaano me mere...

Priya starts singing along with it...

Priya; pata hai mr... karpoor... ye mera fav. Song hai...

Ram: accha... and thinks... romantic song.. madam ka favorite song... romance ka r bhi nahi dikhta...

Priya: mr... karpoor... pata hai... aapka naam golu naa... barabar rakha hai daadi ne... aap gol gol... karpoor bhi gol gol... he he...

Ram fuming with anger... neha teri wajah se ... mere itne saare naam karan main seh  raha hoon...

Priya: Mr. karpoor... gaadi rokiye... jaldi jaldi jaldi...

Ram stops vehicle... ab kya hua?

Priya; mujhe ulti karni hai...

Ram: eeech... ruko ruko... main darwaza kholta hoon...

He opens the door for priya... priya comes out and vomits...

Ram looking at her.. couldnot control his feeling... and starts vomiting... along with priya... (psychological effect)

Priya: wipes her face and sings.. raat akeli hai...

Ram: wipes his face and takes priya back to car...

Priya; nahi... mujhe andar nahi baithna hai mr, karpoor...

Ram: arre meri maa.. chalo ab... bahut ho gaya...

Priya:  gets freed from ram's grip and tries to run.. but trips due to heels... meanwhile ram catches hold of her..

Ram: ab bas ho gaya chalo ab...

Priya nahi.. and sits on the pavement... removing her sandals... picks it in her hands.. and says... main.. paidal chalungi mr. karpoor...

Ram: what the hell? No ways.. ab tum chup chaap chalo.. varna main...

Priya: varna kya mr. kar...poor...

Ram: pehle toh tum mera naam thik se lo...

Priya: he he..

Ram; holds her hand and pulls her with him to car and makes her sit in car and says.. agar tumne ek shabd bhi kaha toh main tumhara naam tumhare papa ko bata dunga...

Priya: kya mr. karpoor.. chote bachon ki tarah chugli karoge...papa.. who mujhe kuch nahi kahenge... bata do...

Ram: closes car door.. and starts vehicle...

Finally reaching kapoor mansion...

Ram; ab chalo..

Priya gets down from car.. with her sandals in her hand... and sings.. raat akeli hai...

Ram takes her to their purple kingdom..

Ram: chalo piya ab please so jao...

Priya: aap na gol ke golu hai... koi aise sota hai kya mr. gopur...

Ram: Gopur?

Priya: golu.. karpoor.. ka gopur... mujhe change karna hai...

Ram: toh jao.. aur change karo.. aur so jao.. please... mera sar mat khao...

Priya goes to change... opens cupboard... and pulls out her night suits.. and says.. ye sab... boring hai.. golu ke tarah... and looks at her suitcase and opens it... and finds a packet .. and recollects.. that shipra had given it.. she opens it... and sees.. red... nighty ... and sings... raat akeli hai... maa bhi naa.. nautanki hai... and wears the nighty... and comes out to see ram...

Ram was busy watching vidya balan's .. ohh lala song...

when priya comes out singing... raat akeli hai...

Ram: irritatingly... without looking at priya.. says.. oh pandit priya ... ab bas karo... yaar... vidya balan ka gaana aa rha hai.. aur ye.. besura gaa rahi hai...

Priya: makes a angry face and switches off light and TV switch..

Ram: turns to priya.. fumingy...

When Priya starts singing.. raat akeli hai... bujh gaye diye..

Ram dumbstruck... seeing priya in such a sexy.. nighty.. stands still with his mouth wide open...

Priya ... goes  near ram.. and  sings.. raat akeli hai... bujh gaye diye... pulls him close to her

Ram was getting nervous tensed... thinking.. arre yaar... ye isko... main kaise sambhalu... aaj mere izzat kaa sawal hai.. and stands still.. when priya continues singing... aake mere paas... moves close to ram's ears... and sings kaano me mere...

Ram controls his emotions... When priya sings kaano me mere.. and screams in ram's ear...

Ram... listening priya scream.. afraid screams with her... aaahhh aaahhh... feeling his paced heartbeat... He looks at priya.. who starts laughing... who gets a hiccup.. and finally doses off .. on ram's shoulder...

Still not believing.. what had happened... Ram clears his ears.. and picks up priya... in his arm.. and puts her on his bed...

Ram looks around.. and thinks.. main toh couch pe fit nahi hounga... nahar so nahi sakta... I have no option.. makes a pillow wall on bed and sleeps on bed..

Next day morning... priya wakes up early... and sees ram sleeping next to her... and checks out that she is wearing red nighty... tries to recollect what happened yesterday.. when she recollects singing raat akeli hai.. and pulling ram close to her...  she closes her eyes... and says... kal.. raat ko kya hua hoga...

Ram wakes up.. and finds priya questioning herself.. he smiles and thinks.. lo madam ko kuch bhi yaad nahi hai... ab aayega maza... mujhe kal bahut tang kiya... na... ab dekho priya madam.. ab meri baari hai...

Ram wakes up.. and holds priya's hand .. and says.. good morning darling...

Priya takes her hand away from him and says.. mr.. kapoor...  ye aap kya kar rahe hai...

Ram: arre... ab itna kyun Sharma rahi ho.. yaar.. kal raat ko toh... tigress thi... ab kyaa sharmana...

Priya: kal raat ko kya hua mr. kapoor?

Ram: kal raatt was amazing night darling... tum.. aur main... and takes his hand.. to move her hair strand.. when priya stops him and says.. excuse me.. matlab?

Ram; gets out of bed and sings raat akeli thi...

Priya: shit... ye maine kya kiya...

Ram: tumne bahut kuch kiya priya... must say,... you are a wild cat... meowww.

Priya: mr. kapoor... aap... aapne... kyun meri baat maani?

Ram: arre... tum itna insist kar rahi thi.. ke main.. mana nahi kar paaya... and you were looking so.. hot.. you know... mrs... karpoor... aag babula lag rahi thi...

Priya: oh shit.. and starts crying.. mr. kapoor.. aapne kyun aisa kiya... ab main.. kya karungi.. hamari toh compromise shaadi thi naa.  Phir.. ye...

When ram says.. he he.. don't cry... dekho kal aisa kuch nahi hua.. meri maa... ro mat...

Priya: main aapki maa nahi hoon.. mr. kapooor...

Ram: sorry sorry  lekin please mat ro... dekho... main itna mota hoon... ke couch pe nahi so paaya.. aur bahaar jaake soo nahi sakta tha isliye yaha so gaya...

Hamare beechme kuch nahi hua...

Priya: promise?

Ram: haa baba .. pakka promise...

Priya: gives a relieved expression..

When ram smiles and says.. promise toothpaste... wala promise...

Priya gets annoyed and starts crying... when ram says.. sorry baba.. pakka promise... hamare beech kuch nahi hua...

Ram gets nimbu paani for her and says.. ye peelo.. utaar jayegi...

Priya: maine sharab kab pi?

Ram: smiles and says.. neha ne pilyai tumhe... ab ye peelo.. you will feel comfortable... main jaake fresh hota hoon...

On the way Ram sings raat akeli thi...

When priya hits ram with pillow ... and ram gushes to bathroom... enjoying... teasing priya...

When background music is played... BALH...showing ram happy and priya smiling with relieved expression...

-----The end-----

Hope you all enjoyed it...

 

 Lucky...

 

 

 

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Posted: 2015-09-10T13:59:14Z
superb os enjoying and smiling while read 
amazing 
Welcome back Wink
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Posted: 2015-09-10T14:07:23Z
Superb after long time n plsss continue ur ff n finish them thanks for wonderful os
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Posted: 2015-09-10T20:01:58Z
After a long long time an os from u
But beautifully written
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Posted: 2015-09-10T20:01:59Z
Plsss pm me next time
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Posted: 2015-09-10T20:45:43Z
Wonderful OS...
Fun filled...
Please do write moreTongue
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Posted: 2015-09-11T00:02:53Z
woww...superb. I was constantly smiling while reading. so sweet story.

pl pm me from next time. do write more.
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Madhuri Dixit and Sakshi Tanwar....FOREVER FAVOURITES
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Posted: 2015-09-11T04:33:26Z
Fantastic OS!!!
Love it!!
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