wow nice prologue
continue soon
all r ok
but manik's age 30
its seems not ok.becoz all r near 20 only but his 30
plzzz change his age25 r near that
practically becoz of age diff thr will be lot of prob
its somewat ok if 6 r 7 years diff,but 11yrs diff
just its a req only
its ur story u hav all d rights
sry .dont mistake me
thank u
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