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Posted: 8 years ago
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Poetry Contest Rating

      Themes:  
 
     Theme 1.Purvi-A sword gleaming with courage
       In this you have to show her struggle and bravery through the perils
     Theme 2.Ansha Sayed-I saw you in my dream
  well we all love her so much...we want to meet her and see her even in   dreams..so you have to describe about your dream in which you met    and talked to her

Voting Rules

We have received 4 awesome entries on Theme 1⭐️ 
You have to rate them out of 10
Rate in the following format-
Entry x: marks out of 10
And so on
Plz try to give a detailed feedback in appreciation of the hard work by our participants😊


Participants MUST Rate.

Last date of voting is 14 July 2015 11:59 pm IST.



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Posted: 8 years ago
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Theme 1-Entry# 1

As charming as rose petals though it may be
Ablaze they are set, confronting injustice
Stands she as a pillar, whose might unequaled
Calling her the Shield Maiden- that shows justice!

Stamp hard on a street dweller, she stamps you harder
Meddle with the affairs of a girl, but beware
Coz you're a goner when she does it with you,
For she's the Athena here- Beware, Oh miscreant! Beware!

Undaunted by the taunts that are hurled,
By the questioning and allegations that she stands,
Stronger in the heart she gets every other time, 
That most commoners stand, bow and fold their hands.

Purvi- as can be called, a sword gleaming with courage
Is out there to expel the darkness of the society!
All the prowess, despite that she possesses
A smile is all that speaks volumes of her humble dignity!
Edited by _Ecstasy_ - 8 years ago
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Theme 1-Entry# 2

Purvi-A sword gleaming with courage

 

Like a mountain unshaken by the fiercest of winds, she stands by her team through thick and thin

Choosing not to take the slightest of chances, at the fort she prepared to sacrifice herself for them

Despite personal anguish on discovering her past, always maintained her loyalty to them for the win

Always there to back each other up, and maintain the relentless pursuit for justice at the helm

 

In rushing to Freddy sir's aid even in the thick of battle, not leaving her injured senior's side in the train

She further showed her unmoving dedication and determination to protect all she holds close

Descending a cliff alone to rescue Anjali, even in the toughest spot steeling herself against refrain

In a daring showdown against her rival, she displayed martial prowess and dealt powerful blows

 

As the room sprawled with unseen danger and Abhijeet sir needed help, she made her steely choice

Where no female cop had ventured before, she entered alone and emerged shining in a gallant light

Seeing an innocent girl wronged and misled, led a mission alone and took down those crooked boys

Made all girls hold their heads high with respect and encouraged them to keep up the rightful fight

 

Venturing alone through the dark forests in search of her quarry, unafraid of the darkness and silence

Be it the turbulent boat chase, the train fight or speeding car, she took up them all with equal courage

A valour that shines through her eyes and action, that enables one to acknowledge it, and say hence

She is a priceless gem, a rare diamond we fondly call: Inspector Purvi, a sword gleaming with courage

Edited by _Ecstasy_ - 8 years ago
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Theme 1-Entry#3


Theme 1 : Purvi - a sword gleaming with courage.
     Title :    STOUTHEARTEDNESS

On the days of gloom and war 
You stand on your post and fight the wrong.

You go against the winds and waves
with your courage,brain and brawn.

You take a chance that others will not
You follow your vision no matter what .

With problems and troubles blocking your way
you go on towards your goals without a stop.

you climb onto lofty mountains and dive into deep seas
You know all these fears but will never let it win.

With darkness and sin all around
You stand tall with your head held high
A sword gleaming with courage.

Edited by _Ecstasy_ - 8 years ago
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Theme 1-Entry#4

 Theme 1.Purvi-A sword gleaming with courage



A sword wields no strength unless the hand that holds it has courage

Don't consult oxford dictionary for faculty when she defines amperage

Mightier than other edges, chances on silt and dredges

Looking into the face of fear, her omnipotence grins

 

Many have tried fiat through their authority and crowns

And it's you, Your Highness; noblest of crowns

Years wanted to break you blenchingly with its rains

Your tact, a swift meteor rushed to it and lo the glare

 

Of what is strong in women! Not so the stern

And sweet repose of soul which she had earn

Through approbation and diffidence, that man cannot learn

Emblem to many of power, it has pulled immortal rose

 

Though it be her sword fight from Jaado Punar Janam ka

Or simply the brawl from Sabooto ka Rahsya

Mild competence wrought with music flow

Whiter your footsteps go 

Edited by _Ecstasy_ - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Theme 1 :
 
Entry 1 : 9/10
Entry 2: 8.5/10
Entry 3: 8/10
Entry 4: 8/10
 
 
Where are Theme 2 entries? 😕
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I didn't get any entry on theme 2..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Entry 1 : 8.5
Entry 2: 8.5
Entry 3: 8
Entry 4: 8

All the poems r very nice👏 
& i guess all the words have come from the heart of the writers⭐️
Edited by aditya_anjaana - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I'm not one to really review poems because I love them always given I can never write them. 😆 So I'm going to go ahead and rate them and hopefully my ratings will explain what I can't say in words. 😃

Entry 1 - 8/10
Entry 2 - 9/10
Entry 3 - 8/10
Entry 4 - 8/10
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Entry 1 : 9/10
Entry 2 : 8.5/10
Entry 3 : 8.5/10
Entry 4 : 8/10

All the poems are very nice.⭐️👏👏
Edited by Hiral1 - 8 years ago