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Posted: 7 years ago
Thanks a lot Misbah and SD di.πŸ€—
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Wonderful story Diya.
Ur narration is very classicalπŸ‘
The way u described Abhijeet was giving me the feeling of AdityaπŸ˜†
A private person he's! See like Daya and others were curious to know Abhijeet's personal life...we all are curious to know how Aditya deals with his family..how's his wife, kidsπŸ˜†
Keep writing such classic stories πŸ€—
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Again...Rony 😈 
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Originally posted by: AS-Rifi

Wonderful story Diya.

Ur narration is very classicalπŸ‘
The way u described Abhijeet was giving me the feeling of AdityaπŸ˜†
A private person he's! See like Daya and others were curious to know Abhijeet's personal life...we all are curious to know how Aditya deals with his family..how's his wife, kidsπŸ˜†
Keep writing such classic stories πŸ€—
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Again...Rony πŸ˜ˆ 


@bold, Maine wahi sochke likha tha. πŸ˜†

@blue, I'm also waiting for the same.πŸ˜›

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Posted: 7 years ago

Now have a Task to Read this Chotu Gem of IF/FF...⭐️⭐️
Hope to Read and Reviewed it in this Weekend...πŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘
Gives Me Wishes...πŸ˜‰πŸ˜³
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Originally posted by: gadhadada


Now have a Task to Read this Chotu Gem of IF/FF...⭐️⭐️
Hope to Read and Reviewed it in this Weekend...πŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘
Gives Me Wishes...πŸ˜‰πŸ˜³


WO bhi do-do...πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†

Good luck...to me too.πŸ˜›
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Originally posted by: 23Diya


WO bhi do-do...πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†

Good luck...to me too.πŸ˜›




haan haan ...
InshaALLAH Parh lun ga...πŸ‘πŸΌ
I m so Deligent Pakshi na...πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰
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Originally posted by: gadhadada




haan haan ...
InshaALLAH Parh lun ga...πŸ‘πŸΌ
I m so Deligent Pakshi na...πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰


bilkul...the most diligent pakshi on earth.πŸ˜ƒ
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bilkul...the most diligent pakshi on earth.πŸ˜ƒ


ahan...πŸ˜³πŸ˜ƒ
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Walking Through The HailStones


Chota Pallot...πŸ€—

Honestly, I have No Words in My Mind and Heart to Appreciate/Applause or Praise Your This Work...⭐️

You really with Your Simple Narration makes it Legend...⭐️

The Masterpiece contained really a Movie licks ass I saw All 4 Characters against My Eyes...⭐️

Either I feels their Soft Cloths, Look and Tones too through Your Fantastic Writing Skills...⭐️

Seriously Still I read so Many Stuff on that but its the Bestest One I Read till Now...⭐️

I feel the Intentional and Unintentional Every Emotions of a Son to Control over His Emotions although Few Moments Expelled it Badly...⭐️

The Mother-Son Relation is the thing which is the Beautiful Core of This Story...⭐️

The way You used ACP Sir Character is really makes His Character MORE than Larger than Life...⭐️
 
Every Simple Sentence tied the Reader in its Beautiful Whorl and makes a Knot inside Readers Heart and Soul...⭐️

The Small Sweet queries/Offers/Request/Suggestion/Calls/Care and lastly Love Presented in Each Character Routine Portrayed by You Brilliantly...⭐️

I m Surprised that why You wrote its Not Good or having OTT flair in Your Preface section...😲

This Story easily Stand You in those Writers Batch consists of Vis Dii, Demonstar, Rashida, Sherya, Shagnika, Neha and Others MileStones of IF...⭐️

I m Obliged to Read this Story which makes Me Mesmerized with Your Out Of Box masterpiece Work...⭐️

a Big Thank You so much Baccha for giving Us a Writers becoming whose Fan is a Big Opportunity...  β­οΈπŸ€—⭐️
 
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GUILT...


Chota Pallot...😳😳


I think the Total Investigative Stuff U Classically Portrayed...⭐️⭐️⭐️

that Raka and Mangesh, Abhijeet Sir Doubt and then Meeting was Presented Lovely...⭐️⭐️⭐️

Wonderful Job by Teammates too either Supporting Daya Sir or Back Biting against Him...⭐️⭐️⭐️

the Senior-Junior Relations, Presented Smoothly and Sweetly...⭐️⭐️⭐️

Loved the Restriction of Junior in Few Lines...⭐️⭐️⭐️

Somehow I dunt find Daya Sir POV anywhere...

Few Sequence looking much Inspired from Your Previous Story...πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰

the Dominance of Abhijeet Sir as Senior U really Showed Extremely Well Baccha...⭐️⭐️⭐️

The Finish was Cute and Naughty...πŸ˜†πŸ‘πŸ‘

Thank You so much for Your Classy Effort...β­οΈπŸ‘β­οΈ