SaHil Tragic Drabble: Leaving You Behind!

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Leaving You Behind

An Emotional And Tragic Drabble


I really don't know what was going through my mind when I was writing this heartbreaking piece. I came across it just yesterday, and My God, I'm such a senti.. Bear with me...


The song I've used is called; "Morey Naina Tum Bin Pyase" by Kailash Kher from a Pakistani drama; "Tair-e-Lahooti."


Warning: Read on your own risk! You will need tissues!


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Ishq Junoon Deewangi Apni
Aur Kaha Le Jaati
Ishq Ka Peyala Pee Loon, Phir Bhi Pyas Nahi Bhuj Pati
Ishq ka Mazhab Koi Nahi Hai
Ishq Hai Sab Ka Dati
Saath Tere Jee Uthti Saiyaan, Saath tere Mar Jaati


Aahil stood in his empty Haveli, glancing at the woman who he led inside his home for months. He stood frozen on the spot by what she had done.


With a shocked expression on his face, he reached a hand down on his side and felt the floating red liquid fill his hand.


He raised his gaze and stared into cold ones and felt a pain go through his whole body. This cannot be! Not now!'


Aahil stumbled down on his knees and inhaled a short breath before falling down on the hard ground. Dark red liquid began to spread underneath him. Cascading a clear contrast with the cream colored floor.


He blinked as flashes of Sanam came into view. His long lost wife who he loved with all his might. How he longed to see her! How he longed to be with her! But that was no longer possible. He had lost her!


Life had given up on him!


Mar Jayonga Teri Bala Se
Morey Naina Tum Bin Pyase Ke Pyase


A small trickle of water escaped his eye as he regretted not being able to find his Begum Jaan.


The Nawab inhaled his one last breath as his eyes refused to blink...


Somewhere else Sanam noticed how the light switched off in her room.


She inhaled a short breath and tightened the shawl around her body. She rushed to the window and hurt her hand by smashing a glass down on to the ground. She stepped back by the crashing sound and felt a few drops of blood run through her injured hand.


Why did I feel like...'
Sanam shook her head and didn't know why she felt a sudden tug at her heart. No.. It cannot be... A-Aahil?'


Sab Khushiya Hai Jhuthi Saiyaan

Ander Dard Ka Lawa
Mere Liye Toh Ban Gaya Mera Jeevan Eik Pachtawa
Kasmein Torein Kaisi Adaa Se
Morey Naina Tum Bin Pyase Ke Pyase


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The End!

I cried buckets while writing this! I really did!

Don't worry, I'm already working on a positive piece on SaHil. 😳

Edited by mahwash22 - 10 years ago

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LoveSonu2408 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice one but emotnal...😭
waiting 4 ur another sahil stry,pls updt soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Goodness Mahu!!

sad animated GIF

What happened? Why so dark?

Oh so sad... Aahil fell so tragically...😭.. And she didn't reach him in time...😭😭



Here... have a gif... to make you smile...!!

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Aww this was beautiful but very tragic and sad 😭😭 As usual Mahwash your a brilliant writer! Looking forward to the happy SaHil story 🤗I dont visit the forum much anymore but dropped in to comment on some stories and saw this ❤️ Great job!! ⭐️
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: SONU2408

nice one but emotnal...😭

waiting 4 ur another sahil stry,pls updt soon


Thank you. I'm still not over the shock of how I could ever write this sentimental piece.
I hope you'll like the other story I'll post soon. I promise, it's a lot lighter than this. 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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😭😭😭

...WHATTT?!!! Whattt?!! Why?!! How???! I mean..GOODNESS!! What was THIS?!! OH MY GOD!. I CAN'T...😭😭

Why you wrote this?!! Why I mean..I can't tell I am crying because it was so gorgeous..or was it because I am crying because it as gorgeous...ehh I mean..are you getting?!! 😭😭

I can't tell..how I felt actually! I started crying and didn't realise when...this was..GOODNESS!!

I am sorry! i can't. I am not in a position to write a review...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: sageflower7


Goodness Mahu!!

sad animated GIF

What happened? Why so dark?

Oh so sad... Aahil fell so tragically...😭.. And she didn't reach him in time...😭😭



Here... have a gif... to make you smile...!!


*Run to embrace you* Annie.. Come, let me give you a hug! 😭🤗

I seriously, cannot believe that I wrote this! I think it was around the time when KV was about to leave the show. I was so sad and had a lot of angst running around in my mind. .. Yeah, I can be angsty and dark when necessary...

But those gif... They totally made me weep like a child. Gah.. Totally, loved the last gif! You sure cheered me up again. That baby is adorbs ❤️
Edited by mahwash22 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Raingoddess

Aww this was beautiful but very tragic and sad 😭😭 As usual Mahwash your a brilliant writer! Looking forward to the happy SaHil story 🤗I dont visit the forum much anymore but dropped in to comment on some stories and saw this ❤️ Great job!! ⭐️


Esha, you wonderful girl! Thank you for liking my sentimental soul 🤗😆

I know, it's so sad, tragic and full on angst.. :( I promise the next one is nothing like this... It's full on Junooni Ishq aka SaHil ❤️ I know for certain you're going to fall in love with it.


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Originally posted by: Junoon-e-SaHil

😭😭😭

...WHATTT?!!! Whattt?!! Why?!! How???! I mean..GOODNESS!! What was THIS?!! OH MY GOD!. I CAN'T...😭😭

Why you wrote this?!! Why I mean..I can't tell I am crying because it was so gorgeous..or was it because I am crying because it as gorgeous...ehh I mean..are you getting?!! 😭😭

I can't tell..how I felt actually! I started crying and didn't realise when...this was..GOODNESS!!

I am sorry! i can't. I am not in a position to write a review...



I KNOWWW!!!!!!


What on earth was I even thinking! What made me write this sad, tragic piece!? You know, I was debating with myself whether to put it up or not.. 😭 Ugh.. Trust me, I was in a mess when I wrote it.

It's the first time I have ever written something this sorrowful and your words are enough, Prags.. ❤️ Thank you for thinking this drabble is beautiful even though I actually ripped a few hearts out.. 😳
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Okay. That's just so sad. He leaves this world just as her memory returns. That's just too cruel. 😕
Edited by darkice7_12 - 10 years ago

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