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Wow shenz 👏
Short yet one of the best peices I've ever read
Surely one of your finest...the flow of emotions was so elegant...the pain held in those words could be felt!
I loved it shenz...value of lost moments, well portrayed!!!Edited by Rajeshwari_KR - 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Rajeshwari_KR

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You have to continue this!

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This was such such such a Lovely Read!

You described past and present both so vividly it was like a movie running in my head and so smoothly.

His fear, guilt, panic everything was written so beautifully. At times you just dont understand what to write coz feelings just wont form in words and that is what is happening with me right now.

Her dull face, his ignorance in the past and then the Masterstroke end! He now knows what must be his priority. . .He can lose a deal but he cannot afford to lose her :)


I dont know why but I really wanna read a continuation to this :)

Chita :)



Edited by ..MiStLeToE.. - 8 years ago

Originally posted by: -shenz-

Raj *Scream* *Scowls* *Yell*

What the hell? Where have you been?

I came all the way to res here 😆

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Fabulous shenz!

This was really nice and touchy enjoyed reading it thanks for pm