New SS - Forever - Note and teaser- pg 8 26 may

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Hello,
 
Hi there, I am new to this forum, but certainly not new to the show. what got me here?? IshRa. well, I am a closet writer who peeks out whenver characters push me tell a story about them.
 
Well, to cut a long story short (pun fully intended 😉) IshRa and the wonderful writers of this forum  ( have started reading few stories i foung here, mainly for inspiration) have mauled me back into writing, and I am so excited to present to you my first IshRa story - Forever.
 
So this inteded as a short story, and might turn out to be longer, I am not sure.
 
Without babbling further, I'll quickly post a quick intro followed by a little prologue. Do tell me what you peeps think. and be brutally honest! appreciations welcome. critiques welcome even more :) :)
 
thanks in advance.
 
Mridhu
 
 
Forever
 
Ishita Iyer was a dreamer. She was also the most boisterous advocate of love you could find. her beloved books and her parents' wonderful marriage made her believe and always want her own happily ever after.
 
left at the altar by her boyfriend of 4 years, she stops dreaming, and she stops believing. In love. in forever.
 
Until one day she met Raman Bhalla, and everything changed.
 
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Not the best intro, but hey, there it goes!
 
Thanks again. :) :) :)
 
 
 
 
 
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Posted: 8 years ago
INDEX
 
Prologue - Page 1
Part 1 - Page 2
Part 2 - Page 5
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Prologue

"They" say love is blind.

Right.

"They" say love is forever.

Wrong.

Love.

Ishita thought gingerly as a sole tear fell down on the rumpled piece of paper, marring the already runny ink, making the contents almost illegible.

But she didn't need the ink anymore. Those words were etched in her heart and left an empty space in their wake.

I can't do this. I'm sorry. Love, subbu

Love.

Ishita's lips curled up in a humorless smile. The man had ditched her at the altar and signed his rejection with love.

This was the man she'd thought was her best friend. This was the man she'd spent hours talking to. This was the man she's shared her wildest dreams, her deepest fears. This was the man whom she thought knew her more than she knew herself. This was the man she'd wanted to marry.

This was the man she'd loved with all her being. This was the man she'd thought would love her forever.

Forever.

The silence around her weighed in on her. She needed to get out. Out of the room. Out of the memories. Out of her sorry state.  

"Kanna dinner is ready" her mother's voice floated in.

Great timing, Ishita thought.

"Coming amma" Pushing herself on her feet, she walked out, tossing the crumpled note in the bin on her way out.

She was done with love. Forever.

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Interesting Start please Update soon and please PM me!
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Posted: 8 years ago
Good start.
Plz continue soon.
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Interesting start 
Continue soon 
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Interesting update 
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great start and sounds interesting
cont. soon
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Originally posted by: Divancraze

Interesting Start please Update soon and please PM me!


Thank you. update coming up tomorrow :)
I'm sorry I do not keep a pm list . PlS do check in here for updates 
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Originally posted by: anoos123

Good start.

Plz continue soon.


Thanks. 

Originally posted by: pari...

Interesting start 

Continue soon 


Thanks paRI

Originally posted by: Pravalli

Interesting update 

Continue soon 


Thank you. Will update soon

Originally posted by: rk654

great start and sounds interesting

cont. soon


Thanks.