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Let's see what's happening with our beloved characters
Chapter
46
Pratap was in silent mode as the couple made their way
back home. JB had offered to stay with Sagar for the night and had all but
kicked them out of the hospital. There was something about her statement that
did not sit well with Ajabde
JB: go home beta-hospitals are not a good place to be
all the time
There was a certain sadness and pain in her words which
got her thinking that maybe seeing Sagar lying on the hospital bed made JB
think about the time when US would raise his hand on a young Pratap making her
heart ache for her love. They entered their home as she proceeded for the
bedroom she realised he was just standing in the living room
Ajabde: You are not coming?
Pratap went to her kissed her forehead: I have some
files to go through so I'll be in my study
Ajabde: I can wait
Pratap: No. Go to bed and rest. I will join you later
She went to bed alone and woke up alone as she took in
the other half of the bed well it was totally clean and unmade like no one ever
slept on it. She went to the study to look for her husband but as she saw
outside his car was gone - he had left early without telling her. Old times
made their appearance again as it continued for a week - Pratap would come home
really late and leave early even working on Sundays while Ajabde engrossed
herself with Sagar's recovery - the little boy adored her but he was clearly in
love with JB. He was attached to her like a monkey and refused to have food and
medicines in her absence. Everyone noticed the distance between the couple
including flower pot who was the happiest girl in the world till Pratap demoted
her back to her original position and warned her about her wrong doings. Now
that was an incredible day in the Songara office
Flashback
Two days had passed since the hospital incident after
which Pratap had locked himself up in his cabin going through every minute
detail of his file and working out chinks in his armour to be fully prepared
when he met US at the conference- the very name made his blood boil and seeing
those angry red finger-prints on his wife's hand had triggered his memory of
his mother sporting those marks and covering them up with make-up and full
sleeves. His wife was doing the same wearing full sleeves to cover the marks -
marks that shouted his failure at protecting her as another man had managed to
hurt her. He had gone to meet the said doctor and he had warned him of
consequences making him flee. Doctor TotaMal had not only left the hospital but
the state as well - he moved down south and started working at a newly opened
hospital in Kerala. Pratap was overlooking his files when Phool entered without
aski9ng for permission and started her flirting which irritated him no less and
he had no patience for her useless flirtations so he looked at her with
narrowed eyes making her gulp down a lump and stop her ramblings
Pratap: Miss Rathore your services are no longer
required so you can clean your desk and go back to the reception handling your
old job - of answering calls and guiding people in the right direction. You
were just a temporary PA and I have filled that position so I don't want to see
you anymore. Also if I were you I would focus on my job more and not the useless
and recycled flirtations you do - they are irritating and make my head ache.
The HR has already received complaints against you and your behaviour I assure
you one more complaint and I will see to it that you don't work here anymore
and that no one in this state employs you ever- well maybe you can ask your
friend Gauhar Jaan to give you a position in US enterprises after all you are
selling our secrets to him
Phool: No I never would do that Pratap...I...
Pratap: It's Mr Songara for you and the moment I get
all the evidence I require then its game over for you so pray that the day I
receive the evidence it does not have your name on it. Now leave
Since that fateful day Phool had been all quiet
focusing on her job and figuring out a way to get out of the mess that had been
created because of GJ and US. She sent GJ a message to meet her under the
pretence of giving info wherein reality she wanted to get herself out of the
mess. She even booked herself tickets to Singapore where she had relatives and
informed them about her holiday trip.
Phool: Come hell or high I won't be getting caught in
this mess
Chapter
47
Ajabde was pissed off real bad at her husband who had
failed to show up for their doctor's appointment. She understood that he needed
time and that something had triggered his mood but to miss out on an
appointment for their baby was unacceptable to her so she decided to do the one
thing he always dreaded. She called Subho and the two of them went off for a
day filled with fun and relaxation.
Sanga strode in the office looking like a predator
eyeing his prey which scared all the employees except for a group of guys who
were placing bets
Som: I bet Bade Daata gives Baujiraj a good scolding
for his behaviour
Maan: No I say he's going to go all Rambo on him
Akbar: Cool so what or How much is the bet? Then even I
can enter the pool people
Maan: Winner is free of the scouting duty (keeping an
eye on the culprits including flowerpot) for a week and 1000Rs
Akbar: Nice...I'm all in and I'm with Som on this one
Bade Daata is going to go all Rambo and Terminator on him after all Bade Daata
adores Ajabde and Subho Bhabijaan more than anything
Veeni: No I think he will be all Commander in Chief
with him
Chakri: You mean like he did at the farmhouse when we
refused to undergo that martial training?
Som: that was scary.
Hakim: No Bade Daata will go all "I raised you better
than this and threaten to hold him by the ears"
Som: So all in - everyone nods their head as they wait
for the scene to unfold. Som zooms in the camera in Pratap's cabin and
increases the voice for everyone to hear
PRATAP's CABIN
Pratap sat doing paperwork for the upcoming meeting
with his Bade Daata but as he was signing the documents his eyes fell on the
picture frame kept he picked it up seeing his wife's picture it was taken at one
of their dates which had gone awry because of the rainy weather but that hadn't
stopped Ajabde from getting soaked in the rain and even got him drenched - she
was standing there her arms spread face upwards eyes closed relishing the
droplets of water falling her making her feel alive every second of that moment
while he was staring at the frame when the door opened making him angry
Pratap: I said I didn't want any interruptions so what
do you want? Saying that he looked up to a grim looking Bade Daata
BD: You were saying?
Pratap swallowed
nervously: I'm sorry Bade Daata I thought it was the employees
BD: even if it was an employee you aren't supposed to
speak to them like that - each and every employee here is working for the
betterment of this company and business- I thought I had taught you better than
this Pratap
Pratap hung his head down but then he looked up: what
brings you here Bade Daata?
BD was staring at the camera: Get your behinds in this office
in the next 2minutes
And all the guys came crashing into the room and stood
with Pratap
BD: I want all the developments in every single thing
and time period is the last week
Veeni: Just the last week was something special about
it Bade Daata?
BD just stared and everyone started speaking after he
had heard everyone he told everyone to leave except for Pratap
Pratap knew he was about to get it real bad when he
noticed the sad look on his Bade Daata's face
BD: Pratap I know seeing those marks on Ajabde's hands
and that little boy triggered some really bad memories but that does not give
you the excuse to completely isolate yourself. Poor Ajabde has been going crazy
with worry about you
Pratap: Did she say anything?
BD: Has she ever said anything when it's concerned with
you? I mean I love my daughter-in-law especially when she comes to spend time
at home but to see her there daily wearing full sleeved clothes in this
unbearable heat and then to see her hesitate to leave because she feels she
will be all by herself at home is not something I wish to see
Pratap: Bade Daata those marks they were exactly like
the ones he gave to Maa that day when...
BD: when you saved her - you beat the crap out of that
shitty man Pratap and then you called for help - you called me remember what
happened next
Pratap: We beat the crap out of the shitty man some
more (both men cracked a smile)
BD: Its not just the marks Pratap - tell your BD what
is troubling you?
Pratap: What if I turn out like him you know as a father?
I won't be able to stand it and Ajabde she has been god send but what if I hurt
her
BD: Pratap Singh Songara don't you ever dare to compare
yourself to that man -he might have been the source of your birth but he is not
your father- that man was not involved in raising you I did that - I was the
one who held you for the first time even before your mother held you. I spent
my nights looking after you while your mother recovered from the birth. I
raised you - I was there and so don't you dare to compare yourself to that man -
I raised you far better than him even though we had hiccups but we did well and
I'm sure your Dadi would agree with me as well so will your mother. Pratap no
one knows how to be a parent don't you think Ajabde is scared but she is more
worried about you leaving her alone in this because you have managed to bring
in the distance again - the last week you were holed in your office day in and
out while she spent her entire time at our place with Sagar and even fell
asleep there once - I thought you will call after my text but you just said
Fine. Ajabde is going through some changes Pratap and she is housing a child
your child she needs you to be there for her but she will never ask for it
after all she knows the drill but remember Pratap last time she just went to
Maldives but if you continue like this then she will leave you for good and I
will suggest her this idea and get her to marry some other guy
Pratap looked at BD who had mischief sparkling in his
eyes: You won't do any such thing
BD: so are you going home now or shall I drag you out
by your ears?
Pratap smiled at his Bade Daata: I'm going I'm not a
kid anymore you know
BD: I know you are growing up but I cannot wait for my
great grandchild to come and then we'll trouble you like you have been doing
Pratap: Me and trouble you - never
BD and Pratap laugh and then Pratap packs his stuff to
go home and be with the wife who was super pissed at him (though he was unaware
of her anger)
Edited by twilightlover29 - 8 years ago
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