Loved it!!! Nandini and I will return back to this and read again and again I think ;)
Nandini's comments were Di!!!
That was so beautifully written. I liked how Nandini rushed to give Manik first aid and how he fought for her :) The whistle part... Not so good... I think it could have been skipped... I liked how Nandini admitted that she didn't like brooding Mr. Malhotra and she worried that he will return to his ways once she would go to Akash.
The fact that she stood for herself and in Nandini-Akash scene, I could exclaim "ha! In your face mister." that was my favourite :)
The prologue... I liked that Nandini was not telling their story to their children and how Manik threatened Aman over the phone :)
Your written skills and the way expressing of character feelings are too good..I just enjoyed throughout... Keep writing... Looking forward for another awesome story from your end
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