Originally posted by: pri_tanha
OMG!! π€£ U actually wrote this!! π
Anyways nice story!! Loved Baldev's dialogues ππΌPlease write one OS on all possible locations!! π
Sonu π€£ taarif karu kya uski jisne ye os banaya! O-my-god! Isne hume juda kiya tha,ab uske he ghar me π€£ speechless!speechless! I'l give spcl thanx to nikki jinki wajah se ye os likha gaya. Hillarious! Awesome!
OMG you wrote them
I luv u sonu β€οΈ , this was brilliant, even better than I thought or could have imagined it to be and that too at rajveers house and on his bed! π€£
looking forward to the next one, wanna see how the jeep works out! !
wlcm jee wlcm
Originally posted by: ManaliRoy
"A part of Baldev's, had full faith in veera that she might not love him as much he does but she won't harm him purposely in any way" yahi soch hameshaa Baldeva k dil mein chupke rehti hain
Sukoon mila,, dushman k place ko humaare hero ke haathon tabaah hote dekh
Awww 'asli pe toh haath uthaa nahi sakta,zindagi bhar pyaar kartaa rahunga'
His pain yahan uske saath maze kar rahi thi ,,, cut out hitting ne thoda shaant kiya.
"She held his face in her hands' finally nazar toh aaya
Dil chidke dard bahaar niqal rahaa tha 'de tera dawaai waala doodh,,pee leta hoon,,phir chali jaana mainu pagal khane meinbharti karke
Perfect point by Baldev "hamesha tere mere beech koi teesra kyin aajaata hain?
Veera tried her best to get back her Baldeva's trust
Awww baby "tujhpe bharosaa karneko dil kartaa hain par kya pataa phirse tu mainu dhoka dede π "
"Ab isike ghar mein hum ek honge" yeh hui na sher waali baat
Taanaa maarna nahi bhool raha π 'sab pataa hain tujhe,uska kamra bhi dekh rakkha hain' π
Baldev decorated the bed sacchi mein π "tu padi reh chupchap" aww he is behaving like baazigar
Dushman ke gharpe suhaagraat ka mazaa hi kuch aur hoga ,'kyon tainu badaa dukh hoga ki? ' π
Saare taane zabardast the π
Veera :- π bechaari ,, 'accha karle apne mann ki' β€οΈ awwa ,, she kept her mouth shut π
Bohot huaa ruthnaa manaana aakhir mein mil hi gaye woh bhi buraai ko dafan karte huye β€οΈ
Shaayad hi aisi koi story ke baare mein kisine socha hoga,par tune sochke darshaa bhi diya,,welldone β€οΈβ€οΈIt was an unique one with so much passion..
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