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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi everyone 🤗
Im here with Valentines Day special OS
I got this idea while chatting with my close friend..Its complete fanfiction and thora hatke story.. this story have a secret in it too lets see if anyone can get that or not 😆

Read it and enjoy!!😉


Veera was studying in Delhi.. She almost talk with every classmate..but she didn't had any close friend...after exams when her classes started again she get to know there is one new admission in the class...
And when he entered in class she got mesmerized..he was so handsome, and sweet looking boy..his curly hair,dark brown eyes his perfect body, she almost fell for him

He sat next to her and then he noticed Veera..her hair were so long and she looks like a doll..he was lost in her but when she looked at him he looked away..

Same day Veera was going to hostel after classes when she hits someone and her books fell.. It was no other then the new admission boy, they both picked up the books and then he moved his hand towards her

Hi, mera naam Baldev hai.. Tum mujhse friendship karo gi
Veera was seeing his hand then his face..thinking in her mind who will say a no to a handsome guy like u
Baldev; kya soch rahi hai
Veera; kuch nahi.. Friends
She moved her hand forward and they shake their hands
Baldev; ye to buhat acha hua ab hum friends hain to main tumhein "tenu" keh ke bola sakta hun..wo kya hai na main apne friends se aise hi bat karta hun
Veera; to phir to main bhi aise hi bolaon gi..theek rahega na..
Baldev; Haan bilkul theek rahega
Veera; okay ab mujhe jana hai.. Hum kal class me milengey
Veera left from there..

Next day they meet out of the class and walked together towards classroom
Some days pass and their friendship was getting strong but there was someone Who didn't liked their friendship..her name was Tina, she was in their class,she didn't liked Veera from the start and was jealous of her because she was intelligent and her English accent was the one thing which attracts everyone..that's why in class everyone was her friend but she didn't made any close friends she wanted to give attention only towards her studies.. She never showed her hatred and jealousy for Veera that's why no one knows about it but only her close friends knew this truth..

Veera and Baldev was talking and laughing in lecture break when Tina comes there
Tina; hi.. Kya main yahan beth sakti hun
Baldev; Haan kyun nahi..
Veera; Haan Tina betho..Baldev apni poorani batein bta raha hai..buhat interesting story hai iski
Tina; oh acha to mujhe bhi btao aisa kya hai tumhari story me Baldev
Baldev; theek hai
Baldev continued to his story and they all three had a great time
Tina; acha ab main chalti hun meri friends wait kar rahi hain..waise kya ab hum friends hain..
Baldev; Haan ek hi class me hain to friends kyun nahi banegey..
and they shake their hands
Tina left, many days passed they three become friends..
Baldev was waiting for Veera to come so that they will go together in classroom..Tina saw Baldev and thought its a good chance to fulfil her plan she goes where Baldev was standing
Tina; hi Baldev..Veera ka wait kar rahe ho?
Baldev; Haan main ne socha hum sath me hi class me jayengey..
Then Baldev noticed her her cloths were similar to Veera...
Baldev; aj to tum buhat achi lag rahi ho.. Ye kapre to...
Tina; ache hain na..mujhe aise kapre pehnana hi pasand hai...
Baldev and Veera had spent much time after their lectures too and Tina didn't knew about it.. So she didn't know that which dress she copied Veera had already wear that dress meeting Baldev...
Baldev was confused but then Veera came there and was shocked to see Tina's dress
Tina; acha main chalti hun lecture ka time ho raha hai
Baldev; hum bhi wahin ja rahe hain.. Sath hi chalte hain
Tina; nahi mujhe meri friends ke sath jana hai main chalti hun..
She left,
Baldev; Veera tune dekha uska dress to bilkul tere jaisa tha..lekin wo dress ka design to tune khud bnaya tha na to iske pas kaise aya..
Veera; menu bhi kuch samjh nahi aa raha..
Veera thought in her mind..or maybe i know what's going on..and what she actually wants to do
Next day Tina saw Baldev alone and goes to him
Tina; Baldev yahan kya kar rahe ho..
Baldev; main bas aise hi..
Tina; achaa waise main tum se ek bat pochon glat mat samjhna
Baldev; Haan pocho
Tina; tm ne kabhi ye socha hai ke Veera ke itne dost hain lekin koi bhi uske sath kyun nahi bethta
Baldev; mtlab? Tum kehna kya chahti ho
Tina; Veera jaisi bahir se dikhti hai waisi bilkul bhi nahi hai..wo andar se kuch aur hai aur logo ke samne kuch aur banti hai uske har kaam ke peeche uska matlab kuch aur hi hota hai...
Baldev; ye sab kya bol rahi ho tum...aisa kuch bhi nahi hai..aur tum to uski dost ho to phir aisi batein Kyun kar rahi ho..
Tina; main sach keh rahi hun..tumhare sath friendship bhi usne apne kisi faide ke liye ki hogi..
Baldev left without saying anything
Next day Veera and Baldev went to hang out together..Baldev didn't take Tina's words serious..he thought Veera is his very good friend and she always will be...their friendship was so strong
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It was Veera's bday Baldev brings a chocolate cake for her they cuts the cake together and feed each other.. Their friendship was so strong now that no one can break it...they always go for hanging out and now spent more time together..
Love is the most strongest feeling, their friendship was more stronger then this feeling... Yes their FRIENDSHIP!! It was not love..but strong friendship
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Baldev; Veera bta na..
Veera was going towards her hostel and Baldev was coming behind her
Veera; kya baton Baldev.. Ja tu yahan se mujhe tang mat kar..
Baldev; subha se kinni bari to poch chukka hun..kal Valentines day hai tu kya kar rahi hai kal.. Kissi ko phool degi kya?
Veera; main bhi tenu subha se kinni bar keh chukki hun ke main kissi ko koi phool nahi de rahi
Baldev; lekin kyun.. Apne doston ko bhi nahi
Veera; ek hi dost hai mera tu.. Tujhe de dungi bas..ab ja menu pareshan mat kar
Baldev; lekin tu to menu yellow rose degi na.. To red kisko degi..
Veera; Baldev mat tang kar menu..tu to waise bhi kal ja raha hai na...
Baldev; oh Haan changa kya tune yaad karwa diya..main to bhool gaya tha.. Waise tenu yaad hai na.. Meri madad karni hai
Veera; Haan Haan yaad hai.. Tere liye kapre select karne hain jo tu kal pehn ke jayega..apni girlfriend se milney
Suddenly Veera stopped
Baldev; ruk kyun gai
Veera turned and look at him
Veera; ab kya hostel ke andar bhi jayega..
they were standing in front of girls hostel
Baldev; to main kab ja raha tha..
Veera; chal ab ja
Baldev; ek mint
He take out a white rose from his pocket and gave it to her
Baldev; kal to menu jana hai is liye socha tenu phle hi phool de dun.. Pata nahi kal time mile ya nahi
Veera take the white rose and smiles
And then take out a yellow rose from her bag and gave it to him
Veera; menu pata tha is liye aj hi tere liye ye phool le ai thi..
They both smiles looking each other
And then Baldev left,

Next day

Veera helped Baldev in selecting cloths and he left to meet his girlfriend
Veera was in her room looking out from the window..she was holding that white rose which Baldev gave her..she was lost in her thoughts then suddenly she turned took her laptop and switched on it...and searched for white rose meaning, what was written made her smile a little at the same time made her more confused... She knew what white rose means but still she searched for the meaning..maybe because her heart was not convinced with what she knows or her heart wanted something else,which she didn't get but maybe she got a hint which made her little happy..
But is that hint was enough... Or there was nothing like that what was written there...
Veera talked to herself yahan to likha hai white rose is for new beginning, aur ye im thinking about you..iska kya mtlab hua, Baldev ne mujhe white rose kyun diya

New beginning aur thinking about you, ka kya matlab ho sakta hai..lekin main ye sab soch hi kyun rahi hun..hum friends hain to usne is liye diya hoga.. Friendship ki new beginning, lekin friendship ke liye wo mujhe yellow rose bhi de sakta tha na.. Phir white rose kyun
Nahi hum sirf friends hain best friends aur kuch nahi..mujhe aur kuch nahi sochna chahiye...agar Baldev ko pata chala to wo kya sochega hum to bas friends they na to phir ab ye sab..

She shuts down her laptop but her thoughts were still not leaving her..when she heard a voice which was coming from outside of her rooms window, she ran towards her window to look down, it was veera's friend she informed her someone is waiting for her outside the hostel
Veera goes down thinking she don't remember if someone was coming to meet

She saw Baldev standing in front of her as she comes out from hostel, she gets a little confused seeing him here when he has to be with his girlfriend but this was not all
He goes down on his knee in proposing style and take out a red rose
Veera was standing still..she was shocked, surprised and happy at the same time, she smiled very wide and ran towards Baldev,
He stands up and opened his arms she came running and they both hugged..
They have hugged many times before but this time it was special..they were lost in each other that Veera didn't realise rose petals were falling on them like rain..Baldev had plan that
Baldev broke the hug and gives red rose to Veera,

She takes smilingly and the Baldev gave his hand to her, she holds his hand
Baldev; chalein
Veera nodded

Maybe they were the only ones whom had always thought it was just friendship OR they knew somewhere deep inside their hearts it was something more then friendship but they were not ready to accept the truth...


     Don't confuse familiarity with Love
                                         Thank you 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Sweet os ❤️
The last few lines do ring a bell 😛😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ...Jammy...

Sweet os ❤️

The last few lines do ring a bell 😛😆

 😆 ohh thats great then 😛 but i think only few people will get it completely 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Aww!! Thats a very sweet os yaar!!! Lovely ❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Dreamy os saffy,gud job! Btw whats do ring a bell
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Originally posted by: zainabawoon

Aww!! Thats a very sweet os yaar!!! Lovely ❤️

thank u 🤗
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Originally posted by: sonmusk

Dreamy os saffy,gud job! Btw whats do ring a bell

thank u 🤗 sorry didnt get what u r asking? 😆
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Welcome :-) The last few lines do ring a bell, whats that mean?
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aawww such a cute valentines os 👍🏼 thanks for the pm 😃
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such a lovely os... u made my valentines special