CHILLY SS Always For You c 2 pg 5

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Character Sketch & Index
Chintu Chautala : He is 29 yrs old. Smart n Very matured guy. Chairman of the Chautala Builders Company

Devi Prakash Chautala : Chintu's widow mother. Loved her son very much.

Dolly Shaktishali : She is 25 yrs old. Chulbuli n lovable girl. Younger girl of Shaktishali Family

Jagdamba Shaktishali : Dolly's maternal grand maa. She is businesswoman. She loved Dolly very much.

Pannalal Shaktishali : Dolly's maternal Grand paa.

Sundari Shaktishali : Dolly's mom

PK Vigyan : Dolly's Dad

Lolly Kapoor : Dolly's elder sister

Mahan Kapoor : Dolly's Jijaji

Index :
CS : pg 1
Chapter 1 : pg 1
Chapter 2 pg 5


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Chapter 1

Shaktishali Niwas

Dolly's room

Lolly : Dolly...Dolly meri behna yakin nahi ho raha aaj tumhari shadi hain. Nani sach kehti hain jo hota hain wo achhe ke liye hota hain. Dekha aaj ghar me kitni khushi aayi hain. Papa, maa, nana, nani sab bahot khush hain. Wo Dollyki najar utarti hain, "Meri pyari behenko kisiki bhi najar na lage, waise bhi ab tumhe har buri najarse bachanewala jo aaya hain toh tumhe buri najar lagegihi nahi." Dolly muh ghumati hain. "Kya hua Dolly? Kabse mehi bole jaa rahi hu. Idhar mere taraf dekh", wo usse apne taraf ghumati hain, "Kya hua Dolly? Tumhare ye chand jaise chehre pe narajgi kyun hain?" Dolly fake smile deti hain, "Chalo kamse kam aapko meri narajgi dikhi toh sahi, par yaha gharme sabko meri shadi ki padi hain, kisiko bhi ye khayal nahi ki mujhpe kya biti hain."

Lolly : Kya hua Dolly? Aaj aisi bate kyun kar rahi ho?

Dolly : Di aap aise kyu puch rahi ho jaise aapko kuch bhi pata nahi ho.

Lolly : Dolly, tu abhi tak uss ladke ke bareme soch rahi hain? Bhul jaa usse Dolly.

Dolly : Bhul jau? Kaise bhul jau usse me? Pyar kiya hain maine usse di. Jisse maine apne dilme basaya hain, jiske saath maine sath nibhaneki kasme khayi hain usse me kaise bhul jau? Wo meri dhadkan hain di aur aap keh rahi hain me usse bhul jau?

Lolly : Par Dolly nani kehti hain na wo ladka tumhare liye achha nahi hain.

Dolly : Nani... nani ko uske bareme kya pata di? Wo usse kitni bar mili hain sirf ek baar aur uss ek barme unhone usse pehechan liya, ye kaise mumkin hain di? Nani ko itnihi problem thi ki wo unke expectations ke jaisa aamir nahi tha, unhe bas isse hi problem thi.

Lolly : Nahi Dolly tu jaise samaj rahi hain waisi baat nahi hain. Nani ko uske bareme jarur kuch pata chala hoga isliye unhone tumhari shadi ke liye mana kiya hoga.

Dolly : Di agar aisi baat thi toh unhone mujhe kyun nahi batayi wo baat. I am sure di aisi koi baat nahi thi, nanine sirf apna swarth dekha. Unhe dar tha ki agar meri shadi ek aam ladke ke sath hui toh log unhe taane denge isiliye unhone meri shadi iss anjaneke sath teh ki.

Lolly : Nahi Dolly, aisi baat nahi hain, tu galat soch rahi hain. Tabhi waha ladkiya unhe neeche bulane aati hain. Lolly unko neeche bhejti hain, "Tum log jao me le aati hu isse." Ladkiya jane ke bad Lolly Dolly ke pass aati hain, "Chal Dolly neeche bulaya hain. Ab ye sari bate apne dimagse nikal de aur apni nayi jindagi ki shuruat kar. Dekh tumhe nayi jindagime  le janewala tumhara intezar kar raha hain."

Dolly : Nahi di, ye meri nayi jindagi nahi balki narakme le janewali jindagi hain aur wo jo neeche khada hain na wo mujhe khush karne nahi balki dukh denewala hain.

Dono neeche mandapme aati hain. Dolly chupchap se sari rasme nibhati hain. Panditji dulha dulhan ko pati patni ghoshit karte hain. Dono badonka aashirwad lete hain. Bidai ke liye Dolly apne room me ready hone jati hain. Jagdamba uske pass aakar usse gale lagati hain, "Dolly beta, dekhna jamai babu tumhe bahot khush rakhenge, wo tumhe iss duniyaki har khushi denge, tumhe kabhi koi kami nahi karenge. Tum bhi unka ek achhi patni bankar saath dena. Sach kehti hu aaj me bahot bahot khush hu."

Dolly : Khush toh aap hongihi nani kyunki aapne aapki man ki jo ki hain. Aaj aapne yeh sabit kar diya ki aapko apni ijjatse jyada kuch bhi nahi hain.

Sundari uspe chillati hain, "Dolly yeh kya bakwas kar rahi ho? Tum bhul gayi ho maiya tumse sabse jyada pyar karti hain."

Dolly : Haan maa, me bhul gayi thi nani ek businesswoman hain aur aaj unhone ussi pyarke badle mujhse yeh shadi karwayi hain taki unki ijjat bach jaye. 

Sundari uspe wapas chillati hain par nani usse rokti hain, "Nahi Sundari bolne de isse". "Dolly beta, me tumhari narajgi samaj sakti hu par beta maine jo kiya hain wo tumhare achhe ke liye hi kiya hain. Khair abhi to tu nahi samjhegi par kuch din bad tu khud yeh baat samjhegi." Monika unhe bulane aati hain, "Badi nani, bade nana ne aapko, naniko, maa ko aur massi ko neeche bulaya hain." Lolly Monika ke sath neeche jati hain. Dolly ek bar apne kamreko dekhti hain aur sare log neeche aate hain.

PK aur Sundari bidai ki rasme nibhate hain. PK dulhe ke pass aata hain, "Beta aaj tak maine apni bachhiko phool ki tarah pala hain, par me yeh bhul gaya tha ki hum toh sirf maali hain iss phool ko toh uske asli gharme jana hain aur apni khushbuse uss ghar ko mehekana hain." Wo apne hath jodta hain, "Meri betiko sambhalna beta, usse koi bhi galti hui toh maf kar dena." Ladka uske hath pakadta hain, "Yeh kaisi baate kar rahe hain aap uncleji, aap befikar rahiye, Dollyji mere ghar nahi balki unke apne ghar jaa rahi hain. Me Dollyjiko waha kuch bhi kami mehsus karne nahi dunga. Aapke hath mere samne jodne ke liye nahi balki mujhe aashirwad dene ke liye hain." Wo uske per chuta hain. Sari Shaktishali Family Dollyki bidai karte hain.

Dolly ka swagat uske sasural me badi dhum dham se hota hain. Kuch ladkiya usse uske room me le jati hain. Dolly ek bar saji hui sej ki taraf dekhti hain, "Yeh sej nahi balki meri chita hain. Aajse meri jindagi sirf ek murade ki jaisi honewali hain." Tabhi usse darwaja band karneki awaj aati hain. Wo darwaje ke taraf dekhti hain. Ladka usse smile deta hain. Dolly uske taraf gusse se dekhti hain, "Aa gaye aap? Mil gayi aapke dil ko thandak?" Ladka confuse hokar uske taraf dekhta hain, "Ji?"

Dolly : Kya hua Mr. Chintu Chautala aisa muh kyun banaya hain aapne? Sach hi toh pucha hain na maine. Maine aapse ussi din kaha tha ki aap mujhe reject kar dijiye kyunki me kisi aurse pyar karti hu, par aapne kya kiya, aapne mujhe pasand kiya, ye jante huye bhi ki me kisi aur se pyar karti hu aapne mujhe pasand kar liya?

Chintu : Nahi Dollyji, me janta hu aap kisi aur se pyar karti ho par maine...

Dolly : Par maine kya? Maine uss din hath jodkar aapse request ki thi, lekin aapne meri jindagiko narak bana diya, aapke wajahse sirf aapke wajahse aaj me aisi halat me hu, aapke uss ek haan ne meri jindagi sawari nahi hain balki aur bigad gayi hain. Me aapko kabhi maf nahi karungi Mr. Chautala. Ab dekhna me aapki jindagi kaise bigadti hu, aapne mere jindagi me dukh bhare hain na toh dekhna ab me aapki jindagi kaise dukhonse bharti hu aur wo change karne washroom jati hain.

Chintu washroomke taraf dekhta hain, "Me janta hu Dollyji aapko bahot bura laga hain par me yakin ke sath kehta hu jab aapko asliyat pata chalegi na tab aap mujhse bilkul naraj nahi rahogi. Dekhna aap mujhe ek din jarur maf karogi aur wo din me jaldi launga. Yeh ek pati ka apni patnise wada hain aur wo bhi change karke so jata hain.

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hawww Dolly kisi aur se pyar karti hain????? πŸ˜² πŸ˜² pehle mujhe laga dolly chintuse pyar karti hain par nani unki shadi nahi hone de rahi par ye kya dolly kisi aur se pyar karti hain  usne Chintuko kitna kuch suna diya πŸ˜­ πŸ˜­ bechara chintu πŸ˜­
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Congo ji for chilly ss πŸ₯³
Nice cs 😳
Awesome banner ketu πŸ‘ ⭐️
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congo dhanno fr new ff πŸ€—
dolly kisi aur se pyar karti h phir nani ne kyun uski marzi ke khilaaf shadi karwai uski...bechari dolly
chintu kya samjhana chahta h dolly...matlab use kuch pata chala h
hope sab thik ho
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Update ki starting shadi se ki h tune aur mujhe show ki starting yaad aa gai humarea nachta hua hero🀣
Ab ye dolly ki kya problem hπŸ˜•
Ye teesra kaun aa gaya chilly ke bich 😑
Lo ji phir nani ka panga πŸ˜†
"Nahi di, ye meri nayi jindagi nahi balki narakme le janewali jindagi hain aur wo jo neeche khada hain na wo mujhe khush karne nahi balki dukh denewala hain."🀣🀣 πŸ˜†
Oye Dolly toh badi gussa wali h isme πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
Normal pk hazam nahi hua mujhe πŸ˜†
Lo ji mil gai dhamki phir Sr par]=))] bechari Chintu ki Sr kabhi hogi hi nai lagta h🀣
"Yeh ek pati ka apni patnise wada hain" all d best CcπŸ‘πŸΌ
Oye ye kaunsa Sach h jo Chintu ko bhi pta h..jaldi se reveal kar πŸ˜›
Superb update..jaldi se next dede πŸ˜†
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