RaYa Story : Phir Le Aaya Dil..Kya Keeje LAST PART on page 8 *18-1-15*

Posted: 2015-01-06T00:27:58Z

Hello Friends

OS-Phir Le Aaya Dil...Kya Keeje...by Amrit Kour

Kapoor Industries

Ram returned from a meeting..he started listening to the voice mails... One Mail caught his attention..It was from someone whom he had started hating..the one who was once his life his love was now a mere nobody..

Mr Kapoor..please meri baat sun lijiye..{he was about to stop it} us priya ke liye jisse kabhi aapne pyar kiya tha..{he stopped..n removed his hand} Jab ap ye voice mail sunenge tab tak main aapse bhot door chali gayi houngi...{he became pale} ab to shayad apko farq bhi nahi padta..it hurts me Mr Kapoor..it really hurts..Itne dino se sirf ek baat kahi maine ke ek baar meri baat sun lijiye..par aapka gussa sab cheezo se upar hai..humare us pyar se bhi jo shayad aaj nahi par ek waqt tha jab sirf pyar tha aur kuch bhi nahi...I hate myself..ghin aati hai mujhe khud se that I left you..

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Edited by aman.anjaan - 2015-01-17T22:49:26Z
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Posted: 2015-01-06T00:49:10Z
Nice OS!!
Thanks 4 pm!!!
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Posted: 2015-01-06T00:50:11Z
Awesome story start. Thank's for pm.
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Posted: 2015-01-06T00:51:00Z
Continue soon egarly waiting to read next part.
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Posted: 2015-01-06T01:09:25Z
Seem to be very interesting
Priya voice mail to Ram and seems he is getting in panic mode while listening it.
continue soon and thanx for the pm
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Posted: 2015-01-06T01:16:39Z
Really very touchy n emotional it was pls continue soon
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Posted: 2015-01-06T02:02:16Z
Its a superb story by amrit..
Post d nxts soon...
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Posted: 2015-01-06T02:02:59Z
thanks for pm. pl priya ko kuch mat hone dena. raya k beech k saare mu clear karva do aur raya ko milva do.
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