Devil Of My Nightmares - Dark & Seductive - Page 5

Wow dear amazing update..
Hats off girl. 👏
I so love u 4 ur gyaan given in between update.

Sanyu ne bilkul achhe se us budhhe khusat ki dhulai ki.
Kamina budhha apni beti ki age ki girl k sath itni gandi harkat karta hai...

I love sanyu's bonding wid her bro n mom.
Sanyu iz crazy 2.
She was gvng name 2 her dad... "Hitler" 😆

Kriti her bff.
Their bonding is even very well.

I think is dat voice izof rd...

Waiting 4 new part.
Continue soon.

Love,
Mahi ❤️

Nice..
Thanx for d pm..

Unress... Sorry for delay...
Hey girl awesome update... Teenagers often do such mistakes and u did a great job. Y highlighting it in ur fic...

Waiting for next.. Thanx for p.m.
Update soon...

Love
Richa..Edited by P.ritz - 9 years ago

nice concept

Nice story line 

amazing update
liked this sooo much

sanyu chracter which promo show is totaly different from frst ch
bt quite intresting
waiting for the next update

Originally posted by: newmoon18

Awsme starting yr
I luved it

Beautifully penned down

What sanyu did was absolutely rite
Aese adami ko toh itna marna chahiye jab tak nani na yaad aa jaye
Agli barse apni khud ki biwi ko haath lagane se pehle dus bar soche



Sanyu luvs her mom n bro a lot
Her dad strict type k he

Dadi b


Kriti her support system


New class

I think in end that voice is of rd

Cnt wait for next
Update soon


Luv u
Keep smiling

sachi hai.. har us aadmi ko aise hi humiliate karna chahiye jo ladkiyon ko aisi nazar se dekhta h...
thnk u so mch..

Originally posted by: P.ritz

Unress... Sorry for delay...
Hey girl awesome update... Teenagers often do such mistakes and u did a great job. Y highlighting it in ur fic...

Waiting for next.. Thanx for p.m.
Update soon...

Love
Richa..

yhnx dear.. glad 3 know u lkd my concept...
lv u...

Originally posted by: Mahi2012

Wow dear amazing update..
Hats off girl. 👏
I so love u 4 ur gyaan given in between update.

Sanyu ne bilkul achhe se us budhhe khusat ki dhulai ki.
Kamina budhha apni beti ki age ki girl k sath itni gandi harkat karta hai...

I love sanyu's bonding wid her bro n mom.
Sanyu iz crazy 2.
She was gvng name 2 her dad... "Hitler" 😆

Kriti her bff.
Their bonding is even very well.

I think is dat voice izof rd...

Waiting 4 new part.
Continue soon.
thnx sweety
gyaan😆

karna hi tha.. maine jo karwaya hai...😉

thnx again..
lv u a lotz...😊

Love,
Mahi ❤️