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Originally posted by: Dnyanu16

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Originally posted by: designersaini

im late lateef...congo faru fr d new ff...
Chintu as chiraag
n ketaki bhi h ismeπŸ˜†
n nxt tym will be on tym here but nxt chap de pehle

koi baat nahi ms.late lateef πŸ˜† shukriya 😳
Ketu ki entry shocking thi πŸ˜†
Haan deti hun next chap πŸ˜›
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CHAPTER 1


A girl dressed in a simple suit is going to her home after attending her college classes along with her childhood friend.
Lolly (chirpily)- Yaar aaj toh maza hi aa gaya last ke do lectures free ho gaye.
Dolly (smiling)- Haan..
Lolly- Sirf haan?? Arey itni khushi ka mauka hai..Chal na Chandu Lal ke samose-jalebi khaane chalte hain.
Dolly- Nahi-nahi aaj nahi..nani ne hume aaj college ke baad sidha ghar aane ke liye kaha hai.
Lolly- Haan toh abhi college time khatam kahan hua hai?? Abhi do lectures baaki hai na.
Dolly- Par wo free hai na.
Lolly- Ye baat hume pata hai par nani ko nahi.
Dolly- Toh?
Lolly- Toh ye ki hum agle ek ghante tak azaad hain..toh chal ab isi khushi mei Chandu lal ke chal na..mujhe bahot bhook lagi hai.
Dolly- Par agar nani ko kisi aur se pata chal gaya toh?
Lolly- Humare siwa aur kaun batayega?
Dolly- Haan ye bhi hai..par phir bhi mujhe darr lag ra hai.
Lolly- Offo..tu aur tera darr..ja tu apne ghar ja aur apni param pujya nani ki seva kar..mai hoon hi kaun?
Dolly- Oye..ab tu naraz mat ho..thik hai hum chalte hain..khush?
Lolly- Bahot..and she drags her to the shop.
After having some snacks they goes to roam in the local market where Dolly's fear comes true in the form of her brother Krishna.
Dolly- Bhai..aap..
Krishna doesn't responds and leaves from there. Dolly also bids bye to Lolly and goes after him.

Jagdamba Nivas
Both reaches the house and Nani is surprised to see them together.
Nani- Krishna beta tum iske saath kaise?
Krishna- Ye toh aap isi se puchho nani ki ye mere saath kaise?
Nani- Dolly ab kya kiya tumne?
Dolly (crying)- Nani..wo..wo..ma..in..
Krishna- Wo..wo..kya kar rahi hai..saaf-saaf bata ki tu apni uss awara saheli ke saath matargashti kar rahi thi bazaar mein.
Nani (shocked)- Kyaaa?
Krishna- Haan nani..madamji bazaar mei ghum rahi thi.
Nani- Ye mai kya sun rahi hoon Dolly?? Iss waqt toh tumhe college mein hona chahiye tha toh tum bazaar mein kya kar rahi thi?
Dolly (sobbing)- Wo..wo nani aaj humare last do lectures free the toh hum bazaar chale gaye.
Nani- Kyaa? Last do lecture free the toh tumhe ghar wapas aa jaana chahiye tha..humne tumhe college ke baad sidha ghar aane ke liye kaha tha na..phir tum bazaar kya karne gai thi?
Dolly- Ji nani aapne kaha tha..wo toh hum bas yuhin chale gaye the. Hume maaf kar dijiye nani aage se aisi galti dubara nahi hogi.
Nani- Thik hai..ab jao aur jakar rasoi ka kaam dekho.. Dolly leaves from there.
Krishna- Nani aapne use aise hi kyu jaane diya?
Nani- Wo tumhe raat ko tumhare nanaji ke aane par pata chal jayega.

Delhi
Chautala Group of Industries
Chintu is working in his cabin when his phone rings.
Chintu- Hello..
Ketu- Bhai..time kya ho raha hai?
Chintu- Bacha..tune mujhe time puchhne ke liye call kiya hai?
Ketu- Jo puchha hai pehle uska jawab do.
Chintu- Its 10'o clock.
Ketu- Good..aur aapke office hours kab tak hain?
Chintu- Ye kya weird questions puchh rahi hai beta aaj tu? Teri tabiyat toh theek hai na bache?
Ketu- I m absolutely fine..now answer my question.
Chintu- Ok..my office timings are till 8p.m.
Ketu- Toh aap ab tak office mei kya kar rahe ho?
Chintu- Ohh..so sorry bacha..kaam mei pata hi nahi chala time ka.
Ketu- No sorry's accepted.
Chintu- Please na.
Ketu- Nopes.
Chintu- Miny tiny bit bhi nahi?
Ketu- Ok..agar aap within 15mins. mei ghar aa jaate ho toh main sochungi.
Chintu- Aww..thanku thanku thanku so much..
Ketu- Jaldi karo fourteen and a half minutes are left.
Chintu- Oye..coming.
He hurriedly moves to the car and reaches the home in 12 mins. due to no traffic in late night. After parking the car he rushes inside.
Chintu- I m home.
Ketu (comes from kitchen with the food)- Within 15 mins. very impressive..ab jao jaldi freshen up hokar aao..mujhe bahot zoro ki bhook lagi hai.
Chintu- Ok..but m I forgiven?
Ketu- Yes..but you have to feed me..now hurry up.
Chintu (grins widely)- Okie..Coming in 2mins.
Ketu- Okie take a noodles break..and both laughs at that.
Chintu comes after freshning up and feeds her lovingly and she too feeds him sometimes. After the dinner, he makes her sleep in her room wishing her good night and then goes to sleep in his room.

"Apologies for the mistakes"
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Originally posted by: ...fari...

πŸ€— di
Achi sis h na Chintu ki?🀣
Hmm..thik h aapke liye Chintu ki taraf se Dolly ka pet name is Divya πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
Wts the meaning of divya?

wow really πŸ˜³ divya means divine lustre πŸ˜ƒ
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wow updated...nice one dear πŸ‘
chintu ketu πŸ˜³ πŸ˜›
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  mil gaya update
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ye krishna πŸ˜‘ show me chintu ko tang karta hain aur isme dolly ko πŸ˜‘ 
hayeee chintu bhai n me   πŸ₯³ par di ketu itni sharif nahi hain, jo itni turant man gayi mujhe masti karni hain chintu bhai ke saath πŸ˜Ž me unko tang karungi by god  πŸ€£ aur me bachhi nahi hu itni chhoti πŸ˜” 
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tu nachti bahot hain. tere perme dard nahi hota kya? πŸ˜†
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Originally posted by: --Divya--

wow really πŸ˜³ divya means divine lustre πŸ˜ƒ

🀣 πŸ€£
kya baat hain Divya tu toh Rishiko dhoka de rahi hain πŸ€£