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Chapter-4


After the departure of the Boys family..Nana giving a glare to Nani goes back to his room. Dolly cleans the table and goes to kitchen while Krishna drags Nani to his room.

Krishna- Ab kya karenge nani?
Nani- Karna kya hai..mana kar denge..rishtey toh aur mil jayenge par Dolly ko itne lambe samay ke liye itni dur nahi bhej sakte hum.
Krishna- Hmm..sahi keh rahi ho aap.

Next day, Nani goes to meet Pandit ji.

Nani- Namaste Pandit ji..
Pandit- Namaste..toh aapne faisla le liya?
Nani- Ji..hume ye rishta manzur nahi hai..aap unn logo ko mana kar dijiye..aur agli baar aap videsh ka rishta mat laiyega.
Pandit- Theek hai..mai koshish karta hoon.
Nani- Acha toh ab hum chalte hain..namaste.
Pandit- Ji namaste.

While Nani was talking to Pandit ji three pairs of eyes were watching and listening to their conversation hiding at a safe distance while one more pair of eyes too was watching it all hiding from them all. After Nani was gone, the three of them jumps in excitement.

Flashback Three Days Ago

Dolly and Lolly were coming back from college when Lolly asks Dolly.
Lolly- Oye kya hua hai aaj tujhe? Itni sad kyu hai?
Dolly- Wo..wo Nani humare liye rishta dhund rahi hain.
Lolly- Kya? Itni jaldi?
Dolly- Wahi toh..hume itni jadli shaadi nahi karni hai.
Lolly- Toh tune kuch kaha kyu nahi?
Dolly- Hum kya kahe? Aur waise bhi Nani humari kahan sunengi.
Lolly- Hmm..teri wo Mahaan Nani apne aage kisi ki nahi sunti hain.
Dolly- Hmm..

Suddenly, Lolly gets an idea and calls someone excusing herself.

Lolly- Hello.
[B]Other Person- Hello..haan boliye Lolly ji.

Lolly- Mahaan ji..mujhe aapki madad ki zarurat hai.
Mahaan- Meri kaisi madad chahiye aapko?
Lolly- Aapko Dolly ke ghar rishta lekar jaane ki acting karni hai.
Mahaan (shocked)- Kya?? Par mohabbat toh mai aapse karta hoon Lolly ji..toh Dolly ke ghar rishta kyu lekar jaun?
Lolly- Oho..Mahaan ji sirf acting karni hai.
Mahaan- Par Kyu?
Lolly (tells him everything)- Ab bataiye aap humari madad karenge ya nahi?
Mahaan- Jaani hum apni future saali sahiba ki madad jarur karenge.
Lolly- Aaye haaye mere Mahaan ji..ye hui na baat..par hume do aur actors ki zarurat padegi aapke Mummy-Papa ke role ke liye.
Mahaan- Unka intezaam mai kar lunga.
Lolly- Thik hai phir mai phone rakhti hoon baad mei baat karti hoon..byee.
Mahaan- Ok bye..

Lolly comes to Dolly after finishing the call.

Lolly- Haan toh tera kaam ho gaya.
Dolly- Kaisa kaam.

Lolly tells her conversation with Mahaan to her and what she has to do.

Lolly- Ab teri wo khadus Nani khud ye rishta todengi.
Dolly- Par agar Nani ko pata chal gaya toh?
Lolly- Tu tension mat le kuch nahi hoga..bas jaise maine kaha hai waise hi karna..theek hai?
Dolly- Koshish karenge.
Lolly- Koshish bhi chalegi warna Nani ko pakka shaq ho jayega.
Dolly- Hmm..
Lolly- Chal ab mai chalti hoon..tera ghar bhi aane wala hai..byee and best of luck.
Dolly- Bye.

Then they waited for two days so that Nani doesn't get suspicious.
Flashback ends.

After sometime the other person comes out and goes to meet Pandit ji.

O.P- Dhanyawaad Pandit ji..agar aap madad nahi karte toh Jagdambe toh Dolly ki shaadi karwa kar hi maanti.
Pandit- Dhanyewaad ki kya baat hai Panna Lal ji..ye toh humara farz tha..hum bhi nahi chahenge ki kisi ke marzi ke khilaaf uski shaadi ho..
Nana- Kaash ki Jagdambe bhi aapki tarah sochti..acha ab mai chalta hoon..Namaste.
Pandit- Ji namaste.

When Nana turns, Dolly gets shocked seeing him there while Lolly and Mahaan were smiling at him.

Dolly- Nana ji?
Lolly- Haan Nana ji..shock ho gai na?
Dolly- Par..Nana ji ko kaise pata chala??

Nana comes to them.

Nana- Mai batata hoon..tumhe ghar bhejne ke baad..Lolly mujhse milne aai thi dukaan par aur usne mujhr apna pura plan bataya aur kaha ki mujhe Pandit ji se baat karni hogi iss natak ke liye.
Dolly- Par wo toh hum bhi kar sakte the na?
Lolly- Kar sakte the..par tere uss awara bhai ka koi bharosa nahi hai..agar phir aakar tapak padta uss din ki tarah toh saara plan flop ho jaata isliye maine Nana ji ki madad li..kyunki yahi ek samajhdaar hai uss ghar mei aur tujhe apna maante hain.

Dolly looks Nana ji thankfully and Nana caress her head lovingly.

Dolly- Matlab aap bhi kal natak hi kar rahe the?
Nana-Haan..warna mai tumhari Nani ke kehne par chup ho jaun aisa kabhi hua hai?..Dolly nodes her head in negative..Par Lolly beta ek baat samajh nahi aai mujhe.
Lolly- Kya Nana ji?
Nani- Iss baar toh tumne nakli rishta bhej diya..par agli baar kya karogi? Agar sach mei koi rishta aa gaya toh?
Lolly- Uske baare mei bhi soch liya hai maine..aapko Pandit ji se keh kar Dolly ki photograph unn rishte wale photograph se nikalwani hogi kyunki agar photograph hi nahi hogi toh koi rishta kaise aayega?
Nana- Aur agar Jagdambe ko shaq ho gaya toh?
Lolly- Toh Pandit ji keh denge ki jaisa rishta Nani chahti hai waisa rishta dhundne mei waqt lag raha hai.
Mahaan- Wah..Lolly ji aapka jawaab nahi..kya dimag lagaya hai.
Nana- Haan Mahaan beta theek keh rahe ho tum..turns to Lolly..Lolly beta tum Dolly ki sachi dost ho..aaj kal kahan dekhne ko milti hai aisi dosti..Dolly sach mei bahot khush naseeb hai jo use tum jaisi dost mili hai..humesha aise hi rehna.
Lolly- Ab kya kare Nana ji..ye itni bholi hai toh mujhe hi iske liye itna dimaag daudana padta hai warna ye toh bas muh sil kar khadi rehti hai Nani ke saamne..ji nani ji nani karti hui..

All three laughs except Dolly.

Nana- Theek hai beta..ab mai chalta hoon aur Pandit ji se bhi baat kar lunga.
Lolly- Theek hai Nana ji.

After Nana leaves Dolly hugs Lolly thanking her with moist eyes.

Lolly- Ab senti mat ho..mujhe ye aansu nahi treat chahiye..wiping her tears.
Dolly- Treat??
Lolly- Tera rishta tootne ki khushi mei..and laughs.
Dolly- Theek hai..hum parso dete hain.
Lolly- Parso nahi kal chahiye mujhe..
Dolly- Par kal toh Sunday hai na.
Lolly- Tabhi toh kal maangi hai..bol haan ya na?
Dolly (thinks for a while)- Ok..
Lolly- Ye hui na baat..chal ab ghar chalte hain.
Mahaan- Arey mai bhi hoon yahan.
Lolly- Haan..toh aap bhi apne ghar jao na..kal aapko wapas jaana hai na Mumbai?
Mahaan- Haan..thik hai mai bhi chalta hoon bye.
Lolly- Byee.

Delhi, Chautala House
Ketaki- Bhai jaldi chalo hum late ho rahe hain..train chhoot jayegi.
Chintu- Oye..shor machana bandh kar abhi jaane mei bahot time hai..subah se pura ghar sar par utha rakha hai..ab chup-chap aakar breakfast kar.
Ketaki (pouts & goes to dining)- Bhai..aap na bilkul bore ho..aapko toh koi excitement hi nahi hai trip par jaane ki..isse acha toh mai apne friends ke saath hi chali jaati par aapne jaane hi nahi diya.
Chintu- Oye..ek hi baat ko lekar kyu baith jaati hai tu baar-baar..mujhe ghumne ke saath-saath office ke kaam par bhi dhyaan dena hota hai..
Ketaki- Ab aaye na aap main point par..aapko apne kaam ki chinta ho rahi hai par apni ek lauti behen ki khushi ki koi parwah nahi hai.
Chintu- Hmm..waise tu sach hi keh rahi hai mujhe mera kaam hi zyada pyaara hai..socho bechara mera kaam itne din mere bina kaise rahega..
Ketaki- Haww..bhai kitne bure ho aap..
Chintu- Le ab sach kaha toh mai bura ho gaya.
Ketaki- Aap mujhse badla le rahe ho na?
Chintu- Kaisa badla?
Ketaki- Uss din shopping mei pareshaan karne ke liye.
Chintu- Arey wah..itni budhu nahi hai tu..smart hai meri tarah.
Ketaki- Matlab mera guess sahi hai?
Chintu- Yes..har baar tu hi kyu pareshaan kare mujhe..mujhe bhi mauka milna chahiye.
Ketaki- Hmphmp..he shoves the bread slice in her mouth.
Chintu- No more baaten..chup-chap breakfast finish karo.

After few hours, they moves to railway station.
On reaching the station, they sits on the bench and waits for the train to arrive.

Ketaki- Uff..kitni der se baithe hain hum..kab aayegi ye train?
Chintu- Sabr rakh..aati hi hogi..tab tak ye paani pi aur shaant ho ja.
Ketaki- Paani nahi mujhe juice pina hai.
Chintu- Acha theek hai mai lekar aata hoon..tu yahi rehna kahin jaana mat.
Ketaki- Ok.

After Chintu was gone, a gang of boys who was staring her from a long time comes and stands near her bench.
One of them tries to touch her shoulder, Ketaki gets suspicious and turns to them. They turns their head on seeing her turning. She shrugs her thoughts and again turns other side shifting a bit on the bench.
Now, that boy sits beside her and leans on her. Ketaki immediately first stamps on his feet and then slaps him hard.
Till then Chintu was also back and he also beats the boy..boys gang gets scared and was going to run but the ladies present there gets hold of them and starts beating them.

One of the lady's husband called the police. Police comes and arrests them all for eavsteasing a girl.
Till then train also arrived, they picks their luggage and settles in their coach.
Till now Ketaki was masking a brave face but after settling in her coach she hugs Chintu and starts crying bitterly.

Chintu (consoles her)- Bas..kuch nahi hua bacha..chup ho ja..

But she was not listening and keeps crying. Chintu was also feeling ashamed on not being with her when she needed him as well as feeling bad on seeing her tears. He tries to cheer her up.

Chintu- Arey kitna royegi yaar baadh aa jayegi train mein..mai toh swim kar lunga par apna sochle tu doob jayegi..
Ketaki- Bhai..
Chintu- Kya bhai? Pehle toh jhansi ki rani ki tarah unhe sabak sikhaya aur ab yahan bheegi billi bankar ro rahi hai..

On remembering them she again starts crying. Chintu cups her face and make her look at him.

Chintu- Bas bahot ho gaya ye rona-dhona..ab meri baat dhyaan se sun..tune jo bhi kiya bilkul theek kiya..uske liye guilty feel karne ki koi zarurat nahi hai..aur tu kyu ro rahi hai rona toh ladko ko chahiye..galti teri nahi sabse badi galti toh unke parents ki hai jinhone paida toh kar diya par ladkiyon ki izzat karna nahi sikhaya..aur ab mujhse ek promise kar.
Ketaki- Kya??
Chintu- Ki agar future mein phir kabhi aise hua tere ya kisi aur ke saath toh tu aise hi bravely uss situation ka saamna karegi aur baad mei aise royegi nahi..kyunki tu toh bas hasti khilkhilati hui aur mujhe pareshaan karti hui hi achi lagti hai..ye rona-dhona teri jhansi ki rani image ko suit nahi karta.
Ketaki- Bhai..mai koshish karungi.
Chintu- Koshish nahi promise kar.
Ketaki (hesitatingly)- Promise.
Chintu- Ye hui na Ms.Tsunami Chautala wali baat..ye le ab apna juice pi aur chill maar..because..
Ketaki- Jo lega Ketu se panga, Ketu maregi use danda..and both laughs.
Chintu- Aise hi hasti raha kar.

After one and half hours, they reach the Mathura and Ketaki gets surprised on seeing the persons there.


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Originally posted by: --Divya--


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