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Posted: 9 years ago

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Nice teaser...update soon...Thankx for pm

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musicismylife

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Posted: 9 years ago

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HEY!
Just started reading your story. LOVING IT!
The storyline is really intriguing.
Chapter 11 was just soo goood! Really touching update.
Awesome story dear..

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musicismylife

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Yaar such an emotional chapter.. (chapter 21 I)
I'm in tears. Seriously they had such a beautiful relationship and to see it breaking is breaking my heart :'(
You really did bring out the emotions in the story beautifully :)

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madhu1210

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Just started reading the story..

Read first 5 chapters..

Quite interesting start...

Khushi is really a sankadevi. Thr way she is blabbering after knowing her life is in danger shows her innocent soul n pure heart too...

Wow Arnav is police officer...

Chap 3- nice POV of Arnav...

The way he is protecting khushi for past few months... n he tealised how innocent she is..

He is so right her heart is full of love for everyone..

Chap 4 khushi's pov is too good...

Is sheetal really good... khushi really has gold heart she believe in people so easily...

How easily arnav n khushi can read each other very mice...

The hurt khushi felt seeing Sheetal near to Arnav n but the relief seeing Arnav's blank face towards sheetal wow...

Arnav didny judge her n understood her fear n he is going to stay there..

Wow too good

Chap 5...

Too good khushi understood Arnav so well. His pain behind his anger.

He got her his home to protect her..

He got clothes n other things for also. Khushi is right indeed he is good in everything.

Does he has a past? Why dadi is talking like this.

Chap 6- wow angry Arnav was too strong... the way he shut dadi was too good..

How can dadi use these words to khushi...

Poor khushi unnecessary heard all these...

Arnav came n got her food.. he care for her...

2 stuborn people are together😊

Chap 7- wow khushi. Knew he didnt eat n made sure he ate.. nice both of themfed each other..

Khushi's bukkering when she is tensed shows how innocent she is..

The way she spoke to Arnav about her family n then she spoke about his n dadi's relation without knoeing anything brought ASR..

Oh god he said do much to her...

Chap 8 - nice pov of Arnav..

He is owner of AR.. wow what happen in his past that made him like this...

Now he is regretting what he said to khushi..

So is he going to apologies?

You will hear from me more as n when i read further chapters...

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madhu1210

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Chap 9 - very nice..

Khushi is really so innocent the eay she thought it was her mistske n she was ready to apologies..

When she saw Arnav came in room she said sorry , arnav i gues didnt expect it.. he was suppose to say sorry n was struggling to say here khusji said it n the way she behave not eating properly n denied jalibies..

Like arnav's deal he understood what khushi is doing.. finally he said sorry to khushi..

Chap 10 -

Wow Arnav's sorry n those words not only help khushi become nirmal byt help her self image...

Wow ASR is awesome he visit office n check on employess n his face is AKash to the world..

Khushi is already started on the deal

HP told her few things about Arnav that made her sad n she can feel his pain..

The connection is growing

Chap 10- wow khushi cook the dinner n it was similar to what Arnav's mom used to make for him..

So much emotions were running in Arnav's mind.. his tear made khushi distrub..

Wow Ratna ma is their connection..his mother nuture khushi when khushi was alone.. noon she has a beautiful heart..

Arnav dhared with khushi his mother is no more.. they cried together for their loss..

The connection grew more stronger..

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madhu1210

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Chap 12 part 1 n 2..

Mind blowing...

Arnav finally found the right word to console khushi .

Khushi is really sankadevi now its sinking in her that he is Ratna maa's son...

Loved tge way she acts so mature at the same time the way she understood that he had gone through hurt, pain m betrayal. Her observation is so true. Arnav do care n protect his loved ones n hide himself behind ASR... nice proposition by khushi..

Arnav is content to see her living to her name.. n his determination to protect her too good..

She is special afterall she is his maa's khushi..

Dadi is so bad... the way she use those words to khushi..

Khushi's fight to leave n thinking about Arnav shows how selfless she is..

HP too good told Arnav what dadi did..

Arnav is so fast to act.. khushi felt him..

Chap 13...

Wow Arnav is really supwr fast no wonder he is the best . Acted fast , think fast..

Aman's house is safe... loved his fear n care for khushi...

Khushi responded to his touch wow.

..sheetal seems to bring trouble for arshi in future due to her jealousy..

Like the way Arnav told sheetal to give him n khushi privacy to talk. Loved his way to concey the point

Chap 14...

Loved every word of it...

Arnav's anger, fear, pain n hurt...

Khushi's determination to make Arnav understand..

Loved the way she said what she feels n how much she trust him...

Arnav was right ehen he said its all lame .. how can she break the friendship...

Loved the way she hold him n not let him go n not let self deprive himself...

Showed her faith in him...

The way Arnav took the promise from her was beautifful.. wirh this promise their bond got more stronger

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madhu1210

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Chap 15-

Oh god sheetal is jealous to see arnav khushi together..

Khushi isfelling possessive towards Arnav too good ..

Nice act by khushi to save Arnav fighting with dadi.. dadi is not worth for it..

Arnav realise khushi fooled him n now saying sorry wow Arnav mood lifted seeinv her this way..

Truely happiness is khushi..

Wiw they accidentally fall n kiss

Chap 16 amazing..

Both of them fighting with their feelings...

Thank god Arnav didnt go for the drive..insteadchoose to sit near the pool with his plants.. khushii understood his need to be alone..

Loved the routine they tried to bring...

Wow Arnav get her fav food everyday for her n khushi gives big hug wirh a smile..

Dadi couldnt utter a work to khushi thanks to Arnav...

Chap 17-...

Bitting my nails.. whole house os surrounded by goons..

Thank god khushi rushed to Arnav n told him about those blank calls

Chap 18...

Arnav's quick tjinking naction were awesome...

The way khushi followed his instructio too good..

Wow hidden passage from wardrobe too good..

Only our sankadevi can have this kind of talk when her life is in danger..Arnav said it right unbelieveable...

Chap 19..

Wow penthpuse in AR building.. that is connected with secret tunnel to RM..

Arnav's finger print require to enter..

From his cabin he can look everyone in his office.. wow thats ASR...

Only Akash can come that too with Arnav's permission..

Loved the way he arranged everything for khushi n himself..

Img khushi's question took wrong turn Arnav's hurt n anger n he misunderstood her.

Chap 20...very nice.. Arnav is so much hurt he became fire breathing dragon for whole AR employee..

The way he has been fighting with his thoughts.. but still he remembered khushi is alone..

Wow the way he took care of sick khusji was awesome...

He lay with khushi to protect her.. but he dint realise how much it healed khushi

Chap 21- part 1...

The heaven they both felt was nuce but both ready to deny...

Khushi's trust on Arnav was amazing but Arnav is not ready to believe any more..

But his words hurt her more.. loved her determunatio. To make sure he ate..

Both of them bleeding..

Due to misundetstaing of words

Chap 22

Arnav's brain indeed is sharp ..aman said it right the way Arnav saw it with different angel..

But why did he tell Akash to search for same when Aman is doing???

Khushi's food aroma made him relax.. wow he didnt left for AR again..

Loved the khushi spoke her trust on him..

My god you are amazing the way in hindi you wrote khushi's talking to Arnav thinking he is asleep..

Itni shudha hindi wow...

Arnav listened it all..

Loved their reunion...

Simply loved it

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