SANDHIR & VIDARTH(dark+mature)FF-DARK PARADISE..! UPDATED ON 11th - Page 2

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Mohini

@Mahi2012

IF-Sizzlerz

Posted: 9 years ago

#11

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Sry 4 late...

K dis update ws really thrilling.
Actually i dnt hv proper word.
Actually update ws really sensual n sizzling. ☺️
Specially sandhir game...
Bt 4 grls it ws torture.
So i feel a bit sorrow 4 them.

K so sanyu n vidz r cousins.
N sanyu iz trapped along wid vidz.
Bt both grlz lv each othr truely

M sure that plane guy iz rd only.
Omg they kissed. 😳😳😳
Aww!! their cute fi8s.
Lolwa!!! kiss ka action replay kar k bhi dekh liya. 🤣 🤣
Evn air hostess ws tored oftheir tom n jerry fi8s. 🤣

N i dnt thnk dat vidz hs used parth 4 money only.

Lets see wht vl hpn!!

Waiting 4 d nxt part.
continue soon.

Love,
Mahi ❤️

Edited by Mahi2012 - 9 years ago

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Sanya Goel

@CrazyKupKakes

IF-Sizzlerz

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Oh god it was such a long update

It took me a whole 20 mins to read it

But trust me give us long upadtes

We love them 😆

I would just like to say u both r brilliant writers 👏

Janu u portrayed the sandhir part so well

But it was hard imagining them so dark and

Specially rd so harsh 😲

And ash

Oh gosh !!

No words yr

That vidharth part is something which was worth a read

I guess i am soon gonna start liking vidharth like sandhir 😆

But must say u both r doing a fabulous job

And btw that plane wla person must have been rd

And what happned parth 😕

And moreover why r paran acting like beasts 😲

So many questions lingering in my mind 🥱

But mind wala blowing update gals !!

Keep writing

Stay beautiful !!

Update asap

Thnx for the pm janu

Love ya both <3

Edited by Sagl - 9 years ago

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Anushka Mukherjee

@2019_AnushkaM

IF-Rockerz

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

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omg you update it at last

it was so so long part yaar

its superb awesome lovely lovely

lovely lovely lovely lovely lovely

amazing fab outstanding lovely update

paran was just monster... they are really horrible

poor sanyu and vidh felling very bad for them

parth torture vidhs so much...

virath fb was really nice they love each other so much

but vidh ki kihuyi kisi galti ki inko itni bari punishment ...

its to much really bad...

sanyu fb was really amazing and superb

i think the boy was Rd...

sandhir fight superb and they kissed each other... obhi twice...

Rd also tortured sanyu so much poor sanyu

she was so scared...

sandhir do or die game just horrible

Rd felt bad for sanyu interesting very interesting

Rd confused because of sanyu's behavior...

sanyu was behaving very very strange

and last line vidushi pregnant?? interesting😕

really outstanding update lovely

you describe everything amazingly👏

very very nice😊. keep it up.👍🏼

love it. update asap.😃

Edited by sudipto-69 - 9 years ago

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shivangi

@daringdarlo

Goldie

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

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Amazing update..
The person in the flight must be Randhir... I feel it was him.
I also feel Vidushi has done something wrong...for which sanyukta is also paying...
Parth n Randhir r so evil...
N WAT???? VIDUSHI PREGNANT?????
update soon..Edited by daringdarlo - 9 years ago

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Tamanna

@Angel__Tamanna

IF-Rockerz

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

resss

Unress ...
firstly to sry for unreserving so late ...
actually m quite bhulakad typs ... so bhool gyi thi ...
acha hua apne yaad dila dia ...

coming on update ...
it was awsm ...
But ssly wanted so know k paran aise q kar rhe h ...
& vidushi pregnent 😲

& update was soo long ..
isliye itna inrest bangya tha padhne mein k man kar raha tha abhi mil jaye puri story 😃
plz update asap
Edited by Angel__Tamanna - 9 years ago

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Rashi Bhargava

@newmoon18

IF-Sizzlerz

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Finally u updated yr
The update was superb
I so luved it

Beautifully wriiten
I luv ur writing skills

It was super long n I lyk long updates

Finally very bad for vids n sanyu
Paran r monster
They r kill them so harsh n rude
Sanyu fb was superb
I think dat stronger is none other than rd
They kissed twice n fighter too

That do r die game was horrible
Sanyu was so vulnerable n helpless
She was doing whatever rd saying
Rd confused with her behaviour

Rd felt pain in his heart seeing sanyu lyk in dat condition

Vidharth shower scene was hot yr

Last Lyn was shocking
Vids pregnant
Is she lying r what
What is going in her mind
Jo b h I m enjoying it a lot

Wtng for next
Updte soon

Luv u
Keep smiling

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1009596

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

It was superb...loved this ff

Do update soon!

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chinkushi

@chinkushi

Newbie

Posted: 9 years ago

#18

AREY IM FEELING papam for sanyu!!
i dont want to predict the story cuz im very bad at it so plz update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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don girls

@don girls

IF-Rockerz

Posted: 9 years ago

#19

OMG
Such a long update
Loved it
Sandhir parts were fab
Nice
Update soon

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Nitra

@Nitra

Senior Member

Posted: 9 years ago

#20

Awsm part oh god poor sanyu and vidhu and the games scary...rd is feeling sanyu's pain really? Vidu pregnant ???? Whattt cant wait for next part plzzz update asap...

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