Arshi FF: Fighting Fate (TVK 2) Thread 8 - Epilogue Up on Pg 24 [12.6] - Page 28

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Posted: 10 years ago
Simply wonderful , posy B&W n everything!
It's been a wonderful journey !
I want you to write some light hearted story plz!!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
hi Deepthi..

after reading the epilouge.. i feel very emotional at the end.. it was a nostalgic moment for me, it was like i was bidding good bye to IPK once again & that moment is very hard for me even now..

& coming to an update it was PERFECT & very BEAUTIFUL part.. all the moment with their family was special. once Arnav had a dream of having all the kids & them lying under a Moon was came true..
& in the end you have showed which was the thing remain, was Arnav allowed Khushi to feed him. that was such a beautiful & a very touchy moment for me..
Thank u for writing heart touching story, i m always going to remember this journey of our beloved Arshi..
hope to see u soon with another mindblowing story of Arshi..
& pls add me to ur buddy list as well, will be glad to be part of ur new journey from start..

Thank you..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Sorry for commenting late...
We'll deserved apt epilogue... This is by far the best, engaging story that I have read so far ...
It's jus grows on u...
Ur b&w and posy... Have made a everlasting on me... Will always cherish them...

Thanks for sharing ur work with us...
Looking forward to ur next work
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Posted: 10 years ago

Arnav and Khushi's journey in here is tremendously difficult in their each and phase. Despite of what they went through in their life.. they stood strong and and they supported each other. There is no Khushi without Arnav and there is no Arnav without Khushi. They are one soul with two bodies.


When Ashu called Arnav daddy,... I literally got goosebumps. I felt very emotional just like I heard her saying it in front of my eyes. The bond between them is beautiful.


Is he serious.. does he really thought it will be a piece of cake to handle pregnant Khushi. Bechara.. he didn't know that every pregnancy is different. But I don't worry too much about it.. because he loves her so much.. he handled the worse of her.. in that sense .. yes it is really a piece of cake for him.


Khushi tolerated the pain for him. She doesn't want him to miss any of the feeling he is supposed to experience. And he was there for her at right time. How could we define this love. How could we define this marriage. How could we define this relation.


Wow Pari Singh Raizada.. how beautiful she is in my imagination..and I love this daddy Arnav. He is so proud seeing his daughter.


She is Your girl, Arnav! Its All YOU in her! couldn't stop my tears while reading this line Deepu. How much she might wished for a girl for him which is completely him.


How do you get these ideas Deepu... Elephant dance.. are you serious.. I couldn't stop rofling.

Deepu while I was reading this part.. I wanted to know.. how Arnav felt when Pari called him Dada for the first time. But when I continued reading the story I realized that feeling is nothing different for Arnav when Ashu and Rahul called him Daddy for the first time.


Finally Arnav came to know about the diary.. But the respect he gave to her words is marvelous.


Thank you for preserving her every tear and showing me the glimpse of what she had gone through penning down. But its about time, I take charge of her everything, being her everything.


How could anyone define this man. How could anyone praise this man. He is just perfect dammittt...


Can you feed me Khushi? Wow what a timing to ask her this... He didn't let anyone feed him until now.. He gave that chance to make her happy.. to give 100% of him to her while he expects 100% from her ..


When his wife could make him "her everything", it would be unfair to restrict her from becoming his in all senses. Tonight she has owned him completely, wiping away years of inhibitions.


I have no words to describe how these lines touched me. His hesitation to eat from her hands. She embracing his inhibition and making him completely hers. You described very well Deepu.


How far have we come Posy? His voice filled with strange sense of glory.


Literally this line made me speechless. It brought all the memories of TVK and FF. It made me realize how far I came, since I started reading TVK.


What a perfect ending for this story...


You won't believe Deepu.. every time I refer TVK and FF as story ... I will think twice.. because I never thought this as a story. It is very close to me.


The more difficult it is to reach your destination, the more you'll remember the journey...


How perfect this quote suited for the epilogue. Yes,.. it is indeed difficult to reach the destination. And of course we do remember each and every path we travelled, each and every turn we turned, each and every hurdle we crossed with you. It is really an amazing journey. An inspirational journey. An outstanding journey.


Every story has to reach its end. But reality always will have a new beginning. I think they started their new beginning without any inhibitions and like a full family.


I don't want to repeat the same praises about your tremendous writing skills. You prove yourself that you are indeed amazing with each and every line you write. Except saying thanks again for taking all of us in this wonderful journey along with you.

It's hard to believe that this journey reached it's destination.


Along with you , there is one more person I should thank for this amazing experience. It is Di. I know how much she supported you when you needed her. I know how important part she took to make this journey beautiful.


Di... Thank you so much for being with Deepu and me.


I Love you both...


I would like to dedicate one song for Arshi.

[youtube]www.youtube.com/watch?v=A0J7b4tI5J0[/youtube]
Edited by lovedrops - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
its been a year long journey and must say have enjoyed reading it. you are an amazing writer and a great story teller u made me fall in love with the characters and the plot was superb. gonna miss the updates but am sure u ll bring something new very soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
'HEROIC' is the word that would put her challenging, tiring, difficult and emotionally disturbing journey into a single word and 'HERO' is her to have taken and braced everything in her stride and also emerge victorious. For a girl who was independently supporting her family, to a woman who was forced into a marriage, to a wife who fell in love with her husband, to a lady who was raped, to a loner who was forced to stay away from her husband, to a single mother who lost her child, to a victim suffering from depression, to a role model supporting thousands of victims, to a lover basking and being healed in her husband's presence, to a mother who has everything she ever dreamt for Khushi has come a long way. I salute the woman in her and wish no one goes through what she had to go through.

'HEROIC' is the word that would put his pitiful, challenging, difficult and emotionally disturbing journey into a single word and 'HERO' is him to have taken and braced everything in his stride and also emerge victorious. From a child disowned and thrown onto the streets, to a teenager being hated, to a man managing his business, to a lover falling in love with his wife, to a brother being stabbed and killed by his own brother, to a loner forced to live without his wife, to a husband healing and loving his tormented wife, to a father looking after his kids lovingly; Arnav has come a long way. I salute the the husband, the father, the entrepreneur and the human being in him.

Together they have come so far. Their life together has been 'AN UNSTAINED PURITY' and their love unconditional. Every character in this fiction has been an inspiration.

My favourite scenes would be Khushi feeding Arnav, the moment when Pari was born and obviously Khushi moving her hair to a side before resting her head on his shoulders.
I have thoroughly enjoyed reading this fiction and more than anything I have loved living this fiction.
Kudos to the writer in you!
Take a bow Deepa! 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
congrats on the huge success of your story
surely gonna miss reading it
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome story👏👏..beautiful update!!!! loved it completely!!!
So sad that it ended so quickly...will miss it..😭
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Posted: 10 years ago
Beautiful chapter..
Eqgerly waiting for you in your next story :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
beautiful end to the beautiful story ...

hats off to you for writing such a beautiful story

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