NEW OS/SS : Chalte Chalte LAST PART on Page 35 *27-11-2014* - Page 14

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Posted: 9 years ago
Raya enjoyed the festivals
but seems Priya is feeling jealous seeing so many girls around her husband n Ram also enjoying the newly found emotion of his wife.
Aww she has strain in her ankle but he is near to her. Priya is thinking about Ram and his caring nature.
Continue soon and thanx for the pm..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome 
priya is J ğŸ˜† 
loved it 
thanks for pm 
sorry for late reply 

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Posted: 9 years ago

Advance main sorry bcoz this is Uneditted Part so sorry for mistakes



Recap :



Ram open his eyes and sit back on bed he turns his side priya sleeping

Ram goes near priya face caresses priya's hair she smiles in sleep and Ram said slowly priya i love you i love you so much main nahi dekh sakta tumhe kisi or ki baaho main...

he come out of bed open his diary which he kept always with him and write...


 "Woh raat dard aur sitam ki raat hogi,
Jis raat rukhsat unki baraat hogi,
Uth jata hu main ye sochkar neend se aksar,
Ke  ek ghair ki baaho me meri sari kayanat hogi"




PART 8




Ram continue writing his diary its 6 in the morning..


priya woke up and saw ram sitting in on couch and writing something...


she getup and goes near him, ram was so engrossed in Diary  he ddnt  notice priya


priya : kya kar rahe hai aap subh subh ??


Ram shockly close his dairy and said nahi to kuch nahi kar kraha...and he try to hide his dairy behind
him...


priya notice this and said aap ye kya chupa rahe hai...


with his hand behind his back kuch bhi to nahi hai...


are ye aapke harho me dikh raha hai mujhe...
now ram caught he said meri diary hai bahut dino se kuch likha nahi tha or nind  khul gayi thi to likh raha tha...
Priya : kya aap bhi diary likhte ho...
Ram : aap bhi matlab tum bhi ??
Priya : haa kabhi kabhi...
Ram : good very good he getup and goes near his bag and put diary inside bag...
priya just saw him and said areaapne bataya nahi aap kya likh rahe the ???
ram : bad manners priya kisi ki diary ke baare me puchna...
Priya : comeon Ram pucha hai bus padi nahi hai...
Ram : fir bhi tum batao tum apni diary me kya likhti ho fir main bataunga...
Priya : Ye kya baat huyi Pehle question maine kiya
Ram : Batana ho to batao warna rahne do
Priya : ahhh main main apni diary main apni daily life ke baare main or kuch articles ke notes
...ab aap batayiye
Ram :main Poems likhta hu...
Priya : watt r u a poet too??
Ram scratching his temple yes kind off..
Priya : I cant believe U r Businessman cum Painter Cum Poet wow can i read ur poems pplz???

Ram : sorry priya but main apni poems tumhe padne nahi dunga
Priya : hawww padne nahi dunga matlab??
Ram : matlab main khud tumhe suna dunga lekin padne nahi dunga...
Priya : to suna dijiye naa ??
Ram : abhi nahi sahi time aane pe...
Priya : sahi time or kab aaega sahi time  i mean ab hamare sath rahne ka time hi kitna and
she stopped loking at ram ram too look her...both share a eyelock...
their moment disturb by knock on door...
priya and ram come to reality ram goes to washroom and priya to open door
man : Mam wat would u like for breakfast
priya order breakfast in time ram came from washroom and without saying single word
priya goes to washroom...
After half hours both eating BF in awkwardness...
finally ram brek the silence and said Priya sahi kaha tumne Time to jyada hai nahi to main tumhe kuch poem jab tak saath me hai hum jab tak roj  suna dunga  Kya kahti ho...

Priya just noded...
ram : accha ab theek ho to hum chale wapas...
priya : haa theek hu chalte hai...
After  1 hour both Left for Granada City again...
In car :
Priya : Ram ek baat puchu...
Ram : Ek kyu 2 pucho...


Priya smiles and think for sometime and said Rahne dijiye .


Ram : Are ek dum se kya hua Pucho na..


Priya : hmmm hmmm ram aapko kisi ne kaha ki aap bahut acche ho...


Ram with blush  Ye puch rahi ho ki baat rah ho...
Priya : smiles Bata rahi ho...
Ram : accha to with slowly voice Ek dum se kyu bola tumne ye...
Priya : bus kuch soch rahi thi...again blushing to socha aapko ye bol du...
Ram : or wo kya soch rahi thi tum ye nahi bataogi...
Priya : yahi ki kaise AAP or main mile fir shadi huyi or maine aapko Hamari 1st night pe sab kuch bataya lekin aapne gussa hone ki jagah mujhe support kiya  koi or hota to pata nahi kya karta mere sath...Sab Rishte naato ko daav pe rakhkar Aap yaha mujhe laaye hai ...u r truly a gentlemen ...

Ram : Thank u for this but maine kahi Pada hai
"JAB KOI PYAR MAIN HOTA HAI NA TO KUCH BHI SAHI GALAT NAHI HOTA"


Tum bhi Pyar main ho aur main bhi to kuch rishte naate kuch galat nahi hai itna mat socho...

Priya : Hmmm Sahi Kaha ek baat or puchu...
Ram : abhi or kuch puchna rah gaya hai??
Priya smiles and said aapne hi kaha tha 2 baate pucho...
Ram laugh and said haa pucho...
Priya : Kya mere jaane ke baad bhi aap mujhse she stopped for a second and said  u knw wat i mean..
Ram : haa bilkul tumahre jane ke baad bhi u knw wat i mean...
Priya turn her side and after 5 min she said : mere jaane ke baad aap india or main pata nahi Ronit ke sath kaha Kitne dur dur rahenge naa
Ram : wo to hum abhi bhi hai priya...
hearing this tears come priya's eyes priya try to hide from ram turn her side and
just noded her head and said Ram i knw aap thoda to gussa honge naa...
ram caught her and
stop car and said plz nahi priya tumahri koi galti nahi thi maine hi tumhe mouka nhi diya or halat hi ese the main gussa kaise ho sakta hu main tooo...he stopped himself  and goes near her face wipes her tear with his thumbs and  said

     "Gila aap se nahi koi,
      Gila hum apni majbooriyon se karte hain.
      Aap aaj hamare karib naa sahi...

     Mohabbat to hum aapki dooriyon se bhi karte hain..."


with saying this ram start car again

Priya turn into red tomato...she turn her side and smiles...

Ram : r u ok naa

Priya : haa i m ok...

Priya : ram u ll be ok naa

Ram : means ??

Priya : i mean mere Jaane Ke baad u ll be ok naa ???

Ram with his charming smile


                "Kyun Kahte Ho Ki Kuch Behtar Nahi Hota

                 Sach To Ye Hai...  Jaisa Chaho Waisa Nahi Hota.(Looking at Priya)

                     Koi Tumhara Sath Na De To Gum Na Karna...

                       Khud Se Bada Duniya Main Koi Humsafar Nahi Hota."



Priya : hmmm sahi kaha kuch or shayri bhi sunao naa...

Ram : maine kaha tha sahi time aane pe suna dunga...

Priya : par ye sahi time kaise huya???

Ram : tum jo bhi mujhse puch rahi ho according to condition shayri jam rahi hai na
and laugh,,,

Priya hit him on his shoulder...and said kya aap bhi naa...

both laughing and priya said

accha ram promise me one thing hamari dosti huyi rahegi giver her hand aur huya to hum milenge...


Ram give his hand in her hand and said 



"Sitaron Ki Ankho Mein Mahfooj Rakhna.
Badi Der Tak Raat Hi Raat Hogi.
Musafir Hain Hum Bhi Musafir Ho Tum Bhi.
Kisi Mod Par Phir Mulakat Hogi.."




Priya just smile hering this...she staring ram and ram continu his driving
Priya in serious tone Ram kya tum kabhi kisi se Pyar kar paaoge...
ram just saw her she change her gaze and ram answer:




"Ishq Aisa Karo Ki Dhadkan Me Bas Jaaye

Saans Bhi Lo To Khushbu Usi Ki Aaye

Pyaar Ka Nasha Aankhon Pe Chaa Jaaye

Baat Kuch Bhi Na Ho Par Naam Usi Ka Aaye"



She just smile again and said ram mujhe nind aa rahi hai main thodi der so jaau 


ram : itni boring poems sunne ke baad sabko nind hi aati hai and laugh 


priya too laugh and sleep...


After 1 hour 


ram  stopped car Priya opend her eyes and said to ram hum pahuch gaye kya...


ram : nahi ye fuel station hai hamara pani khatam go gaya hai main pani leke aata hu yaha shayd mil jaaye...

priya : theek hai...

ram goes in one shop just front fuel station and after 2 minutes he heard some noice he came out of shop and saw two-three goons having gun in hand and they run and sat one car standing near fuel station...
he runs toward  his cars to check priya when he goes near his cars he shocked and shout

"Priya " "Priya"




Hope u Like IT


Thank You


@m@n





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Posted: 9 years ago
Very nice updated bro
But seriously very nice story good going bro
Thanks for pm
Edited by joemahika - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
interesting update..
pls continue ASAP and thanks fr the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
Very nice part n the way ram narrated the poem was cute n hope Raya r fine n hope priya can see the love of ram
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome.. Been waiting for an update.. Keep writing..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Super dupper part aman
Thanks for pmEdited by krunalidivecha - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wonderful...
Please continue soon..
Thanks for PM😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb update!!
Love the poems!!!
Plz continue soon and thanks 4 pm!!