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Originally posted by: cryscaralagh
I am loving the story so far. And I am going to enumerate some points which really stood out for me, rather than telling you over the phone as well :)
1. I love how this answers a big "WHAT IF" . Like, I love how you brought in Aman actually checking the bags and taking them in custody. And its nice how it ties into the story as well.2. I love this stronger Paro. While it isnt very obvious, you can see her strength of character, her moral compass and selfless nature. And in a way, we also see her blossom as Rudra also will.3. Muhahah. I love how Rudra is indebted to Paro for his life, his conflict with that, and yet an inner vulnerability he shall broach soon.You want this reminds me off : Remember the OUAT epi where Emma & Hook travel back in time, and they see SnowIng falling in love , albeit in a different way. This is like that. The pull of fate for PaRud will always bring them together, and they shall have the soulmate love.As I already mentioned, I am so eager to see what goes next and am excited to see what plan is running in Rudra's mind. I dont know why but I see the 17th Jan episode popping up where Rudra takes Paro back to see her family, and they disown her. ( I can so imagine her in that jodha and the villagers insulting her, and he standing up for her). I shall just shut up.I am so happy you're writing this! And this makes me fall in love with PaRud all over again.
Crys I got the idea from Snowing and OUAT...no matter what and however their first meeting is, they will find each other like PaRud as they're soulmates <3
Lol you guessed it right next part will have alot of parallels to 17th jan
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